JLH posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 6:10pm

Wow. Love the chapter. The ending especially. Hurry with the next. I need some more Harry Potter.. While HBP was a great book.. it just seemed to leave such an open ending.

brad posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 5:58pm

wow and excellent chapter and the twist at the end was awesome tim. keep up the great wiork cant wait for the last chapter! man am i tired back to sleep for 2 hours then off to work on the graveyard shift! thank you for another wonderful reading experience Tim!

Philipe posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 5:48pm

You known, i've seen people tell you that this chapter was the best, then say that the next one is better.. In my opinion, chpter cannot be consider individual pieces of a stories, they pieces of a puzzle, that when brought together, it creates (in your case) a masterpiece.. That being said, hell of chapter, really envolving, could stop reading to go to the bathroom, a fact that added to your incredible long chapter (noted that i'm in no way, shape or form sayind i don't like, au contrair) creates a certain problem..

I like Moody's reaction, it looked like what i thought he'd do... Ron's foot misplacement problem seem a little extrem, i'll bye the drunk thinghy.. Molly's reaction to Harry explanation i didn't really see the reason for it, but i trust your judgement.. If i can think of anything else i'll review again.. Ah!! Just love a sarcastic Dobby, one of my favorites scenes.. Had me laughing for a long time..

See ya Tim.
Philipe
"Post Scriptum"

dave gerecke posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 5:18pm

WHeee, What a ride!!!
While I was unhappy that Ron made an ass of himself, the way you handled it later was great.
Good to see Harry growing.
dave

redquail posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 4:46pm

This is a great chapter that had me on the edge of my seat wondering if you would get it all in before the end of the chapter. You did in a verry exciting way that make me want to go back to the begining and reread the whole story again just so I can read this chapter in context with the others. GOOD WORK

anonymous5 posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 4:39pm

I'll echo the above - how do you DO this?! Yikes. Amazing chapter. I don't know any other fic authors who can slide the pieces together with the artistry that you display here. Everything was wholly believable. Gotta say that I feel a bit bad for Ginny playing second fiddle to Pansy and knowing it.

Bravo...!

red jacobson posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 4:27pm

Well, Damn! That's about all I can say right now, Tim; but; this is an excellent addition to the story; and I really hate to see that you are going to finish it in just one more part.

red

Kim posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 4:10pm

I haven't even read it yet but THANK YOU for posting!!!

Gardengirl posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 4:10pm

AAAAAHHHHH! This was FABULOUS!!! How do you DO this? And are you really going to wrap it all up in one more chapter? Pansy and Ginny are a serious force of nature together. Wow. I confess that I'm very glad that Dumbledore is on board now, though. I love that old coot, no matter where his head is stuffed. Bring on the rest - soon - I'm begging here!

Cheers,
Michelle

Luvable Grim posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 3:57pm

I keep it short and sweet. Damned good story! A much better read the HBP!
Andy

Ladegard posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 3:41pm

Nice. Very nice. And I'll try and hold you to that outtake later. Thanks.

- Tom

bachgwion posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 7:34am

you might want to look at the lips in the picture in this chapter, they are a little of and look slightly wrong

bachgwion posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 6:46am

I was wandering about the speach patterns of Dobby when it applies to refering to himself, you have him speaking in the third person when saying his own name replacing the 'I'(first person singulaur), yet you make him use 'my' in possession:

'Dobby bowed, "Dobby is going to the Elf Council now to show off my new clothing."'

'my' not 'his'

I was just curious.

Kim Patterson posted a comment on Wednesday 20th July 2005 9:05am

I absolutely love your stories, possibly more than the most recent HP book, which left my husband and I severely disappointed. We check your site everyday. I hope you will post again soon.

Jason Van Camp posted a comment on Tuesday 19th July 2005 9:54am

I absolutely love this story. I hope we'll see more of it soon.

Sam posted a comment on Monday 18th July 2005 12:36pm

While waiting for your other fic This Means War! to be updated I decided to see your other fics. At first I was totally grossed out at the idea of a Harry/Pansy fic but I decided to give it a go. I'm so glad I did! All of your fics are amazing but this one especially. I really hope you update soon!(Both fics!)

Your eager reader
~Sam~

UdderPD posted a comment on Sunday 17th July 2005 1:03pm

Excellent start

TTFN UdderPD

Joshua posted a comment on Thursday 14th July 2005 9:56pm

gah! your stories are so great that i never want them to stop!

as bizarre as this pairing is for me, this is probably the best i've seen of harry as independent, powerful (but not super!harry), rebellious to dumbledore (who deserves it...completely) and even romantic (without jumping headlong into it with no buildup...pet peeve of mine).

please continue this fantastic piece of writing despite the imminent release of HBP (and/or Hope as well please.)

Jonny B posted a comment on Thursday 14th July 2005 3:41pm

Wow. It works. Thats not something I'd have said when I started reading this. Will there be more?

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Wednesday 13th July 2005 5:43pm

Have I mentioned how much I LOVE this? Because I do. With a passion. That burns deep down inside. Just joking around. But I do really love it that much. I can't wait to read on, although it may be a while, unfortunetly. Anyways, sorry my reviews are so lacking in constructive comments, but I can't find a single thing wrong with your lovely story. I totally adored the chapter!