G.M.Potter posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 6:55pm

Normally I don't review any stories unless it is to give constrictive criticism but I absolutely love this story. When I first started reading, I was a little skepticle about the ship because at the time, I was a firm Harry/Ginny shipper. This story changed that. I can't wait for the next chapter to come up and keep up the excellant work!

Daniel Hensley posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 6:49pm

I just want to tell you that this is one of the best written chapters that I have ever read. This is easily the best chapter so far and it far outshines any other works out there. I can honestly say that I am addicted to this story and wont be happy until its finished (had to say that, cant help it). I hope that your RL runs smoothly and your muse hits the caffeine heavily.

margaret1 posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 6:39pm

The update was certainly worth the wait :)

I loved so much abou this chapter, its hard to pinpoint one part that I liked more than the rest. The quidditch match (the teachers) was great, I love the way Harry thinks of everything. The duel was a lot of fun to read, but am a bit worried with Mafloy now being on the loose - the ferrett is up to something. Trewlany is a weird one - I hope she and Rita Skeeter cop it in some way.

As usual I loved the romance (I do love my fluff). I love the way Harry treats Gabby, its great that their relationship is strong and not just because of the bond. Its very exciting he is going to propose - I wonder if she will sense something because of the bond?

Dumbledore is a worry, I wonder what is wrong with him, maybe a Muggle disease of some type that is impeding his judgement?

I hate Snape, I really do, I hope you have something nasty planned for him.

Great update, Tim :)

Haeton posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 6:38pm

Really nothing to add here just wanted to say awesome as always and worth the wait.

Shawn Pickett posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 6:38pm

Outstanding, Harry got to bitch slap Malfoy all over the place, and reveal him as scum once and for all. It's a pity he couldn't get Snape the same way. Thank you for an excellent read.

HermioneGreen posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 6:36pm

A most awesome chapter. well worth the wait. I do have a question tho . . . during the
Hogwarts/Durmstrang quidditch match . . .

"Draco Malfoy is turning a rather unflattering fade of red as he yells at his team."

should that say shade instead of fade or is it an English term that I am not familiar with since I'm accross the pond?

'Mione

Michelle2 posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 6:32pm

Finally got around to actually reading it- wonderful chappie!!! :D Lovely ending. Can't wait for more.

David Wangen posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 6:28pm

Some of your best writing. Simply superb. The way the last chapter ended didn't read well to me, but this one was excellent.

Looking forward to the next part. And definately looking forward to the final treatment of Draco, and eventually Snape.

Jeff1 posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 6:26pm

Wonderfull work as always. Not what I expected, thanks for surprising me. I loved the match with the staff. 300 to nil, great!

dstorres posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 6:25pm

Bravo and well done on yet another well planned and excecuted chapter. Encore... Encore.

T.Zukumori posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 6:24pm

Another most awesome chapter in one of best Harry/ Gabrielle series I've come across. I enjoyed it most thorougly, and now am left with the unrelenting desire for more... ah, such is the price of reading works that are both mature and creative.

Thank you very much for continuing to write,
-Alan.

jaques posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 6:24pm

great chapter as usual. the quiddicth matches and duel are great and funny. and the closing part was really good, that will harder to sleep again for the next few nights thinking waht will happen in the final chapter.^_^.

gilly131 posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 6:07pm

Just what I needed on a day stuck at home with 2 sick children. Wonderful chapter, liked how Harry finally realized that it is a two way bond, and therefore an equal relationship of get and take. As for the cliche costume ball, when it is done well nobody notices the cliche.

mike lacken posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 5:57pm

Great chapter!

Greg Johnson posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 5:55pm

Another excellent chapter! Now that you have taken care of Malfoy I really hope you'll do something equally as good to Snape! The next chapter is sure going to be a lot of fun. :-)
Keep up the good work.

asher1978 posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 5:51pm

Outstanding part. I really enjoyed the Quidditch and the duels. Keep up the great work and more soon please.

Crys posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 5:49pm

No new info on whatever is wrong with Albus. You're doing a masterful job of masking his real situation.

Such wonderful jobs of both Harry and Gabrielle utterly humiliating Malfoy.

I liked how you distinguished who on the Hogwarts faculty team you were singling out. Two deez and one utterly immoral player. The others were innocent bystanders and they (well, you) treated them as such.

That block off the bond thing is still perking? Huh. Couple possible directions that can go. My "reader" and "writer" sides are fighting over which I'd vote for ;)

That quidditch team thing blindsided me. Grand idea, though. Solves many, many problems for our hero and heroine and their future. Gonna call them the London Lions? :)

Good ending of the duel. Malfoy escapes so he's a continuing irritant.

Hmm, Trewlaney with a smear campaign . . . That'll get ugly for a little while.

Most definitely looking forward to more. Wonderous yarn you're spinning for us, boss.

Serendipity posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 5:49pm

Oh, yeah. Forgot to say this in my last review about two minutes ago, but the use of the Fidelius and Riddikulus charms was brilliant and hilarious. Never let it be said that Harry can't strategize... :)
~*~LIZ

Serendipity posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 5:47pm

Wa-HOO!!!!! Harry, Oliver, Fred & George, and Angelina, Alicia & Kaite on a PROFESSIONAL team together? Their OWN professional team? You ARE going to write about one of their games, aren't you? Oh, I hope you are. Loved the duel, by the way, and Lee and Percy are wonderful, and I'm a mite bit concerned about Trelawney... but...

GO GO GRYFFINDOR!

That was great. Do it again. :D

Cheers,
~*~LIZ

Scott Holmes posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 5:41pm

nice, very wonderful piece of work yet again.
i really enjoyed reading it.