Dave posted a comment on Thursday 22nd September 2005 1:36am

Great finish to a great story Tim. I'm personally a H/G shipper myself and don't really take to many other combinations but this one really worked well.

Just have one gripe about the story though... What's the deal with having the relationship between Pansy and Ginny the way you did? I'll admitt that when I re-read those sections of the story I tend to skip over them (ie: the parts with Ginny and Pansy saying they "love" each other and other similar situations).

Personally I would have just left the story as Ginny being a good friend of them rather than being a second "mate" as your story suggests. Just something about that doesn't sit as well with me.

At any rate, aside from that one little issue of mine... great job on this and I can't wait for you to finish TMW (just please don't have Harry end up with two women in that one). ;-)

Dave

Adam posted a comment on Thursday 22nd September 2005 1:16am

This is a fantastic end to a great story. I have really enjoyed this and will look forward to the side stories that come from this. Thanks for sharing, its been fun :)

Anonymous Reviewer posted a comment on Thursday 22nd September 2005 12:16am

I normally don't read m/f pairings but I found this while looking for rare pairings and was hooked. This is one of the few well written hetero stories I've read. I loved the fact that you used Pansy rather than the generic pairings.The concept, the plot just everything was great it was an enjoying read. I have one pet peeve, I don't know where you are going to go with the little stories after this but I hope you don't go the route of adding Ginny to the equation, since it's kind of hinted. I have nothing against her but it seems that most rare pairings seem to add Ginny to the relationship. I think the relationship you built between Harry and Pansy is great enough to stand on its own. I hope you might do another Harry/Pansy story because this one has me hooked on this pairing. Once again great job.

jaques posted a comment on Thursday 22nd September 2005 12:13am

great ending. it's worth the w8. can't w8 for those short stories to come out and complete this fic.

Ken posted a comment on Thursday 22nd September 2005 12:00am

This has been one of the best stories I have read. I am looking foward to more stories set in this universe you have started.

Balint Szoke posted a comment on Wednesday 21st September 2005 11:38pm

Any word on an epilogue?

bachgwion posted a comment on Wednesday 21st September 2005 11:27pm

Brilliant, that was great!

KatelynEmma posted a comment on Wednesday 21st September 2005 10:45pm

Hello i love your story so much please write another one and then tell me when you have i love pansy and harry together

Thanks
Love Katelyn

Terry posted a comment on Wednesday 21st September 2005 10:09pm

That was a great story. and i will be looking forward to more stories from this universe. :)

Philipe posted a comment on Wednesday 21st September 2005 9:18pm

Congrats on your first finished story.. I live it..And would write more, but it is 2 am here in Rio and i've got to get to work at 7 am, so good night to you all, and i'll review later.. Congrats Tim

Philipe

Kaitlin posted a comment on Wednesday 21st September 2005 8:44pm

Absolutly and totally awesome story!!!! Cant wait for Book 2 or the Epilouge, whatever!

Amanda posted a comment on Wednesday 21st September 2005 8:32pm

This is the greatest story I have ever read. I loved the way you did Harry and Pansy and (may be) adding Ginny into the mix. Thank you for a wonderful story and I hope to see more soon.

Greg posted a comment on Wednesday 21st September 2005 8:29pm

Great ending!!! I do hope you'll write some one-shots to fill us in on more of what happens afterwards.
This is a great story!!!!

Josh posted a comment on Wednesday 21st September 2005 8:05pm

i've never hated a scrollbar more than i have today when i read your last installment of WKGQ.

i mean, i hate scrollbars all the time when i'm reading any of your stories, but knowing that this was the last chapter to my personal favorite story of all time...i grew sadder and sadder (paradoxically while getting more excited by the conclusion) while the scroll bar inched it way downwards signalling the end of a literary epic.

thank you for this story. thanks to your friend for issuing a challenge. thanks to your sense of authorship when you found you couldn't contain this story in ten pages.

thanks for making hp characters that i found utterly enthralling and believable. you balanced ingenuity and believability - and i think this story might have the first characterization of a redeemed "bastard Ron" that i found enjoyable and likable.

i can't believe you took such a challenging concept, made it readable, reasonable, and addicting, and then completed the larger plotline in a not-hurried, manageable, and totally endearing way.

as you had neville say, "Thank you, thank you, thank you!"

Hannah posted a comment on Wednesday 21st September 2005 6:58pm

wonderful story, like all of them. i cant wait to see what will happen next! hurry up and update This Means War!
hannah

Wytil posted a comment on Wednesday 21st September 2005 6:53pm

Great story! I was surprised when you wound it all up with one gigantic chapter. I bet Kokopelli and the other beta staff were going nuts getting this thing to help you wrap it all up all in one chapter.
As you said, there are lots of story bits left hanging. Lots of leftovers. Now you can steal any ideas on trios from UDDERPD. I think some have acknowledged him as the master of the fluffy-trio endings. Either way he covers it pretty well.

Elle posted a comment on Wednesday 21st September 2005 6:42pm

This story was absolutely wonderful. I loved your ideas - they were fresh, different, and well executed. Please do continue writing in this "universe" as I'd love to see what kind of mischief Harry, Pansy, and Ginny can get up to without an insane idiot to interrupt them!

Meredith posted a comment on Wednesday 21st September 2005 6:40pm

The only problem was that I discovered you had updated 10 minutes before Lost started up again. Damn you. It was absolutely wonderful, one of the best stories I have read in a while and the best Pansy Harry story I have read. I love the universe and look forward to reading more about it.

Scott posted a comment on Wednesday 21st September 2005 5:49pm

This is simply the best final chapter to one of the best stories in this fandom. I am sad to see it end and am greatly pleased that there will be some shorter stories in this universe in the future. Thank you so much for writing this story.

anonymous5 posted a comment on Wednesday 21st September 2005 5:14pm

bravo. Never too over-the-top to be silly, and a number of complex but well-written subplot tied together as with the brushstrokes of a master.