Jack B Nimble posted a comment on Saturday 17th December 2005 6:15pm

Just realized that I read this offline, but I never reviewed after I finished. I always figured I would make up for it when you wrote the epilog which seemed to be implied, but I should have written sooner in any case.

So, I REALLY liked it. I agree that the extra scenes might have been too much, but being a Remus fan, I might have included him. Tough decision on who to trade out, though. Good action sequences, and some nice justice handed out.

The relationship was a bit of a surprise, but only in how they finally included Ginny. I kept waiting to see where they would draw the line, and they never did! Unexpected, perhaps, but nicely handled.

Now, we just need to know more! What happens next?

Vitor Aquino posted a comment on Friday 16th December 2005 8:49am

damn...i never knew that i would start to like pansy!!!keep up with the good work!!!

Imazi posted a comment on Tuesday 13th December 2005 5:26pm

I must say awesome writing, I started reading this for something different and the length once I started I didnt want to leave the computer even for work although I had to.

Christina C. Keimig posted a comment on Friday 9th December 2005 10:28pm

Oh, cool. Loved this chapter!

Christina C. Keimig posted a comment on Friday 9th December 2005 9:03pm

Gorgeous picture. This is so fun to read!!!

Christina C. Keimig posted a comment on Friday 9th December 2005 8:13pm

Damn this is getting good! Smashingly good fic! I get so sick of H/G obsessions, that this is refreshingly different.

Christina C. Keimig posted a comment on Friday 9th December 2005 7:24pm

God, how I laughed at the will-reading! I just love Life of Brian!!! Especially the end song.

Inimene posted a comment on Friday 9th December 2005 5:03am

Well its a great story. I would have done an epilouge too to get all the things straight.

James16 posted a comment on Wednesday 7th December 2005 7:39pm

Great Story, Unbelievable. Keep up the great writing. Will there be a sequel?

Victor1 posted a comment on Saturday 3rd December 2005 11:11pm

Originally i started to read this story because i wanted something to read while i was waiting for you to finish others. I've been a big fan of yours for quite a while, and i had tons of internal battles on deciding whether or not i would read this.

im glad that i actually convinced myself to do so.

i love your stories. and i can't wait for your future ones

you rock man

Nelly posted a comment on Thursday 1st December 2005 2:36pm

This is amazing work. I was reading Hope (which i love) when i thought of seeing if you had any other works. Then i saw this wonderful collection you have. This was a great story, and the only Harry/Pansy that i've ever read.

holyknight posted a comment on Tuesday 29th November 2005 10:23am

hmm....pretty good....but i really want to see a sequel of this fic.....

hmm...for why you don't try to mix elements of the Ryanverse and Rainbow Six Universes into a future sequel......

What if some Muggles and Wizards, competent ones this time, decide to take power or cause a situation what would trigger a world war?

Alan Johanson posted a comment on Monday 28th November 2005 10:18am

At first I had absolutely no interest in reading a Harry/Pansy story (only goes to show), but after reading a couple of recommendations I decided to give it a try. I am pleased to say that this is now one of my favourite stories. The way you crafted Pansy and her parents and the blossoming relationship with Harry is (in my humble opinion) very well done. I only regret that he never got around to propose ;-)
This is a ship/story that I would much enjoy to see a sequel to (full-lenght if you please). If for no other reason than that you made me "care" for the characters and would love to see what happens to them next - even in a non-action environment.
Thank you for a very enjoyable read (and a sleepless night).
AJ

ahyanah posted a comment on Monday 28th November 2005 1:13am

700th review. It's way too annoying to watch that 699 staying for days.

Jimbocous posted a comment on Sunday 27th November 2005 2:27pm

A really impressive work. So help me, I think I've lost more sleep over fanficauthors.net than any other ten sites out there. In the hands of a lesser writer, some of your plot elements just wouldn't fly, but you pull them off brilliantly. Thanks for a GREAT read!

greenjeanie posted a comment on Thursday 24th November 2005 12:57pm

This was one of the best,most awesome stories ever. The character development was great.Your writing style draws in the reader. Loved the humor. Please do the sequel.I really want to know what happens next. Keep up the good work!

Robin Westerly posted a comment on Thursday 24th November 2005 12:24pm

WOWOWWOWOW!!!!!!!!!
I realise everyone says that but seriously, your stories just keep getting better!!!
This has to be the best HP story I have ever read including After the End and even This Means War! Now that is abig stsement but I think it is true.
All the characters were 3D (does that make sense) and I loved the used of the spiders.
Maybe the thestrals could have played a more staring role but still it is amazing.
I love the pairing even though JKR would never have the ingenuity to change one of her characters like that. Plus it finally give a good reason for Super Harry development.
Thank you so much. You have no idea how much your stories help

solar1 posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd November 2005 6:03pm

awsome story! i love it

Ruskbyte posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd November 2005 10:37am

Words fail me.

Not a usual occurance, I must admit. Beautifully written and pulled off with the consumate style I've come to expect from such a talented author.

My only real complaint is that you went ahead and wrapped up the entire story in this single chapter. I find myself on the edge of my seat, screaming, "What? No, it can't end here! More, more, more!"

Besides which, timeline wise, Harry's managed to get rid of Voldemort and all his Death Eaters a good month or more before Halloween even! There's still so much of the school year left to experience.

You better start turning out those little vignettes you mentioned, or I expected your adoring fans might turn violent...

Be seeing you.

anita posted a comment on Monday 21st November 2005 2:06am

Great story, lots of original idea's and I love the way he planned to get thing's to happen the way he wanted them to. Remus as minister excellent. Have you written any of the little stories you mentioned, at the end of your fic?