DrgnMstr posted a comment on Friday 9th May 2008 10:31am

This is one of my favorite Harry/Pansy pieces. I am really happy with the way you ended this, save for the fact that it should have at the very least an epilogue so that the final loose ends (most of which you commented the author notes) can be tied up. Even though it is obvious where some of them are going, it would be good to have your take on it. And perhaps a bit of showing where Harry's vision of a unified Muggle/Magical world starts? Otherwise, very, very good.

sleep when your dead posted a comment on Tuesday 6th May 2008 6:56pm

love this story are you going to do another harry/pansy because this has been the best one i have read so far

AutumnKatie posted a comment on Sunday 27th April 2008 10:01pm

I just finished reading this story and it was awesome. I have to commend you on your writing and your beta and the rest of your team. I see you are considering a sequel which I'm all for. I've really begun to like the Harry/Pansy pairing because it's so much more interesting than Harry/Ginny and you definitely wrote a great Harry/Pansy story. I will patiently wait for your update.

Kathleen posted a comment on Monday 14th April 2008 9:52pm

Great story! I would never have thought anyone could make a believable Parkinson-Harry match, but I'm learning that anything you write is not only believable, but so believable you can't imagine the story playing out any other way. Thanks for sharing it.

Dark Stallion posted a comment on Wednesday 9th April 2008 10:20am

Was going really well, but I just didn't like the fact that Pansy was sharing Harry with Ginny... The way you keep saying things like 'he wanted to dance with her' etc don't add up with the fact that you imply he only thinks about Pansey. Surely it would have been better to pair Ginny up with someone else, and leave Harry and Pansey to their own relationship,

I only got up to chapter 7, and if it changes then I apologise, but I couldn't that any longer.

Otherwise, your writing is brilliant; your characterisation and description are fantastic, and I was immesnly enjoying the story. However, I'll have to stop there (while I can normally ignore the romance in a story and concentrate on the plot if that aspect fails, this one seems to be centred around their relationships).

Dark-Stallion

blainny posted a comment on Monday 31st March 2008 3:21pm

The story is one of the best i've read. Please let me know when you have Posted the sequel to this story i would like to see everything that happens with the issues, election, ministry post election,school & the future of the group.

darthme1011 posted a comment on Saturday 29th March 2008 8:21pm

Is there Still a sequel in the works or at least slightly planed out.. this i one of my all time favorite HP stories

archdog77 posted a comment on Monday 17th March 2008 12:42pm

excellently done. I hope to see those sequels soon.

elementalmoon posted a comment on Thursday 6th March 2008 10:57am

I love this fic, and really hope that you write a sequel that ties up the Harry/Pansy/Ginny issue. That and seeing Remus get elected and the House Elves freed would be awesome! Great job!

Vilkath posted a comment on Saturday 16th February 2008 7:00pm

Great story, great battle great every thing. Like I said before you put more effort into your Pansy/Harry romance then even the orginal author did any the orginal books. I was glad you eventualy included Ginny but bit sad Daphine sort fadded out of importance. You made her seem like a decent match for Harry, truely interseting and a real friend to Pansy but in the end she got left behind.

The final battle was nice, many stories try to include a lot of people in the fight against Voldemort, having everything from goblins to cenaturs. But this is one the first stories that actualy took the effort to work out the logistics of what every one would do, especialy how far you were going to take the muggle involvement. And ofcourse you had Tonks actualy fight like she was worth something, loved your take on her shape shifting skills to fight better. Most stories paint her out to be a clumbsy goof who is more then likely only tolerated for her spying skills and can't walk 5 feet without tripping. Nice to see a story where she can truely fight.

Vilkath posted a comment on Saturday 16th February 2008 9:54am

I love this story, perhaps one the best romance stories I have ever read in HP fan fiction. Your relationship between Pansy and Harry is more logical, realistic and believable then most the cannon pairings from the books, like Harry/Ginny's sudden true love or Hermonie and Ron's fighting turning into lust as well.

If i have one complaint i kind hoped this would turn into a Harry/Pansy/Ginny and perhaps Daphine fic. You set them up to be all such nice girls who love Harry and like each other enough to be friends. Way more then most multiship or harem stories do. I hope in the future they get together.

dingo75 posted a comment on Wednesday 13th February 2008 12:45pm

Not sure if you're still reading reviews after two years, but that was a great story. Probably a bit much to hope for any additions to this universe, but what the hell, it stands up well on its own. Thanks!

wotmania505 posted a comment on Thursday 31st January 2008 10:11pm

Absolutely amazing story. I honestly had never bothered to look you up as an author, until recently when I saw you and this story mentioned by Regulus on FF.N. I am truly impressed.

Anyways, thank you for writing such an excellent story. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

Aelita posted a comment on Tuesday 29th January 2008 7:50pm

Thank you, now can you tell me when the short stories are coming out, please!

Aberbadger posted a comment on Saturday 12th January 2008 2:06am

Sorry about thedouble posting. Was on my phone and tried a shortcut that didn't work.
what I was trying to say for the second one was; I take it the "sins of the student" doctrine is something along the lines of, the sins of the student being the responsibility of the master - In Harry's and Daphne's case ,their family friend, in Snape's case, Dumbledore is responsible for all of Snape's indiscressions and, according to the council, must be held accountable for them?

Aberbadger posted a comment on Friday 11th January 2008 9:25pm

when are you going to start posting the wkgq vignettes?

drkjester posted a comment on Thursday 10th January 2008 12:30pm

Great story like many others you have done. There is talk at the end of a sequal of sorts. I would still love to see it as you have left so many questions unanswered.

Banner posted a comment on Tuesday 8th January 2008 3:50pm

I've lost track of how many times I've read this story from the beginning - but it's still a delight. Thank you.

hedwig_edwiges posted a comment on Monday 7th January 2008 10:48am

I don't know if someone already asked that or even if you answer that in some list or group, but what Pansy wrote on Mrs.Black's canvas? I read and re-read this story and I always try to imagine what it could be. But you probably have a much better comeback than I ever could think of.

Freddie Lomax posted a comment on Monday 31st December 2007 7:15pm

This was a great story! You have quickly become my favorite FanFic Author. I really enjoy how well you can change your outlook on a character from one story to the next (i.e. Dumbledore is a Doofus in Hope, but incredibly powerful in TMW). I hope you plan to continue the WNGQ story as I found many things unanswered in the story. It is great, but what about the answer to 'Sins of the Student', or does Remus get elected?, and some of the other things in your 'Parting SHot at the end of the story.

Thanks for all your stories!
Freddie
lomax@xamol.com