Christopher Estep posted a comment on Friday 17th June 2005 8:21am

Potter-ryu has been founded. The world's *only* fusion (Magical/Muggle) fighting system. (Unless you stole the system from *Starship Troopers*. The book, not the movie.) Six moves, five seconds, four baddies down and either out or in major agony. Once Harry gets rid of Tom, he will be heavily recruited by MLE; the only question will be who will try harder. (The Aurors? The Unspeakables? The Hit-Wizards? Not just as a mere trooper, but as both commissioned officer and *instructor*. Harry may be the one person to unify MLE training.) And *yes*, I am happy to see that Pansy's Seducing Plan is wortking. (I'm thinking *poor Ginny, Hermione, and Ron*. They will have even less clue than Dumbledore on dealing with the New Harry. It may actually be worse for Hermione than Ginny, as Harry could very easily start challenging her in the classroom part of Hogwarts as well.)

beney posted a comment on Wednesday 15th June 2005 11:59pm

wow. great bchapter once again. can't w8 for more ;)

Rocky235 posted a comment on Wednesday 15th June 2005 6:01pm

Great stuff! I loved the fight scene and that Mummy and Daddy were there to see it.

"I’m going to have to pay those guys a fortune.." Ha!

I appeciate your lengthy chapters. I feel as if I'm there with the characters at the house. Your betas make sure there are no distractions, and I can get deeper into the story.

(I'm just a bit worried about Ginny.)

Rocky235 posted a comment on Wednesday 15th June 2005 4:10pm

I like your Pansy character and her Mom. I haven't warmed up to her Dad at all. It's nice to see Tonks as more than comic relief, too.

stacey posted a comment on Wednesday 15th June 2005 3:50pm

aww how cute.. how u update soon.. i absolutely adore u and ur writing

Rocky235 posted a comment on Wednesday 15th June 2005 3:08pm

Unique story line, good grammar, and easy to read dialog all make for happy readers.

In fact, I'll read it again before going on to chapter 2. It's that good.

stacey posted a comment on Wednesday 15th June 2005 12:15pm

love it will read the 3rd chapter soon.. when are you updating this means war? that story kicks ass!!! hmm never thought i'll read a harry/pansy fanfiction but this is actually really really good

Prerna posted a comment on Tuesday 14th June 2005 10:35am

You know, Tim, I was really hesitant to read this first. I've always read Harry/Ginny but I heard so many good reviews about that I figured what's the worst that can happen? I'm am thrilled that I listened to myself and those reviews and didn't ignore this wonderful story. Its very will written and it covers all aspects of Harry. I read this all at once, and now my eyes hurt but its all worth it. Can't wait for the next part ::bounces in her seat::
Prerna

Kai posted a comment on Monday 13th June 2005 8:24pm

Holy Smokes! Excellent. At first I thought that Harry and Pansy were moving to fast, but when you think about it, they are using a time-turner and spending major amounts of time together so they pace is good. Post soon please.

Kai

Akusai posted a comment on Monday 13th June 2005 11:13am

A fantastic chapter, and sooo... long. :-)
I really don't know what to say more, just that I hope, you don't develop Harry and Pansy too fast. A great deal of excitment about a story at least stems from the development of the charakters, IMHO.
Malcolm and Gruoch seem to take the relationship relatively cool, but I'm sure, or at least hope, that Pansy's and Harry's friends will throw a tantrum at first, upon learning about their blossoming relationship.
Furthermore, it could be interesting to spice up the going ons around them a little bit. For example I could imagine that Dumbledore tries to push Fudge out of his office, upon hearing about the influence Malcolm has there, that is, if you want to span the story that far.
I'm definitly looking forward to the next chapter,

Fate posted a comment on Sunday 12th June 2005 11:09pm

Oh, wow... This was absolutely brilliant!!!
This has become one of my favorites stories!
Can't wait for more!!!

Illusia posted a comment on Sunday 12th June 2005 1:23pm

More, more... oh, your work is BREATHTAKING, simply MARVELLOUS. How you do it? It doesn't seem matter whether it is Pansy, Ginny, Gabi or Cho, you got it nailed down and with a bloody brilliant plot moves. I love your Harry! And yet, despite tha pairing, you've managed to make all the chosen girls to be very in character 8D lol
Please, update this. The chapters are so long, so well written, so... everything good. Who wouldn't want more of this? more than just want actually... I'll stay and await.

TimGold posted a comment on Sunday 12th June 2005 9:01am

Weee that was great, simply great!
No other words :>

insidelola posted a comment on Sunday 12th June 2005 6:44am

I my opinion this is one of the best WIP`s, I have read in a long time.

You portrait your characters really well and I am looking forward to see how you will write the confrontation between Harry and the Order. Also the reaction towards the `new ´ Pansy Parkinson.
Please continue your good work, because I would love to read more coming from you.


Lg, LoLa

chris warren posted a comment on Sunday 12th June 2005 12:06am

This was very nice, it was well written and it had a pairing not often used...therefore you get extra points ^_^ I give it two thumbs up...I feels sorry for the guys Malcolm paid...ouch. Update soon it was absolutly great.

kelvin posted a comment on Saturday 11th June 2005 10:41pm

wow, this story is so great. i would love to see what happens when harry get back to hogwarts. i am sure ron and hermione have something to say about pansy.

please keep up the good work, hope to see your next chapter soon

Fanfictionfanatic posted a comment on Saturday 11th June 2005 8:26pm

*big hugs to you* I am so in love with this story! I love Pansy's parents, it was so sweet her dad sharing stories with Harry about his parents as he helped Harry get ready for his date. And Pansy and her Mom are not just mother and daughter but friends. Harry was amazing in the fight (if you want to call it that, it was over before you could blink!) and the time turner concept of training was brillant. But the very best thing about the story is the Harry/Pansy relationship. It is a beautiful thing. I just hope when they get back to school they are able to stay together with Ginny wanting him, and I know Ron and Hermione will support her and not his relationship with Pansy! Beautifully written, wonderfully crafted, just an amazing story. Can you tell how much I love it??

neely61 posted a comment on Saturday 11th June 2005 7:14pm

Ok, although I have read hundreds if not thousands of Harry Potter Fanfics and I am a rabid, uh, AVID, Harry/Ginny shipper this is rapidly becomeing one of my favorite stories (even if it is going to become AU soon). Is this going to be a H/G fic or a H/P fic? The way you have the story going so far is obviously H/P but since it's only ch3 who can tell, right? Can't wait to see what you have in store!

JAMES posted a comment on Saturday 11th June 2005 4:34pm

As usual, I love your work. The way you are able to bring reality to fantasy. The way you have a full gambit of emotions honestly potrayed, and not forced or dumped in a story just because. The human inter-action is sharp and to the mark.

I know you have this all written, but I would be honored if you would want me to look over your unarmed or armed martial arts scenes. I have over 25 years of koryu training. Traditional Japanese martial arts. The way people were trained before WW II.

One other thing a cocierge would not bring wine in the ritz. A sommelier or a wine stewerd in lower rated ritz. Five years working food and beverage in the hotel industry.

Thank you for sharing your work. It always brightens my day whether I am reading an update or rereading for the twentieth time!

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Saturday 11th June 2005 1:18pm

Oooh, juicy!! I loved that ending. This is fantastic. I'm going to have to explore your site a little more. I am totally loving this story. Please update soon!!