CaptMacca posted a comment on Tuesday 17th February 2009 6:51am

Hi,
I just finished this story, and I LOVED it! Where's the rest, hmm? lol

Lathena posted a comment on Wednesday 11th February 2009 3:02pm

perfect entrance right there.

Liberal_bird posted a comment on Monday 19th January 2009 12:25am

Love the story are there any of the extra scenes posted? I couldn't see them

Houseki posted a comment on Monday 5th January 2009 7:33pm

this story was cool

Ciroth posted a comment on Saturday 27th December 2008 4:58pm

This was a great story. I do hope you write more with this world.

miahtech posted a comment on Sunday 14th December 2008 9:23pm

This is one of my favorite fanfics of all time. :) Do you know if we'll see the sequel finishing up part at some point? Many thanks.

Hemotem posted a comment on Saturday 13th December 2008 6:33pm

Once again I find myself reading a great story and hope to see more of it in the future. I love what you have started and would love to write in this AU but alas I am a poor writer and could not do justice to what you have started. I thank you once again for a great story.



Hemotem

Nights_Silhouette posted a comment on Tuesday 2nd December 2008 1:28pm

A great story, keep it up.

Robin42069 posted a comment on Tuesday 18th November 2008 8:11pm

good i'm not much for reveiwing so i'll just say i really liked it great job on the story

boricuagizmo1 posted a comment on Friday 10th October 2008 9:30am

please continue this story i got hooked on your style of writing you made the characters seem so life like that i laughed when they did. it's awesome i love the way you write.

Andrius posted a comment on Thursday 9th October 2008 5:14pm

It was a nice story and I definitely enjoyed it a lot. It's also definitely not the best story that I've read. I see now that it's the first big story that you've ever written, and it shows, as your other stories are, well, better.

That's not to say that "White Knight, Grey Queen" is bad in any way. Many other fanfic authors could only dream of a "first fic" this grand.

Andrius posted a comment on Thursday 9th October 2008 5:04pm

Yay, so it DID end with a threesome just like I hoped! xD

Andrius posted a comment on Wednesday 8th October 2008 10:52pm

Girl on girl action... I'm hoping for a Harry x Pansy x Ginny threesome! xD

Andrius posted a comment on Wednesday 8th October 2008 8:37pm

I'm glad Harry actually agreed to take things slowly and even apologized to his friends. In many fics Harry undergoes huge transformations in a very short time, and expects his friends to deal with them instantly, which they don't; then they fall apart. I'm glad here Harry actually gives them time to deal with everything.

Andrius posted a comment on Wednesday 8th October 2008 6:26pm

Hah! Nice entrace.

Andrius posted a comment on Tuesday 7th October 2008 6:04pm

Nice!
The only thing I dislike slightly is Harry being so weak and pathetic.

motherjenjen posted a comment on Monday 6th October 2008 2:55am

ok the main scene that i want from this as a sequil of sorts is harry pansy and ginny's "talk"
please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please
LUV JEN

bookaholic_au posted a comment on Tuesday 16th September 2008 4:12am

One of the few things I can find to criticise about your work is theway your characters tend to flaunt what they've got. Even when you write Harry as modest, he spends riduculous amounts of money, is described as gods gift to womankind and is possessed of vast estates. It is a skill to write about the rich and famous, however I would challenge you to write about the poor or middle class - you rely too much on the lure of money and fame, it would be great to see you extend yourself to write about a realler world.

My difficulty arises not because your characters are all rich (Hogwarts is, afterall, a private school), but because they are unrealistically rich. Having been through the private school system, I feel qualified to tell you that the attitude Pansy displays in this chapter - scorn at people less beautiful, rich and tasteful, is unrealistic.

Bobboky posted a comment on Monday 1st September 2008 8:58pm

Very Good, I loved this story

joeBob posted a comment on Friday 29th August 2008 12:13am

Could be better (list on request (I'll hold my breath ;-) ).

Still a pretty fine "feel good" piece.