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Muad'Dib posted a comment on Friday 24th August 2007 10:13pm

Fantastic story, many thanks! You have some sort of ongoing subscription to writing great stories, don't you? I like your open end, writing it out might have made it a tad cliche. Yay for Ginny, she really deserved the happy ending.

pfeil posted a comment on Sunday 19th August 2007 9:53am

That was your first long story? Wow; I'm seriously impressed.

I hope you do continue with some shorts (or longs) of the aftermath. The universe you created really pulled me in.

On a minor, nit-picking note, "And what did that spider mean by ‘mates?" should probably be "And what did that spider mean by ‘mates’?"

Amarin Rose posted a comment on Wednesday 15th August 2007 3:47pm

This was a very interesting, unique story. I liked Pansy's parents, and how they fit so well into the Potters's backstory. I liked the House Elf sideplot, including the other place and the Council. I loved Remus for Minister of Magic, and Molly being where the twins get their prankster natures from. And I am definitely intrigued by the Pansy/Harry/Ginny triangle. If you ever get around to deciding to write that follow-up, I will definitely read it! :)

Markus Gabler posted a comment on Thursday 2nd August 2007 7:11am

Aloah,

this was a very enjoyable tale and I was definitly not able to stop reading until the sudden end (without remarkable breaks).

I noticed you on fanfiction.net with "This means war!" and found your Site searching for part 10, because the way you write fits nearly perfect to my imaginations how a story should be.
Would it be possible for you to send me the "nacked quidditch" via mail, because with the named link it is not reachable.
I would be also very kind, if you could give me the titles of the announced sequels for "White Knight...." because I'm realy curious about your thoughts for the future of Harry, Pansy and Ginny.
BTW, this is the first Harry/Pansy story I've found and I love your way of describeing the "real" Pansy :-)

Kind Regards

Shadow

BTW: English isn't my mother language, so forgive me my bad grammer and spelling, please.

DAMNED posted a comment on Friday 27th July 2007 12:08pm

Will u be doing a follow on

Zane posted a comment on Sunday 22nd July 2007 1:54pm

Very enjoyable.
Finished Deathly Hallows yesterday 'round lunch.
Been looking for somthing nice and AU.

roche posted a comment on Sunday 15th July 2007 8:23am

i liked the story but i didn't like part with implying harrypansyginny in the story woulda pefered just harrypansy

Jannifer posted a comment on Tuesday 10th July 2007 11:01pm

Dear Jeconais!

Recently I have read your fanfic "White Knight, Grey Queen", and I want
to say that it is really great! Thank you very much
for writing it! That fanfic is a great favourite of mine! I never read
fanfic with Pansy/Harry!

Would you mind terribly, if I translate this fic into Russian language
and publish it on hogwartsnet website
(http://www.hogwartsnet.ru/fanf/index2.php)? I will state everywhere
that I am just a translator and you are the author of the fic. Also, all
the additional information (like your email or website) can be
published, if you wish.
Thank you once again for your wonderful work!

Jennifer.
(baccara1988@rambler.ru)

cutecess posted a comment on Sunday 8th July 2007 6:33am

It might be the website mucking stuff up, but Sirius's will seems slightly over paragraphed, if it could be. Also, I don't think you need to put speech marks in every paragraph, just once (or twice, I suppose) for the whole speech. I love this story :)

Hagrid posted a comment on Saturday 16th June 2007 6:35pm

I've lost track of the number of times I've read this story, at least 5 I think, and I like as much now as the first time I read it. From the little things, like Dobby strutting around like Lurch, to a five year long prank by Pansy under a glamour to hide from Draco, you covered it all.

SULEGNA posted a comment on Friday 8th June 2007 7:56am

Kewl i LOVE it so update soon please (when are they gonna they have sex already):(

sblackfan posted a comment on Thursday 7th June 2007 12:16pm

Fantastic story!! Now I need to go look for those short stories that you mentioned :)

morriganscrow posted a comment on Tuesday 5th June 2007 9:15am

Brilliant story!
Everything was perfect - a lovely, believable romance, exciting action, a fabulous supporting cast, sparkling dialogue, a sprinkling of humor, spot-on characterizations - a wonderful whole.
Thank-you so much for such a wonderful read.

jasongill83 posted a comment on Monday 4th June 2007 10:32pm

man! this is an awesome awesome story :D couldn't have been more glad to read it, one of the very best there is!

