Zvoni the Barkeeper posted a comment on Friday 10th June 2005 3:34am

Well, well well, here we go again!

I won't ramble about the quality of your stories, because they are just that: stunning!

Right! What fascinates me most is your ability to portray the different traits each Hogwarts-House has! The Slytherins, the Ravenclaws, the Hufflepuffs, the Gryffindors. I haven't come across another author who can pull this difficult topic in such an impressive way.

First i thought Pansy a little bit out of Character, but after reading those three chapters, i must say, that she is a Slytherin to the bone, and your description is very accurate. Not of Pansy, because we don't know much about her, but of her being a Slytherin.

Anyway, keep up the good work

Debby posted a comment on Friday 10th June 2005 2:42am

ALso at snape504@yahoo.com. I just love this story and I have never read one where Harry was paired with Pansy. Its just great! Is there anyway I can receive notices as to when you update!
Debby

John posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 10:16pm

I disagreed with Albus about sending you the Portkey; I felt that anywhere you were, would be better than where you were. And that maybe we should trust your judgement. You’ve not [down] badly by yourself up to now"


should that be done???? just thought i'd point that out

All i have to say is nice chapter your portrayl of Harry is balanced his Gryffindor side with the with the leadership and courage and his Slyhteryn side coming out in his ruthlessness in thefight with the four poor saps.


I'll just say this i have read all of the harry potter stories you have written they are a good read and enjoyable all of them. I can only say that about one other fanfiction writer but he writes Daria fanfiction i have even read you Buffy and Xmen fanfiction and they are also well done though i am not a BTVS fan.
I am not trying to suck up or glad hand you I just felt I should say thank you for the stories that you have given us to read, it has given me idea's dont know if they will ever see the light of day but does give me ideas thank you.

Azrael's Portal posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 9:46pm

Sweet. I like the way you are writing Harry. It makes you belive he is (?hard/mean/tough?)enough to defeat Tom, but he still wants to take his relationship with Pansy at a slow pace. I love the contrast. I look forward to reading the rest of this.

greg posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 9:35pm

hmmm...i think my "wallet sense" would be sounding off rather loudly just like Malcolm's!^^ thank you, Tim. This was just great. I also really enjoyed Harry's "pep talks" before their date. I really can't wait for more, so thank you again!

Tom posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 9:18pm

Heh...haven't had much of a chance to read HPFF in the past month, what with moving, my now ex-manager's trial, and the opening of a new store, but this was a very pleasant way to get back to things!

I read one story before this, and after that and WK,GQ, I suspect that most of the rest of the stuff I'll see won't quite hit the mark.

I'm impressed that you can pull this off; I understand now why Mr. Chessman tossed off the "Glass of water" line. And I'm very glad he did, by the way. While I don't expect this to happen in JK's work, it's entirely believeable, and very engaging.

I think that in all of HPFF, your depictions of Harry are perhaps my favorite, and certainly in my top 5. He's a bit powerful (which I like) but ultimately he's reasonable and decent and striving to be normal. It's very easy to go to extremes with him (or Ron or Hermione, for that matter), but I think you manage to present a plausible and likable Harry.

I never thought I'd read H/P, but I find that I eagerly await more. Keep it up!

-Tom

nonjon posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 9:12pm

Lovely as always. Want more. Excited to get back to school with Harry unofficially christened the best duellist in the world. Already 3/8ths of the way and at a current pace that means we could still be a chapter or two from getting to school even.

Consider this the usual gush and encouragement for more. Anticipating this story will make the wait for HBP so much easier. Thanks for writing, posting, sharing, etc. as always.

cycla posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 9:03pm

Oh that chapter was worth all the time that I have waited for it to be posted. The chapter was so riveting that my wife read it over my shoulder, and it gave her a creck in the neck. That she proptly let know was my fualt.

I can see Tonks doing axactly what you had her do. By joining with Harry and the Parkinsons. I can also see Albus fearing to let go of Harry. To the point of forgoing Harry's wishes to be left alone.

