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Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Sunday 25th June 2006 3:50pm

Love the idea of Harry as a Dr Doolittle. That’s so cute. Caught the Carry On reference too. I’m such a big fan of Mad-Eye now, who is in turn a fan of Harry so everyone’s happy. Had to laugh at Mata Hari having better legs than Draco. The Harry’s brass balls line had me giggling my head off. Love your use of the marines. Love the idea of Molly being a prankster too. I’m guessing the statue part of the battle was a Winter’s Tale reference. The battle was magnificent and I liked the openendedness of Harry, Ginny & Pansy's issues. Wonderful story.

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Sunday 25th June 2006 12:37pm

Pansy recounting the events of the night at the Ritz that made the girls sigh and Ginny’s makeover were both fantastic. I had to love Harry punching Snape and Pansy’s revenge on Umbridge. “Stupidest Wheezy” made me laugh as did Ginny kissing Pansy – too funny. 2nd favourite line had to be “Harry, ignore the slut please” which could be misinterpreted so beautifully. Absolute favourite bit was “Pure innocent witch” / “evil slutty witch” / “completely psycho wizard” being the oldest trick in the book. Loved that entire scene from beginning to end. Perfection.

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Sunday 25th June 2006 11:44am

They’re going to think Harry’s gone over to the dark side if they aren’t careful. Merlin, Pansy ripping Draco a new one was one of the funniest things I’ve read in a while. The whole hair conversation had me in hysterics as did “his dark hotness”. Dumbledore's serenity surprised me but I imagine he has his own reasons.

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Sunday 25th June 2006 10:29am

Loved how Harry reached McGonagall and then shocked her. This is a slightly nutty question: how often did you type Grouch for Gruoch? I loved the way you gave them a kind of exam. “You’re bleeding on my shoes” made me giggle again. “You two are going to make me diabetic” was another great one. Poor, poor Harry – he really needs that talk and can’t possibly want it. Harry’s plans are going to shock the whole wizarding world, his friends most of all. Harry with long braided hair is an image that will make me giggle for a while. Nice cliffhanger.

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Sunday 25th June 2006 10:00am

The saints and sinners line was especially good. I almost felt sorry for Snape having to crawl through to the Chamber but the idea made me laugh too hard. I love the way Pansy kissed Harry AND Remus. They can’t seriously think they’ll break Harry and Pansy up, at least not when they seem them together. Happy death day song was evil but so funny as were the extensive Monty Python jokes. The use of turpentine was genius. Daphne made me laugh. “Wave a revolution in front of a Slytherin and the first thing they do is ask to sign up” made me laugh harder. That last scene was so sweet too.

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Sunday 25th June 2006 8:31am

Love the mirror sniffing at control and Harry’s growth spurt being so dramatic. Pansy remains wonderful too. The little tramp remark had me chuckling as did the “we’re going to win!” Harry’s fight skills were truly impressive. Very well written scene and a lovely chapter. Love how you're developing their relationship slowly.

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Sunday 25th June 2006 5:58am

I already loved this but reading Dobby’s line about Harry being house-elf sized made me love it more. This is so clever. Poor Harry sounds like he’s in awful pain. Great chapter.

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Sunday 25th June 2006 5:29am

I knew I was going to like Pansy when you had her quote Hamlet as Macbeth to Dudley. It just made me laugh. I liked her even more when she knocked Dudley out the hard way. I now love the girl. She’s beautiful and clever but not a Mary-Sue. Fantastic beginning. I actually believe these two could have a relationship.

Dustin Hoeppner posted a comment on Friday 23rd June 2006 7:30am

I love this story. Is there going to be anyother chapters to this story? Harry and pansy make a good couple.

Dustin

goddessa39 posted a comment on Tuesday 20th June 2006 9:38am

LOL! I loved this. But you should put just one last small chappie or maybe a sepreate one-shot telling what happened afterwards. :)

CoyoteScion posted a comment on Tuesday 6th June 2006 1:37pm

Damn..... the only thing that I can say is that was excellent and the only thing I might add would be another chapter dealing with Pansy, Harry and Ginny. Overall very good read and provided hours of diversion while I should have been working. Thank you.

Lionsgate posted a comment on Wednesday 24th May 2006 9:47am

Read your story 3 times : always better : you can't leave us in the cold abouth the future : you promised follow ups : there is story left for more than a 100.000 words : so start writing you .... !!!!! PLEASE !. One more thing : i would rate this story and HOPE by the top 10 on the net. : so give us more ....

MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Friday 19th May 2006 3:03am

WOW!, I was not sure about a Harry and Pansy fic but after reading it, what a great story. But its has left to many unanswered questions. You have got to add to this or at least tell us what happened in the future.

