draxomulus posted a comment on Sunday 11th March 2007 7:06am

Loved this chapter, but I MUST point out an error hoping that there is more in the coming story. When referring to Harry's height, you have Dobby referring to Harry as a "magician". With the utmost respect, I cannot idly sit by and wonder what would lead you to have Dobby insult Harry as a magician- somebody performing parlor tricks, instead of complimenting him with respect as the full magic-bearing wizard he is.
Please respond,
Draxomulus +1

uberwald posted a comment on Tuesday 27th February 2007 6:03pm

One of the best fics I've read -- detailed and thoughtful plot, believable character development, just enough fluff. I like it a lot better than Rowling's year 6 book.

Thank you. :)

natamox posted a comment on Tuesday 27th February 2007 4:02pm

WHY?
WHY?
Why Ginny, Harry and Pansy?
I really loved the story until you ended it with them.
Harry and Pansy BELONG together! but just not with Ginny...

Amapapa posted a comment on Sunday 11th February 2007 11:42am

This is the second time I've read this marvelous story, and probably not the last...

I hope that you’ve enjoyed this story as much as I have enjoyed writing it.

Boy, did I Enjoy it.

I really liked the way you had Pansy and her parents interact. It seems like a way for me to try to handle my own children. And the way you made Harry's and Pansy's relationship grow was very good. I wish I could have that time again with me wife myself, but who says I can't ? ;-}

Thank you for a very nice weekend spent before the computer screen.

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Wednesday 7th February 2007 4:16pm

So, I actually have read all of this story. Once I started reading it I recalled clearly how it ended. But that's really okay with me. It was good to re-read this. I love this story so much, it was good to go through it again. Now, on to the latest update. Yay!

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Sunday 4th February 2007 11:04am

Yay! Just... yay.

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Wednesday 31st January 2007 4:29pm

Hehe. I just wanted you to know that you've ruined me. I have been rendered completely useless. All I want to do all day is come home so I can read more. I have about 5 hours of homework tonight and the first thing I did upon arriving home was sit down and read for an hour and a half. That being said, I absolutely love the situation I'm in. It's not often I come across something good enough for me to drop everything and read it. So, although it may seem like I was upset about being, as Ron aptly stated, "whipped" by your story, I am thoroughly enjoying it. And please, I mean this entirely as a compliment, so don't take it any other way. I just thought it would be good to express my love of your work in a new and equally honest way.

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Saturday 27th January 2007 11:58pm

I thought a reread was in order, as you seem to have updated since I suddenly stopped recieving your alerts. I know I've read this story, but even ignoring the fact that I love it so much I had to reread it, I'm sure it will give continutity to the chapters I've yet to read, so I don't end up spending the whole new chapter trying to remember details from a year or more ago. So, I'm not sure yet, but I may not review every chapter, as I normally do, because my custom with rereads is only to review if I have something to say other than the fact that I love it, because likelyhood is you already have a review along those lines from me for each chapter. That being said, I may find the need to remind you how much I love it every once and a while, when the mood strikes me. So lack of review from me is a good sign really. Cause it something is bothering me I'll be sure to tell you about it.

Anyway, I actually do adore this story, I could barely put it down last time and I am looking forward to repeating the expierience and actually getting to read the end of the story, which I had been waiting for.

Bye now,

Mashimaromadness

Jeffrey1 posted a comment on Saturday 27th January 2007 9:23pm

excellent.a topnotch chapter.

Darkstardragon posted a comment on Saturday 27th January 2007 4:19am

Loved this story, hope theres a sequal so i can see remus as minister of magic!

Wergan posted a comment on Thursday 25th January 2007 11:19am

Hmm I really liked the story in the beginning but towards the end it really fell apart. Overall I liked it but the whole Harry/Pansy was much better then the Harry/Pansy/Ginny. Oh well your story. Looking forward to your future work.

Steve Stephan posted a comment on Saturday 13th January 2007 8:03pm

I think that you did a bit of a disservice with this story, and I apologize if there is one too many s's in that. What happened with Harry, Pansy and Ginny? What happened with the relationship that was obviously there? I'd like more on this story, as you didn't really wrap it up as it should have been. I'm not really happy as you should have done much more with this as you have, but in maintaining your rating, as I'm sure was one of your goals, you did an excellent story telling for this.

MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Thursday 4th January 2007 8:08am

Now that I have read this story again, I hope that when you finnish with TMW and Hope that you finnish this story. Just to let us know what happens in the future.

MPF

Hannah3 posted a comment on Tuesday 2nd January 2007 8:18pm

As always, you are one hell of a writer who should be writing professionaly (and I am fairly sure that's spelled wrong), and not for us poor, life-less people who hang onto your every *written* word. Anyway, I did notice that Neville called his grandmother "Nan" instead of "Gran" as it is in canon. Just thought I'd point that out. Oh, and I am anxiously awaiting TMW! Chapter 10, parts 2 and 3.

natamox posted a comment on Monday 18th December 2006 10:52pm

There's a story quite like yours called Shades of Grey on Fanfiction.net
Is that yours or sombody else's?

slayersfan01 posted a comment on Wednesday 29th November 2006 6:14pm

First, I would like to say that besides "Where There's A Will" by veraklon this is the only Harry/Pansy fic worth reading. This is absolutely amazing! I just can't describe how good it is because...because its that damn good! It took me two days to read through all of this and I am damn pleased that I did. It was worth it.

Secondly, where is the next chapter of this? I checked this site and according to it you haven't updated this in more than a year. Where is the last chapter? This isn't finished right? According to you end note there should be more of it. Where is it? I would really like to see Harry ending up with both Pansy and Ginny. That would be totally awesome! Aragog already hinted at it so it should be done! I really hope so at least. Anyway, hope to see the next chapter soon!

darthme1011 posted a comment on Monday 27th November 2006 11:58am

did u ever write the companion stories to this???

paulaluv2001 posted a comment on Friday 24th November 2006 8:38pm

Please finish White Knight Grey Queen. I love this story and would love to read more.

Lilredwitch posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd November 2006 7:24pm

Hey I just finished reading White Knight, Grey Queen and I was wondering if you were going to put out a sequal. :)

Kavra posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd November 2006 11:44am

You're a good author, Jeconais. But there are a couple of things that bug me. Actually, there's just one thing that recurs pretty often in this story.

I'm reading this to be reading a fanfic. I don't want to learn how to dance a waltz, shave, or tie a bow tie. You seem to think that everything needs a detailed explanation when, really, "Pansy spent the afternoon teaching Harry to dance," "Malcom taught Harry how to shave with magic," and "Malcom taught Harry how to tie a bow tie" would work just fine.

I realize that you have absolutely no obligation to listen to my ramblings and probably don't care for them. This is one of those "speak now or forever hold your piece" moments and I've never been very good at forever holding my piece.

-Kavra