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Ezra'eil posted a comment on Friday 30th January 2009 7:41pm

I have a question... If he had a dark magic detector that is almost always on.... How did he not notice the bone?

rikfairclough posted a comment on Tuesday 18th November 2008 2:14pm

This is possibly the best written fan fiction story I have ever read. Brilliant story!

dimriver posted a comment on Thursday 9th October 2008 5:24pm

It's amazing how much joy I get picturing Malfoy running into a tree.

Arinor posted a comment on Tuesday 30th September 2008 2:07am

Excellent work.

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Tuesday 17th June 2008 11:53am

Outstanding chapter. I love this story and really enjoy reading it. This is my third or fourth time reading it.

gunny

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Tuesday 17th June 2008 6:58am

Very good chapter.

gunny

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Tuesday 17th June 2008 5:17am

Outstanding chapter to a fine story. I like the way you are not going into detail on the sex. Some stories go into such detail that all you get is sex with little bits of other stuff thrown in as filler. This is much better. Nice writing.

gunny

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Tuesday 17th June 2008 5:10am

Good chapter to a good story.

gunny

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Monday 16th June 2008 10:02am

Very good chapter. Draco was always an idiot.

gunny

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Monday 16th June 2008 5:44am

Outstanding chapter to an outstanding story.

gunny

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Friday 13th June 2008 1:04pm

Outstanding story, I really love the fun stuff. Nice writing.

gunny

arwen posted a comment on Thursday 8th May 2008 5:56pm

I really love your writing. I've read this story about four times so far :)

I just have an issue with morality in this chapter. Fred and George state that their consciences prevent them from keeping money they win on a sure bet.

I accept that Harry bends a lot of rules to improve life for a lot of people, but is cheating at betting really one of these stupid regulations that are all right to break? Even if you donate the money that you steal, that doesn't make it all right. If somebody stole your wallet and donated the contents to charity, would you be all right with that? Fred and George had insider information and used it to cheat.

Betting on Malfoy is not a crime. I find it hard to believe that every person who bet money on him deserved to have their money stolen, even in fanfiction. Gambling is not a crime either. Don't you think Harry would be a little indignant if Malfoy found some way to win the whole thing, betting and winning millions of galleons on it?

Logically, either taking money from people on a sure bet is moral or it isn't. If it is moral (which I don't accept), then keeping it is all right. If it's immoral, donating to charity doesn't make the fact that it's stealing all right. What you do with stolen money does not change the fact that it's stolen.

Cassie_Heart posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd April 2008 6:54pm

this was a good tale of nothing but like i have been saying in every comment HOPE.

i agree with the last comment

... power of hope, because without it you were lost, but with it you could do anything

. i think that is so true when i or my friends have a problem i just look at them and say no matter the problem always keep the most important thing HOPE. yea HOPE.

but anyway it was a great tale and that was a great chapter.

Cassie_Heart posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd April 2008 4:14pm

that was just another great chapter to this neverending HOPEFUL tale. HOPE...HOPE...HOPE...HOPE. just a great tale and another great chapter

Cassie_Heart posted a comment on Monday 21st April 2008 5:23pm

this chapter was so awsome and i had to stop readin relax think over what i read than start again. HOPE...HOPE...HOPE...HOPE. that is the most perfect word for the tale. HOPE

Cassie_Heart posted a comment on Sunday 20th April 2008 11:48am

HAHAHA i luv how made malfoy look like an idiot and everything running into a tree. HAHAHA i luvd it. this chapter was awsome. keep writing

Cassie_Heart posted a comment on Sunday 20th April 2008 9:00am

this chapter was wonderful i absolutly luved it. i will say it again as i have before this story so fits the title it is almost horrible to read to know that everything u write is completely true of how i see harry in the real HP books. honurable, caring, and protective of the ones he luvs.HOPE....HOPE......HOPE

Cassie_Heart posted a comment on Saturday 19th April 2008 9:54pm

this chapter of the tragic but faithful tale was ausome i totally luved it keep writing.

Cassie_Heart posted a comment on Saturday 19th April 2008 9:04am

IT JUST GETS BETTER AND BETTER!!!!!!!! i luv it. keep writing. PLEASE....PLEASE.....PLEASE!!
i luv ur stuff. again i say that this story so fits the title HOPE. just a girl and a boy with just that lonely strand of unforgiving HOPE. keep writing cause i luv it.

Cassie_Heart posted a comment on Friday 18th April 2008 10:02pm

this was the most dramatic thing i think i have ever read of urs, i luv it, it is creative, dramatic, romanic and more. i totally luved it. keep writing PLEASE. i luv ur writing. its like no matter how many times i read this it just gets better and better, like when i read the HP books. sry u will have to get used to me speaking my mind sometime i type, think, and speak without thinking. it is like i just do it cause it is natural and much easier then tryin to think things through even though it can get me into trouble. oh crap im doing it again. sry. any way i do luv this chapter of the tale of a girl and a boy with a small strand of sometimes unforgiving HOPE.