By Jeconais
Reviews
UdderPD posted a comment on Friday 22nd July 2005 2:13am
Yet another brilliant chapter far, far more entertaining than the HBP.
Looking forward to the next installment and one for TMW.
Thank you for sharing it with us.
TTFN UdderPD
John Menning posted a comment on Friday 22nd July 2005 1:40am
Nice and again I find my self reading the chapter as slow as possible so that it lasts as long as it possibly can.
just one thing that confused me is one part they are talking about the colour of her underwear
Pansy smiled at him, and stood in front of the bed, moving her arms out to the side. "Don’t you think that’s the sort of *think* that would stop you sleeping?"
Is that supposed to be *thinking* or *thing*????
Eowyn23 posted a comment on Friday 22nd July 2005 1:05am
Yay! Go Harry! :D
Brilliant, how they got the information out of NOtt! :D
I want more!
I love the long chapters, the romance, the action! :D
Please update asap!
-xxx- Eowyn23
Maxennce posted a comment on Friday 22nd July 2005 12:15am
Great chapter, love your ideas and how Ginny's been accepted into the family and how Harry refused to step down in the wake of the Weasley parent temper. Loved the 'finite incantiuem' for that howler, it was great. Keep up the great work, looking forward to your next chapter Tim
Cheers
Max
CK2 posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 11:48pm
An excellent addition to a great story.
Keep up the good work.
Bill posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 10:27pm
WOOOHOOOOO! Taking Nott's magic? AWSOME! There is one thing, though... Ginny's place between Pansy and Harry. I don't know how to put it, other than bluntly - It looks (from this chapter) that its going to turn into a threesome. Ginny kissing Pansy, her constant presense between the couple when they sit, her sharing of power when Harry stole Nott's strength... the list goes on. Was it your intention to come across like this? Good chapter none-the-less. I look forward to the 8th (and final, I believe?) chapter.
Elle posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 9:25pm
This story is simply amazing. I know you're putting out bits at a time but..arg!! i wish i could wait to read it all at once. it's like someone handing you all but the last two chapters of HalfBlood Prince! hehe. seriously though, wonderful work. more please!!
Aimee posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 8:52pm
This is an amazing story. I have never read a Harry Pansy story before, and I am loving it. You are an amazing writer, and I love reading your stories
Kim posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 8:47pm
Wow! This was just great!!! You truly have a gift for writing. I have to say I enjoyed this much more than HBP. When can we expect the next chapter??? Do you plan to begin writing your own novel someday?
Goyana posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 8:46pm
Yay a new chapter. I love this story. The best part of this whole thing is when you made Dumbledore ask to follow Harry. That is very interesting. I hope the next update is a day or 2 earlier then this one.
mmb posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 8:30pm
Brilliant. After reading the HBP, it's
refreshing to have something decent to look forward to reading.
Well done.
bill posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 7:57pm
your story rocks
thegimp posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 7:53pm
i love your stories. it was great. i saw only a few minor errors in this chapter but they weren't anything that detracted from the story and i forgot where they were once i finished. anyways, great job man and i can't wait for the final chapter(i mean it, please hurry).
ps: you have the pefect setup for Ginny and Daphne to become mistresses to Harry and Pansy :D.
jaques posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 7:27pm
great chapter. can't w8 for the finale.
The Silent Legend posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 7:04pm
Excellent. You manage to capture the characters so well, while advancing the plot at the same time. Brilliant work. I eagerly await the next chapter, and am impressed at the level of detail you use in writing this. And everything else you write. Nice work.
Samantha posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 6:53pm
Once again another wonderful chapter. I don't think I've ever see a fan fic where Remus is given a chance to make a real difference so I can't wait to see what he gets up to when he's Minister of Magic.
Meredith posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 6:50pm
Don't leave us hanging. It was wonderful, although a little weird and hard to read after reading HBP. I love the fact that you have Ron, who is by far the most black and white of the characters having the most difficulty with the changes, even more so than Molly and Arthur. Thank you for another worderful update.
Adam Call posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 6:42pm
Awesome! Hell of a chapter! Your details are simply amazing, and your ideas are brilliant! I cannot wait for your next chapter to be posted. Keep up the great and wonderful work, that is your story!
Darcie posted a comment on Thursday 21st July 2005 6:19pm
This story is wonderful. And let me tell you after reading HBP this story was like a breath of fresh air, this is how is should be.
Keep up the brilliant writing and I will be waiting for the next chapter, which I hope that you can post soon.
ulkser posted a comment on Friday 22nd July 2005 2:34am