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kstchr posted a comment on Monday 10th November 2014 6:11am

Wow, talk about an utterly grisly scene there at the end...but I could totally see Moody keeping a framed picture of Bellatrix's parts on his mantle! lol I really, really liked Harry's line about 'come to the insane side, we have cookies,' as well as Fleur dealing with her bratty little sister like she did.

Meg posted a comment on Monday 10th November 2014 5:44am

All I can say right now is that I love you , I mean, I love this! If I'd had to read a chapter at a time I'd have been pulling my hair out. So, crazy-busy was good for binge reading! As always, thank you, and I'll get in-depth when I'm done.

FeNo posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 10:34pm

What a nice and cute group of totally insane lovely people...

No, seriously it was fun to read, even though maybe the hair was let down half a foot too much to be still comfortable to watch... Boris for example direly needs a "serious" scene some time in the future... maybe a duel when some of their real estate sellers take offense at the deals... anyway something to show he is not just a psychotic cardboard russian with a very strange sense of humor. Not that he wasn't sympathetic and brought a lot of levity to the evening, still... there's something missing in times as they live in.

I'm really ecstatic about the short talk Harry had with Derek about his love life and the little scene with Hermione and him "clearing the waters" about not being depressed that it's not in their future to be lovers was right behind that in favorability. Great ideas and really sensitive writing. Kudos.

I just had a weird idea/thought... it would almost be worth to not immediately off Voldi, but rather bloody him hard and send him to lick his wounds for let's say 3 years, so the end of their "agreement" with Dumbledore nears its end and the smithy things are already far on the path to becoming a real business and all... the parents prank company could also bee booming and maybe it took over the stewardship for WWW? Good ideas make good investments and with the fast way Fred and George diversified in the official books they might even complement Harry's armor and weaponry work... btw will he or rather his "business go to girl" integrate some clause into the vending contracts for armor and/or weaponry to not be wielded in followship to a Dark Lord or something like that?

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 8:40pm

Hard to say which bit i liked more, there was a plethora of things worthy of compliment in this chapter.

WhiteElfElder posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 7:57pm

How funny; Harry's spontaneous get together turned into a business deal that is uniting several families.

GBTtown posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 7:54pm

Another good chapter. Besides the gold to be made, not enough emphasis was made about the opportunity that will avail itself to make changes in British magical society if the light side overcomes Voldy.

myrthe1203 posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 6:52pm

I liked it.

The fic Harry Potter: Master of Luck by: ManMadeofLasers (over at FF.net) has Harry seeing the elves as "his" people - he actually helps out in the Hogwarts' kitchens because he enjoys it. You might like the fic - it's well-written and not a Mary Sue or too much cliche.

Pennywise posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 6:45pm

Aweosme chapter. Loved how you wrote the Krums, Boris is awesome.

sh8ad8ow posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 6:34pm

Good chapter like always.

scribbler posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 5:15pm

I'm very disappointed that Harry and Hermione won't be together in this fic. She's such a natural fit for him that it's hard to see her with anyone else.

Otherwise, it's a great story...

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 1:19pm

Another very well written update with an especially interesting look into the adult side of Wizarding society.

TheWickedTruth posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 12:52pm

Great chapter, can't wait for more.

keichan2 posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 11:09am

I LOVED your depiction of the Krum family!

“and took an un-lady-like bite” Bwahahahaha! Georgie, I like, too! :-D

“Harry brungs it,” Bwahahahahahaha!

“I’m trying to put a grumpy face on.” :-D

“Means Elves shall make Harry Potter their king” :-) You got me! I expected Dobby to say that they would be either jealous, or fearing he would take their place ;-p

“Alphonse said very quickly.” Bwahahahahaha!

Thanks for the new chapter!

I hope to read more soon!

DarkWingsDarkWords48 posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 10:20am

I'm really loving this story, and especially your takes on Romilda and Astoria (and Daphne). man, krum's father is hilarious :D

Just one continuity issue I thought I should point out, that I noticed this chapter. You have the line: " he could see an Asian couple that were clearly Cho’s parents, and an English-looking couple that he guessed where Cedric’s parents "

Harry doesn't know Cedric's mother, but he's already been introduced to Amos Diggory before your AU/divergence point begins - he meets Amos (with Cedric) when they meet up with Amos to take the portkey to the Quidditch World Cup, so he shouldn't need to guess for him ;).

Sanabalis posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 10:10am

Excellent chapter!

sanbeegoldiewhitey posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 7:22am

If Harry does not end up with either Astoria or Romilda or both, then his head should be examined at Saint Mungo's for brain damage.

tcl7189 posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 7:16am

LOVED IT!!!

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 6:45am

Fun chapter and what a diverse group has now formed because Harry got everyone together! It should be fun to read how the group progresses in time. I really liked Harry's comments to Mr. Greengrass about how he acted the stupid teen about girls. Smart boy that one! I've just reread Hogwarts' Dawn and either laughed or cried the entire way. Perhaps it was my allergy to the pines since I've got the windows open, lol. Thanks for sharing.

ILikeToRead posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 6:44am

Fun chapter and what a diverse group has now formed because Harry got everyone together! It should be fun to read how the group progresses in time. I really liked Harry's comments to Mr. Greengrass about how he acted the stupid teen about girls. Smart boy that one! Thanks for sharing.

Lisagrace posted a comment on Sunday 9th November 2014 5:56am

Great chapter. Love how the parents are making plans. Romi taking out Vernon, that was great.