Nox posted a comment on Thursday 24th May 2007 2:24pm

I was not expecting to but I absolutely loved this fic. Excellent job of taking a insane idea and making it work. This has to be one of my favorite fics now and I read a ton of HP fanfiction. I was rather disappointed at the ending as I wanted to see what would happen with the trio of Harry, Pansy and Ginny as well as the Wizarding World's reaction to their new leader. I sincerely hope there will be a sequel to this as you have more than enough to work with. Until then.

Nox

rune1806 posted a comment on Sunday 20th May 2007 6:38pm

i almost did not read because of the ship howewver i am very glad i did. well writen and different another chapter or two would be great you have me hooked now i need more.

sejones posted a comment on Sunday 20th May 2007 6:22am

It took me a really long time to get around to reading this story. I just couldn't fathom a reasonably realistic relationship between Harry and Pansy, but you made it work. I really enjoyed this story. In your author notes you mentioned the likelyhood of several one-shot spinoffs from this story. Maybe I've missed it, but I think I've read everything else you've posted on this site, and from the descriptions of the stories that are finished but not yet posted, they aren't there either. Are you planning to continue in this universe, cause I'm really interested to find out what you have planned for Harry, Pansy and Ginny. Thanks for sharing your storys with the rest of us.

LoVeBiRd posted a comment on Friday 18th May 2007 12:30am

I love it!! but I really dont think Hinny should be a part of the little romantic thing. I think Harry and Pansy are good together. Other than that it's really good! ciao, LoVeBiRd xx

Dargor posted a comment on Wednesday 16th May 2007 9:10am

You know, this story is more than good- it's damn excellent- and I am serious. It was quite a while since any story owerwhelm me like this, and even longer since I so thoroughly enjoyed a fic on such a... twisted setting as a HP series. Thank You, good Author-san *bows*

Daily Prophet Reporting posted a comment on Wednesday 16th May 2007 12:12am

I know it's a bit redundant when talking about your stories, but this was fun. You produce most excellent grand battle scenes, and this one was different enough from TMW that it was fresh and just as exciting. If fact, I think the elements came together better in this story.

And I think that all comes down to the muggle influence. Apaches? Granades in giants' socks? Cordite as the power Voldemort knows not? Those are not elements you're not going to see in two many fics, but in context they're absolutely hilarious and effective. But the first scene with Tonks transformer fighting was just as clever, and I love the idea of a silly-string cannon.

The greatest coup had to be how you got rid of Draco, though.

He did so love the symphony the blond sang to him as he stuck into his lunch



I bow down to you for coming up with that line. By far, that's the best performance I've seen from Aragog in any fic.

Elsewhere, I was right about your multi-shipping finish. I'm still not certain why you did it, though. You've come a very, very long way from where you were at the start of school when Harry was a moment from proposing and Ginny had accepted her fate. That's not to say you didn't take your time developing the threesome, and I like that it was Pansy who initiates virtually every step in the proccess. But it definitely leaves a cloud of mystery over the finish, and I'm finding myself a bit disappointed I don't know how it plays out because there are so many possibilities -- ranging from tragedy to serious smut.

But, you did show some restraint. For a while I thought you might be moving toward bringing Daphne, Hermione and possibly even Luna into the mix too. Not that I'm complaining about the quad kissing scene, though.

I was a bit disappointed that we couldn't see the election or Harry train the D.A. properly. But, like I said last time, I understand. The scale of this is pretty overwhelming as is (and I'm only reading, not writing), and I know anything else you would have taken on you wouldn't have done halfway. I can only guess how much work this (and your other stories) must have required, and I definitely appreciate it.

So, thanks again for another fun read. I've definitely got Hope high on my list of things to hit in the near future.

-KC