I really like how you had Harry and Pansy develup(know that is spelled wrong sorry) their relationship slowly. I am tired of seeing pairings that go from nothing. To them thinking of haveing a very serrius relationship in just a few days or weeks.

Well done and thanks for writing this Fic. As I have come to really enjoy this pairing.

Cycla

Daniel posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 8:39pm

Awesome chapter, I like the lenght of your chapters and how the flow together. I notice that in this chapter you picked up a little speed. I just have one question. Do you know how long this story is going to be? rating:9/10

Malaskor posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 8:11pm

Sorry, no time atm for a real review...
Just to mention the important part: I really enjoyed this chapter and I look forward to seeing more.

Keep it up and thanks for sharing

PS: Here's one quote where I think you got the grammar worn, but it might be colloquial-ly correct but I wouldn't know with English as my 2nd language...#

"Didn’t you used to be shorter?"

Shouldn`t that be [b]use[/b] instead of used?

Jack posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 7:55pm

Well, I was really looking forward to the meeting with Tonks, and you did not disappoint.

Dobby is still the standout character for me, but I have really liked the glimpes we've gotten of Harry's trainers. Also, the more I read about Mr. and Mrs. Parkinson, the more I like them. Obviously, Mal could have picked a better way to test Harry, but still.

Looking forward to some interaction with Harry's friends now. Also, looking to see what happens with Dumbledore.

Catherine posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 7:28pm

This is the best day ever! First I find out that the third chapter of White Knight, Grey Queen has been posted, then I find out that Wishweaver has posted a new chapter of Realizations on ff.net! This chapter is simply amazing. I love your Dobby, and I think it's marvelous how Pansy is willing to acknowledge that she can't/won't be as good at fighting as Harry as long as she can watch his back. I love that Harry and Pansy are taking their relationship slowly and that Harry had to tell himself that Pansy was perfect for him. I look forward to the next chapter. Thank you!

Daenin posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 6:43pm

Wow! Before starting this I couldn't see how Harry and Pansy could possibly work, but it REALLY works. Thank you. It's an incredible, wonderful story. You're a remarkable writer. I look forward to next week! :-)

Dreadnaught posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 6:33pm

Very nice, long, chapter. I do feel a bit sorry for Ginny though. ALl in all this is a great story, and I can't wait for the rest of it to be release.

David M. Potter posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 6:25pm

What an awesome chapter and awesome fic!!! I can't wait until more is posted! This has now become one of my top 10 fics.

W. Nabors posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 6:14pm

Excellent story telling.I like the idea of Harry showing some of his darker side,so very Slytherine of him.Looking forward to the next chapter!!

anonymous5 posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 5:51pm

Amazing. How do you cover such a short timespan with so many words and keep it this enthralling?? You've got mad talent. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Peter posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 5:30pm

As always an excellent chapter. I am eagerly awaitting the next installment.

Mark Safransky posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 4:55pm

Awesome Tim! The training is going very well as is the relationship between Harry and Pansy. His instructors are turning him into the Wizarding World's version of James Bond. By the time training ends, no one is going to believe this swauve and sophisticated guy was once little Harry Potter. He's now the Boy-Who-Lived grown up and taking control of his destiny. I'm certainly looking forward to how he and Malcolm will get Snape and Umbridge their just deserts. Also looking forward to when Dumbledore and Snape figure out where that tracking charm is. This just gets better and better! So looking forward to the next installment!

Amanda posted a comment on Thursday 9th June 2005 3:53pm

And yet again, we have another amazing chappie by the world reknown HP fic author, Tim, and what does this read think? Holy crap, Tim!! I've been inlove with the HP series since the first book, and you make me wish that you'd helped JKR write the originals! Pansy has a depth of character that makes me want to be her, and Harry is finally becoming a man that anyone would wish for their own daughter. He's not two dimensional either. We get to see his flaws, so he doesn't disappoint us like the psuedo perfect man, and he isn't too moody to make us wish for something else. And I love the fact that Nymph is getting to be a small part of this. Can't wait for the rest of the golden trio's reactions at Hogwarts.