Neil Glover posted a comment on Tuesday 30th December 2014 8:40pm

Great story. I know that you have finished it as far as Voldemort goes but I would love to see another chapter or two covering Harry's summer holiday if you had any ideas on carrying it further as I think following Harry's trip abroad for a relaxing holiday would round out the story.

jp0625 posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd December 2014 8:36am

I liked the story overall. Harry's interactions with the Greengrasses was lighthearted and I loved the Vane gypsy idea. Canon showed how straightforward the wizarding world was if you put someone in magical armor the Death Eaters would be inconsequential. The only thing Id say I disliked is how anticlimatic the end is. Voldemort was no contest, you left the main pairing open ended(which isnt a big deal), the fallout of the families buying the manors, and the summer trip with all of them travelling with the Vanes. /shrug The story feels like it needs an epilogue.

Robin42069 posted a comment on Monday 22nd December 2014 8:54pm

I loved this story it was very diffrent to most others which is nice.

Socelssr posted a comment on Saturday 20th December 2014 3:43pm

I don't know who those people are you said that didn't like this story- I found it very well done with entertaining characterization and as always a good reason for a powerful Harry. Also loved all of the pop culture references. Thank you for pointing out that the characters are mostly 14 and younger and thus will probably not be finding their twoo luv any time soon. Keep writing amazing fics, you are consistently one of the better writers I've found.

Tammy Driver posted a comment on Monday 15th December 2014 9:18pm

I like it. :)

brad posted a comment on Tuesday 9th December 2014 12:12pm

(Trying my review again with a more modern browser; curious to see if the paragraphs are properly separated this time.)

Good grief, all of the *clanking* in that video! Pretty interesting stuff. My knowledge of such things is now an infinite number of times greater. :-)

Although I had the impression that some knights of some period - maybe *English* knights - had armour that was less flexible, all encompassing gear.

I've said it before, I think ... you REALLY need to invite a guest artist or two to join fanficauthors. To illustrate those stories which have such an overflow of feminine pulchritude. I'm just begg--- sayin'.

Laughed out loud with the chapter where Dobby announced that he'd 'brung it' out of the blue. Good one.

For a few seconds there at the end I thought you were going to go corny and have an ongoing joke with almost every cast member accidentally overhearing Harry's charming prayer to his parents, internally commenting on same ... and each one, in turn, making some sort of reference to Romilda's formidable breasts. :-)

(That was another fun line - Astoria's complaint that the gypsy's bust turned corners 15 minutes before she did. Something along those lines. :-))

Like I said - pictures please. :-)

An enjoyable story that gave quite an 'Iron Man' vibe. Thank you!

brad posted a comment on Tuesday 9th December 2014 12:09pm

Good grief, all of the *clanking* in that video! Pretty interesting stuff. My knowledge of such things is now an infinite number of times greater. :-) Although I had the impression that some knights of some period - maybe *English* knights - had armour that was less flexible, all encompassing gear. I've said it before, I think ... you REALLY need to invite a guest artist or two to join fanficauthors. To illustrate those stories which have such an overflow of feminine pulchritude. I'm just begg--- sayin'. Laughed out loud with the chapter where Dobby announced that he'd 'brung it' out of the blue. Good one. For a few seconds there at the end I thought you were going to go corny and have an ongoing joke with almost every cast member accidentally overhearing Harry's charming prayer to his parents, internally commenting on same ... and each one, in turn, making some sort of reference to Romilda's formidable breasts. :-) (That was another fun line - Astoria's complaint that the gypsy's bust turned corners 15 minutes before she did. Something along those lines. :-)) Like I said - pictures please. :-) An enjoyable story that gave quite an 'Iron Man' vibe. Thank you!

Yamikage posted a comment on Wednesday 3rd December 2014 2:15am

I think this is ma favorite between all of your fic. I like it more than Hogwarts' Dawn .I wish i can read a sequel of it or a epilog to know more about their live, business or children. Thank you to let us read this amazing fiction.