MPF

ojiushadow posted a comment on Tuesday 16th May 2006 7:10pm

dude this story is amazin wow imean wow.....

i read this story the 3 time and i want to read more.....

i read your stories and i usualy dont review...

but ur stories are like wow...

you the best author of harry potter i have read...
i have read some other good ones but u have the most amazin stories....


peace
<:) Ram

Cass posted a comment on Saturday 13th May 2006 4:16pm

I loved this story from the beginning. I thought your romance was developed over a reasonable period of time and believable because of all the changes both both Harry and Pansy went through, and I adored both of Pansy's parents.

It's so hard to find a good fiction where Harry is strong, smart, and determined that is well-written and plotted, and also doesn't short-staff any characters. (I get so tired of evil!Ron and a weakling Hermione who run away from Harry once the going gets tough, when they never have before.) This piece is very impressive.

I must admit, I didn't like Ginny apparent romantic integration into the fic. I don't usually mind Harry Harem fics or Harry with multiple partners, but I felt a bit shortchanged by Ginny's addition. The fic was set up from the beginning as an H/P romance and it was wonderfully done. Did you change your mind halfway through? That was the impression I got.

The romance written between Harry and Pansy was definitely was one of the best Harry Potter romances I've ever read. Their relationship seemed so genuine, and the pair's mutual admiration and committment was very touching. Ginny arriving on the scene as a romantic prospect seemed to all that had been set up between the main couple, and honestly, it made me sad more than anything.

That aside, I loved all of your little touches - you didn't just focus on one aspect of the Harry Potter world, like many writers do. You covered the elves, the goblins, the different sects of the government, and the Hogwarts staff, and each take was refreshingly original and believable. Kudos!

Cass posted a comment on Saturday 13th May 2006 4:15pm

I loved this story from the beginning. I thought your romance was developed over a reasonable period of time and believable because of all the changes both both Harry and Pansy went through, and I adored both of Harry's parents.

It's so hard to find a good fiction where Harry is strong, smart, and determined that is well-written and plotted, and also doesn't short-staff any characters. (I get so tired of evil!Ron and a weakling Hermione who run away from Harry once the going gets tough, when they never have before.) This piece is very impressive.

I must admit, I didn't like Ginny apparent romantic integration into the fic. I don't usually mind Harry Harem fics or Harry with multiple partners, but I felt a bit shortchanged by Ginny's addition. The fic was set up from the beginning as an H/P romance and it was wonderfully done. Did you change your mind halfway through? That was the impression I got.

The romance written between Harry and Pansy was definitely was one of the best Harry Potter romances I've ever read. Their relationship seemed so genuine, and the pair's mutual admiration and committment was very touching. Ginny arriving on the scene as a romantic prospect seemed to all that had been set up between the main couple, and honestly, it made me sad more than anything.

That aside, I loved all of your little touches - you didn't just focus on one aspect of the Harry Potter world, like many writers do. You covered the elves, the goblins, the different sects of the government, and the Hogwarts staff, and each take was refreshingly original and believable. Kudos!

Rogue posted a comment on Friday 12th May 2006 7:26pm

Awesome, awesome, awesome!

I was skeptical at first because I've never seen anyone do a Pansy/Harry pairing well... You blew it straight out of the water.

I only had two issues with the story. One was a technical thing - I don't believe that the SBS (Or any other British military force) uses the M16, but I could well be wrong. Either way, I can't be bothered to look it up right now.

THe second qualm I had was cutting it off so quickly right at the end. I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS TO THEM! Hopefully there'll be something reasonably soon to explain it all.

johnej posted a comment on Tuesday 9th May 2006 3:18pm

great story

Particle_Accelerator posted a comment on Monday 8th May 2006 10:46am

Hello,

I've just finished reading this story in its entirety, and I must say, it was very well done. The premise of this story was unique and intriguing, and it drew me in. Your characterization of Pansy was interesting, and the fundamental changes she made to Harry's character were insightful. That being said, I was a little disgruntled when you brought Ginny into their relationship. While multiple partner pairings can be fun to read, I don't feel as if it fits in this story, or stories to follow. Towards the middle of the story you had Ginny moving on, and had Harry admit that while he had SOME feelings for Ginny, it was Pansy whom he wanted to be with and raise his family. Heck, the boy was planning on proposing (what happened to THAT, by the way?) Suddenly, this all changed and it was almost like you took some of Pansy's characteristics away and gave them to Ginny so she too, could be a true partner to Harry. To me, this just didn't fit right with the flow of the rest of the story. Now, like I said, in the main, I liked this story, so please don't misconstrue this review as a flame. I just wanted to point out what I felt was an added plot point that weakened the storyline at times. Keep up the good work!

j porter posted a comment on Saturday 22nd April 2006 9:17pm

this story is now one of my favorites!!! you are an awsome writer i bow down before your greatness. im going to have to read all you stuff now. all hail the great jeconais. you rock. let me know if you have any other storys you think i should read.