By Jeconais
Reviews
PerfesserN posted a comment on Wednesday 8th March 2006 5:29am
After reading WKGQ I recommended the story to all my friends, and we all agree the story is engaging, compelling, a real page clicker! The characters are beautifully rendered and the story grabs you and makes you feel involved. Two enthusiastic thumbs up! Any chance of a continuation or a sequal? Maybe an epilogue - Children of the White Knight and Grey Queen? Does that make Ginny the Off-white Princess?
patrick1 posted a comment on Tuesday 28th February 2006 8:47pm
this was kinda a slow week as far as stories go, so i re-read this story for like the 12th time. still great as always, i hope there will be more parts to this storyi wanna see what happens between harry pansy and ginny
Dark Lord Shabranigdo posted a comment on Saturday 25th February 2006 7:57pm
Whoa! Plot twist! Still, good story so far. Very unique. Did you know that it won "Best All Around Fanfiction" at Darklordpotter.net? Yeah, it's pretty good at times. The Harry/Pansy pairing is original, if a bi fluffy for my tastes. Still, good job so far.
Rovias05 posted a comment on Saturday 25th February 2006 7:05pm
I've had to review this story, because it just rocks that much. I am now reduced to begging for a sequel, so I can stop reading this one over and over again. The last story I did that to was Saerry Snape's "Not Myself" series. If you've read it, that should tell you what I think of this story. Granted, NM is a bit more unrealistic, but I loved its characters, much like this.
ShadeHawk posted a comment on Friday 24th February 2006 1:25pm
Harry/Pansy. Not an easy pairing. No usual Harry/Ginny, Ron/Hermione ships. But a truly wonderful story, painted not only in black and white, but in shades of gray (for example Dumbledore). I guess that with such a difficult pairing, to make believable story, the writer's talent really shows.
So... will there be a sequel?
GuardianOfLight posted a comment on Tuesday 21st February 2006 10:27am
Jesus christ that was a good story, other than the chapters being absolutly huge I can't fault you.
It was for lack of a better word perfect.
The Pansy pairing is one I have never seen before and works very well, I especially liked the picture included, do you draw that yourself?
The inclusion of the navy was also an excellent idea as well as the realsim at the fact that they could not phyisically use all the resourses they had ie: DA and the Thestrals, normally authors try toi cram everything into a story but that was just a stroke of genius.
I can not offer high enough praise for this fic it has to be among my top 5 of all time and trust me I have read a lot.
I also have a request if I may.
I am writting a Harry Potter/Buffy/Original crossover fic that is currently fairly dull, I am currently rewriting it to attempt to make it more interesting and if I may I would like to include some of the ideas, specifically:
- The wizard flu and how Harry was pulled out of the dursley's and trained over the summer
- the use of aircraft in the final battle
- And Harry forming his own side
Annoyningly I actually thought up a similar idea to the aircaft one but just didn't know how to properly implement it, so I still feel like I should ask your permision as yours gave me my idea.
I would have emialed me directly but I did not know how to contact you.
Please reply to no matter what the answer is:
adamtait2004@hotmail.com
Much abliged.
Adam (GuardianOfLight)
Tommy posted a comment on Sunday 19th February 2006 2:19pm
Erhm... what DID he write on the ruined portrait of Mrs. Black? - I can't remember reading that...
- Great story of course; among the best I've ever read. I'd be interesting with a sequel or something... or at least an epilogue, telling us what happened further; did Remus become Minister (which I guess he did), what happened to the houseelfs? - and what choices will Harry continue with? - will he go on a long crusade for the sake of knowledge and fun around the world, or will he join a quidditch team? Or perhaps settle down? - My curiousity is overwhelming, I know, but I'd appreciate a reply, if only to turn it down.. :)
May The Words Be With You
Tommy L.
aka
fanfix
fanfix(a)start.no
PhoenixAnkaa posted a comment on Thursday 16th February 2006 8:04pm
I have waited quite a while to read this fic partially because I couldn't see how you could possibly but a positive spin on Pansy. I should have known that if anyone could do it you could. I really enjoyed this fic. Your spin on Harry and Pansy's relationship with Ginny was very unexpectedly enjoyed. I hope you will someday take us into the resolution of their relationship. Untill then I will only ponder the possibilities. Thank you once again!