DJ posted a comment on Tuesday 2nd December 2014 10:45pm

This was a fun read thanks for writting it.

tcl7189 posted a comment on Tuesday 2nd December 2014 8:47am

Great story!! Loved the character developement!! Can't wait to see what you come up with next.

Dad posted a comment on Tuesday 25th November 2014 7:43pm

Great, feel good story.

gtgrouch posted a comment on Monday 24th November 2014 5:58am

Delightful story, well-written and creative.

gtgrouch posted a comment on Monday 24th November 2014 5:16am

Wow! What a wonderful start to a story!

Although I could have done without the insinuation of the headmaster's proclivities. That should have been filed under 'way too much information.'

jchangpa posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 7:06pm

Well, thanks for not been an ass because some of us do not like your story. Until chapter 7 I was thinking that the story was good, then on the next two chapters it simple dye. The main problem , at least for me, is that the story start with two over smart ladies with a crush, then you add his real friend on the loop and the sister of one of the ladies. But sudenly you make one lesbian, as before that was ok, but you kill all relation with his best friend, well all relationship were kill. But what really kill me was the end of LV, it was really anti climatic. So sorry at the end was not a good story for me.

agnar14 posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 10:22am

The one thing bothering me about this chapter, is that everyone left Harry unguarded really, as even Harry said Dobby wasn't there as a bodyguard, *right* after he'd survived an assassination attempt and a second killing curse.

Really? NO ONE thought placing a couple guards would be a good idea? Or at least a rotating shift of a couple house elves? Astoria or her mom or Romilda, no one?

Seems a bit far fetched. I get you wanted or needed voldemort to still be reborn, though I don't see Harry's blood as being needed still, but it just seems incredibly careless and going against all the much more sensible and logical group around Harry that you'd built up.

It came off like 'super-Peter' able to just wander in to the 7th floor, back out past the wards, BACK in to the hospital wing and never a bit of notice by ANYONE until the stunning spells are fired. Seems an incredible stretch to me.

Hytekrednek posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 10:18am

I for one truly loved this story and enjoyed reading it as I have all of your stories. Keep up the great work. James

kstchr posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 6:26am

Well, I for one really liked this story. I really enjoyed the banter, and glimpsing Harry's growing feelings for girls in general. Would love to see who he eventually chooses as his life partner, and how their ironworks business venture works out for them!! Have you ever thought about a sequel of sorts to this??

Machelle posted a comment on Sunday 23rd November 2014 1:23am

Thank you, thank you, thank you!! I loved this story. I loved the uniqueness of the use of the characters and the introduction of new ones. I would love a few more chapters but, genrally, I want more of everything you write! I saved the last few chapters as a treat for me after a project was completed. Project finished; chapters read; story loved!

ninja888 posted a comment on Friday 21st November 2014 6:03pm

A well-written story but severely lacking in resolution. I guess it had to be when the story ended with the main protagonist only 14 years of age. Your story started with the plot centered around Harry, Romilda and Astoria. By the time your story ended, Romilda and Astoria were supplanted by Daphne albeit her relationship with Harry was platonic. Even Derek and Victor supplanted Astoria and Romilda. As beautiful as Daphne was, she was not Harry's type. So what is Harry's type? I guess, his type was Fleur but Daphne got first dibs. Harry did not want to choose between Astoria and Romilda because he did not want to hurt the other. So his decision not to choose will eventually hurt both. Many want you to write a sequel. I don't. With Harry's mindset in this chapter, I think the continuation will be just as gloomy.

Manatheron posted a comment on Friday 21st November 2014 3:52am

Hey, Been reading this story to my wife, and upon completion she had the following to say "That's horrible! He needs a couple more chapters or at least an afterward! He can't leave me hanging like that!" So, from the both of us, well done! I hope to see more from you in the future, Best regards, Manatheron and Shelly