Hagrid posted a comment on Saturday 19th September 2015 7:18pm

Welcome Back! I for one am glad to see you again. As the years have gone by I have seen authors come and go, but the good ones seem to be coming out of semi-retirement. Old Crow, for instance, states that he started a new story after RobST decided not to let one too many ugly reviews stop him. I have never had to worry about one too many reviews of any kind, but as I've wrteen fewer words in total compared to a BobMin56 disclaimer, its understandable. I did not notice any unpolished armor in your storytelling or style, but I did notice a complete lack of overly large groundskeepers in this particular tale. I guess I can see why though, writing Victor speaking in the third person has got to be bad enough without adding my butchery of the Queen's English. Feel free to drop by for some mead when you're nearby.

hpfan123 posted a comment on Monday 7th September 2015 6:49am

firstly, i absolutly loved the story. the only think that could have made it better was if you included a scene where harry got to do some heavy petting with both daph and fleur for his birthday, but i know that that type of scene would have possibly made the relationship between harry and his 'sisters' more complicated. or perhaps between harry astoria and romilda. secondly, i loved all the references to skyrim, especially in harry's combat armor. i could immediatly picture a full set of Daedric armor when you were describing it. i have to say though that the war hammer harry used on mulciber reminded me of Volendrung, which i think would have gone better with the armor because of the pulsing red light Volendrung has. i just wish those bouncing boots were one of them, those things would make mountain climbing so much easier and traveling so much faster. while this is the first story of yours that i have read, it will not be the last i really enjoyed your writing style, so much so that i read this whole story in 2 days and it didnt feel like i was pushing myself to finish like some other 100K+ stories i have read. you really drew me in.

JEP1996 posted a comment on Sunday 30th August 2015 8:37pm

Don't why people disliked I quite enjoyed.. Though I will admit to it feeling rushed in many places like it was never allowed a momnet to flesh itself out into something bigger. Other than that it was fun experinece to read. What with the Zoolander cameo; to the fact that of all the characters were either background characters that much desevrved screen time or simply different in how they are normally portrayed.

WyrdeDragon posted a comment on Monday 27th July 2015 11:36pm

This may be my favorite version of Daphne Greengrass. Certainly my favorite HPDG relationship. Amusingly, I started watching a blacksmithing competition show (Forged in Fire) a few days before I started reading this story. So that was cool, too. Anyway, a cool story. Wish there was a sequel to see how the ships end up.

Lee Dickie posted a comment on Monday 22nd June 2015 4:09pm

Still a pleasure to (re)read.

egwolf65 posted a comment on Friday 5th June 2015 6:14am

great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Le_Thorne posted a comment on Friday 22nd May 2015 5:30am

I would just like to say, I bloody love this story so far. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it.

Sheepdog posted a comment on Sunday 10th May 2015 8:35am

I have read this story twice and i really like i hope you can write more to this story to see who Harry choses to be with. And how his life is now that Voldemort is dead and how his travels go with the gayses go so plase write more to this in another story or add on to this.

r00ney posted a comment on Tuesday 5th May 2015 12:03am

Excellent story. I do wish you had continued it on through the overhauling of the goverment, things like Krum's wedding, the publication of Hermoine's reseach, and of course the resolution of the romatic interests!

Nytefyre posted a comment on Thursday 23rd April 2015 6:28am

Great story with the use of a character I haven't seen as a focus in any other stories.

thanks for for writing and sharing.

JaceBralor posted a comment on Saturday 28th March 2015 2:19am

Loved this. Probably going to devote several days to reading your fics, please keep them coming

jspring posted a comment on Thursday 26th March 2015 11:05am

I really enjoyed the story. Thanks for writing!

sisyphus1967 posted a comment on Thursday 19th March 2015 3:09am

Honestly I thought it was brilliant. A totally different direction. Some parts made me laugh a lot. Really I hope you write a lot more.

John

loretta537 posted a comment on Monday 16th March 2015 8:36pm

this was a great story, will there be a sequel?

MartinEB72 posted a comment on Monday 23rd February 2015 11:25am

I have read this twice now. I really enjoyed it, but I can't help but wish Daphne had stay stupid. Gifted artist yes, but truly not able to do 2 things at once and continually barely passes classes after a lot of help. You probably wouldn't have been able to do a pairing with Fleur, or if so it would have taken more effort to do. After all maybe you could have written her as appreciating such a sweet but dim girl.

Dorothy posted a comment on Thursday 12th February 2015 2:21am

I liked this story. Thank you for sharing

gcomyn posted a comment on Sunday 25th January 2015 3:42am

I really liked this story! Good characterizations, and kept internally consistent.

firedrakegirl posted a comment on Friday 23rd January 2015 4:40am

Personally, I thought this story was a lot of fun. I read it all today, then was horrified to realize I hadn't done anything to prepare for my trip tomorrow. Ah well, it was worth it to read this story.

Ceres posted a comment on Monday 19th January 2015 2:54pm

Idk if anyone else would enjoy it but I would love to see a sequel just something that shows who he pick an the summer vacation maybe some new magic, it'd be an absolute blast

andymul1 posted a comment on Thursday 8th January 2015 9:30am

Hey just gotta day this. I ha e read nearly all of your stories and they are all great so far anyway. I started reading this means war on fanfiction.net and was annoyed till I found u on this site. The stories are great especially this one and Hogwarts Dawn keep up the great stories please. Andy