PA
psychmarci posted a comment on Monday 13th February 2006 1:42pm
I absolultly loved this story. I have had this story recommended too me many times and I am so glad that I was finally able to get through it. I am looking forward to some epilogue/outtake companion pieces. I have never really been a fan of Harry/Pansy stories but after this I am a believer!! I look forward to reading more of your wonderful work. Marci
John Moore posted a comment on Monday 13th February 2006 6:43am
I honestly can not get away from my computer because of this story. It is so much fun reading a good peice of fanfiction, and this defintily has potential to be one of the best. Romance, action, slytherin Harry, independent Harry, what more could you want lol? I love Harry's comment to DD about controling his pet. I also love Harry's proactive stance towards everything and in this chapter you can really see the action picking up. The revolution is finally starting, but I am sad that I only have two more chapters to go :( I know you might think I might be exagerating, but honestly, I like your story better than the real JKR's book six. Not that I have anything againest DD, but in book six he was really too much of "Dumbledore's man". I mean, after book five I thought Harry might mature a little and start trying to handle things his own way, butI was wrong. I also hated to see Harry so weak, exspcially using the same spells, iver and over and over. Enlough of my rant about book six though, back to your story.
Things I liked.....
Dobby, how can you not love that lil guy
Pansy, I still can not believe I am going for Harry/ Pansy in this
Hous elf magic
The "Dark Hotness' nickname lol
McGonagal getting involved
The heart to haert with everybody
And the Snape and DD bashing of course. They are my favorite past times.
John Moore posted a comment on Sunday 12th February 2006 5:07pm
I really can not believe how good this is. I love almost everything about your story & I am glad that Harry and Pansy are now officially togeother. I am also glad Harry's getting the chance to live a little, and he can finally enjoy a little of the "high life". The dinner and club scenes were just great, and again I can not wait until everyone sees the two of them again at Hogwarts. Harry totally kicks ass and sod oes your story. Keep it up. Plz!!!
John Moore posted a comment on Sunday 12th February 2006 3:35pm
This story is amazing! I can't believe that I am actually going for Harry/Pansy. I like that the Dursley's got what they deserved even if I was sad to see what Harry's life was like. I also like that HArry is finally getting his independence and taking a more active role in the fight. You really have a good thing going here, and it would be a shame to let it go to waste. I and I'm sure many of others would love to see any updates of this story. Everything is p[rogressing nicely so far, but I can't wait until I get to see everyones reactions to the new Harry and Pansy.
wraithwolfe posted a comment on Sunday 5th February 2006 3:15pm
I enjoyed this story very much. I was well written, flowed well and had a good plot. Thanks for writting and posting it. I look forward to others that you may write.
squiddy posted a comment on Saturday 4th February 2006 7:37pm
That was a wonderfully written story. I didn't expect to be hooked on it from the first chapter but I was and can't be happier now that I've read through the whole thing.
Thanks for a great story and I really do hope you keep writing more stuff like this. It's been extremely entertaining =)
Maybe you can do all of us a favor too and write a "closure" chapter ont he relationship between H/G/P. You know what I mean ;)
Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Wednesday 1st February 2006 11:27am
Final - - An absolutely brilliant final battle. The best incorporation of Muggle technology I have seen yet.
Fine battle dialogue between Harry and Voldemort. Excellent end for Draco, Peter, and Bellatrix.
Thoroughly enjoyable.
Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Wednesday 1st February 2006 6:07am
Ch.7 - - Harry the leader of the free wizarding Great Britain is an amazing creation of yours. I am delighted with how you've managed for him to take the best of Malcom and Grouch and add his Harry-ness to it, changing all three of the Parkinsons in the process.
Thank you also for bring the Weasleys and Dumbledore into the fold.
The interrogation scene was scary well done.
Monumental.
Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Tuesday 31st January 2006 10:31pm
Ch.6 - - The 'handling' of Dumbledore was brilliant, incredibly well orchestrated.
The initial crushing of Snape was delicious - more, more, we want more!
McGonagall is treat.
Just delightful!
Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Tuesday 31st January 2006 9:22pm
Ch.5 - - Your methodical takeover of the wizarding world is brilliant.
I never thought I could go for a H/Pansy, but...
Splendid tale.
Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Tuesday 31st January 2006 7:52pm
Ch.4 - - This was great with Remus coming to Harry's side, and McGonagall doing what Harry would want even though she isn't doing it for that reason.
I loved McG's determination that her potions students would do better than Snape's.
Harry did a great job of winning over Daphne. Well written
Terrific dialogue!
Daniel Hensley posted a comment on Wednesday 8th March 2006 10:09pm