By Jeconais
Reviews
Itinerant posted a comment on Friday 1st July 2005 4:48am
Jeconais,
Your work is well done. It is engaging even for those of us who are not intimately familiar with Harry Potter.
You have managed to paint interesting, believable characters that are worth taking time to know.
Thank you.
Itinerant
Kelvin posted a comment on Friday 1st July 2005 4:39am
OMG, i cant believe you ended this like that, now i dunno what i would do to wait for the next one.
Please update soon, i am dying to know what happens next.
Hannah posted a comment on Friday 1st July 2005 2:52am
Brilliant, as always. I just wish you hadn't stopped. I know that it was an apt time to finish the chapter on that line, but I really want to know what every ones reactions are to both Harry and the 'real' Pansy.
It really was a great one liner at the end there.
Camille posted a comment on Friday 1st July 2005 2:01am
I loved this chapter!!!!!!! I think that you're now my favourite author (and yes, that's supposed to be a compliment).
TheGimp posted a comment on Friday 1st July 2005 1:35am
First of all, I will say that this rewiew will do nothing but inflate you ego and hopefully get you to get the next chapter out faster.
Now on to the praises and begging for more. I LOVE THIS STORY!!! It's great. I love how harry acts in it and how he's taking control in a very believable way. Keep up the great work and PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE get the next chapter out soon. I really want to see the reactions of Dumbledore and the events with him and the rest of the scool.
BferBear posted a comment on Friday 1st July 2005 1:19am
Great story so far, am really looking forward to reading it further. I find myself anticipating this story much more than anything else you have written.
robin82 posted a comment on Friday 1st July 2005 12:29am
This story is fantastic!i love the Harry/Pansy story, and yours is absolutely the best!
if you want my advice because i'm italian, the correct phrase:
"La vendetta è un piatto, servito il più bene il freddo"
is:
"La vendetta è un piatto che va servito freddo"
Dobby is one of my favourite character, and also Malcom and Grouch. great story!!!
Patches posted a comment on Thursday 30th June 2005 11:25pm
Excellent chapeter. I love the way you keep the flow going with the characters and the plot. It is great to see Malfoy set up for a fall. I am impressed by the planning and the execution of the "fall of Fudge and company". I really enjoy the way you insert these new elements like the ruling counsel of the house elves and the ministry as though they always existed and it fits so well It is like something we knew but it wasn't talked about.
I also really like the way you keep Harry's character strong, thinking but also that element of goodness that I feel is part of The Harry Potter no matter if it is in fan fiction or JKR's books. I also love the way you keep Harry human by showing his weaknesses. I think it is great that you have his girl friends father giving him "the talk"! That is quite a twist! Keep up the good work. I am really impressed by your ability to weave a yarn that is so entertaining and believable.
Thank you for another great chapter. I am looking forward to the next one!
Payne posted a comment on Thursday 30th June 2005 10:16pm
Oh that was mean leaving it like that...lol...
Christopher Estep posted a comment on Thursday 30th June 2005 9:29pm
Harry and Pansy absolutely *salamandered* the SBS Qualification Course (and Harry was basically loafing!), and Croaker actually asked Malcom to try to convince Harry and Pansy *not* to join the Aurtors or Unspeakables (not that he isn't good enough, but that he is *too good*) and *oopsed* that field Unspeakables are the hit-wizards of the Ministry, and voiced his opinion that Harry is much too good to deserve that. Lucius got booted off the Hogwarts Board, and the Governors set Harry's Trap for Umbridge. Pansy takes the HE and tortures Draco for a bit, while Harry went on his Whistle Stop Tour (including giving a first hand demo to Amelia Bones as to why pissing off Harry is not something you should do) and finally, *apparently* Apparates into the Great Hall of Hogwarts! (How many of the staff, not counting Minerva, who is already aware of what Harry can do, will be conscious after that little trick? When Harry dropped in on Minerva, she was left in need of her stash of Old Ogden's! I *shudder* to think how well Harry will be doing in his classes, especially Transfiguration and Charms; he's already lapped the field in Defense, and could take his NEWTs there right now.)
JP posted a comment on Thursday 30th June 2005 9:04pm
ARRRGGGHHH! I, absolutly, am stunned, I would have never believed that a Harry/Pansy fic could be this believable. Not to mention enjoyable! I can hardly wait until the next update. The above scream was becuase the chapter ended just before everything got really good. I suppose a good writer with a plan can make an incredible story where others can see nothing. I am truly amazed. I was drawn to your writings by the This Means War! story (which I am sure you have heard before). You seem to be an exceptional writer and am truly astonished at your understanding of the characters. So many of the writers of HP fan fiction don't really understand the characters. I am very impressed that you seem to do this easily. Thank you for brightening my day.
bill posted a comment on Thursday 30th June 2005 8:56pm
That just rocks on so many levels.
Mathetes posted a comment on Thursday 30th June 2005 8:47pm
Great work. I didn't want the story to end. I can't wait to see Ginny's reaction and hear Ron and Hermione spluttering. Besides it seems like we are do for some serious Draco bashing.
fanfictionfanatic posted a comment on Thursday 30th June 2005 8:46pm
Beautiful update, once again. I really enjoyed Harry's interactions with the elder Parkinsons, as well as Harry and Pansy's final exams. Wonderfully written action scenes. The sparks should really start flying now that they are back at Hogwarts, loved Harry's enterance, the only problem with it was that it was the end of the chapter and left me wanting more!! I can't wait to read the next installment.
Dshugart posted a comment on Thursday 30th June 2005 8:45pm
I just wanted to say this chapter was brillant, actually this whole story is. But the ending was totally evil. Keep up great work and I can't wait to read more.
Stormmaster posted a comment on Thursday 30th June 2005 7:47pm
w00t! another chapter! wee!
*reads chapter*
:) another masterpiece to the collection. i like the flow, but the cliffie was just evil. pure genius i say. i like the way you're setting up dumble; its shaping up to be a good independent harry story.
jaques posted a comment on Thursday 30th June 2005 7:34pm
wow. what a great chapter. can't w8 to read what happen next specially hermione's reaction.
Gardengirl posted a comment on Thursday 30th June 2005 7:30pm
Cheers Tim! I wouldn't have thought it possible, but I am SO totally on board with this story! It's as much fun as TMW, and that says volumes. Keep up the excellent writing!!!
Ron posted a comment on Thursday 30th June 2005 7:27pm
I don't normally review, because I figure most of whatever I would say gets said by others. But every once in a while I just want to make sure that an author knows that their stories are appreciated. Greatly. Thanks!
Brad posted a comment on Friday 1st July 2005 5:09am