Mark posted a comment on Monday 23rd May 2005 6:44pm

I almost like this fic, better than TMW, but then I have not read anything bad that you have done. Nivernia ?spelling was a great one-shot.

Hope you had a happy birthday

Philipe posted a comment on Monday 23rd May 2005 6:20pm

Tim,

First, thnaks to the lovely soul who post the chapter
as a text, 'cause i still can't get threre to read,
even if i 've just finish with it.. 

This chapter felt like a preparation, an opening band
to a led zepellin concert.. It was good, but i thought
tonks was a little out of caracter, but since the
first chapter didn't define her as much, that's okay.
But the rest of the golden trio atitude was diferent,
there response to Harry'sw letter was very strange..

Well, Gotta get some sleep, I will review again after
my second passage over the chapter..
See ya,
Philipe Krause
"Post Scriptum"

Leon posted a comment on Monday 23rd May 2005 6:14pm

Hrm...after rereading, it answered my question in my earlier review of the chapter. Oh, and here is the line where up is used instead of us

 "You said it yourself, mum; death makes up grow up early."

But nothing big. I wonder how new super-sexy harry and pansy will affect the school. And how ginny and co. will attempt to steal harry away.

Greydon Creed posted a comment on Monday 23rd May 2005 2:59pm

Great chapter, like seeing Harry use his inner Slytherin.   Looking forward to more, hope it comes soon.

Sam posted a comment on Monday 23rd May 2005 2:18pm

What a wonderful gift for your birthday;)! I hope you had a blast today.

This story has me feeling many emotions, shock(at Harry falling for a Slytherin), awe(how natural it seems). But basically, it makes me feel like Oliver Twist, "Please Sir, May I have some more?"

Thank you very much and keep up the awe inspiring work,

Sam

dave gerecke posted a comment on Monday 23rd May 2005 2:12pm

Wow! If the rest of the story follows the same high standard, this will really be a keeper. I am very impressed. Thank you for writing and sharing. dave

Tonnocal posted a comment on Sunday 22nd May 2005 4:59pm

Zev posted a comment on Thursday 19th May 2005 1:11pm

Great story. One of the better ones I have read.  

Serry posted a comment on Wednesday 18th May 2005 7:17pm

Harry/Pansy? Well this fic made a believer out of me, I love it! Please update this one soon.

Anonymous Reviewer posted a comment on Monday 16th May 2005 7:37pm

Wonderful story! First time I can remember someone sitting down and working Hary through his guilt. Please continue this.