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Freckles posted a comment on Tuesday 1st February 2011 8:51am

Now one of my favorite stories ever! Love It!!!

King Darius posted a comment on Tuesday 1st February 2011 4:48am

sorry to hear you deleted the epilogue, good story though. one plot hole in this chapter though: dumbledore relying on snape for potions. hes a brilliant alchemist in his own right

lwj2 posted a comment on Friday 28th January 2011 9:59pm

I enjoyed this very much. Thank you.

Keeroo92 posted a comment on Friday 21st January 2011 6:43am

Aww, how sweet! Harrys a romantic at heart!

Keeroo92 posted a comment on Friday 21st January 2011 5:21am

Great duel! I wouldn't have thought of diverting the cruciatus to Harry. Nice job!

Keeroo92 posted a comment on Friday 21st January 2011 3:08am

Draco, Draco, Draco of the Malfoy's, watch out for that tree! Lol when I typed malfoy, the auto spell check wanted to change it to lapdog...

Keeroo92 posted a comment on Thursday 20th January 2011 9:00pm

What an entrance! They sure showed Hogwarts! Great job!

Keeroo92 posted a comment on Thursday 20th January 2011 4:15pm

That was great! How they finally kissed was very natural and realistic. Well done!

Keeroo92 posted a comment on Thursday 20th January 2011 6:04am

The description of the dance was excellent. I could see it in my head! Well done!

Keeroo92 posted a comment on Thursday 20th January 2011 2:45am

Damn!!! That's one he'll of a revelation! Poor Harry, he never gets to control ANYTHING in his life...

Keeroo92 posted a comment on Wednesday 19th January 2011 3:58pm

Gabrielle and Harry... That's a pairing I've never seen before. Interesting. I'll have to see how it plays out but great work so far!

amysds posted a comment on Thursday 30th December 2010 4:14am

Ok this is probably an odd question but I really hope you know the answer. I recently got a kindle for Christmas which is cool - except everytime I'm online to read fanfic I'm getting comments from parents on how I must not like kindle etc. So I was wondering if you knew how to send the story in one of the available formats to a kindle? I would love to save it as one of my books - which would make parents AND me happy! lol

Jezza88 posted a comment on Thursday 23rd December 2010 3:31am

I just re-read the story and it's still a fantastic read!

But, I think that you should have kept the epilogue chapter here as it was a great way to finish off the story.

Is there anything I can say for you to put it back up for people who really enjoyed it? Also, isn't it more important the readers enjoy what they are reading? Just my opinion and you don't have to follow it, but it would be good to have it back up.

migele posted a comment on Thursday 9th December 2010 11:12pm

I just did another reread of Hope, then I wondered where the epilogue was, amusingly enough it was the only part of the story that never got saaved on my hard drive for offline reading.

I probably wrot it before, and am writing it again, but this is probably one of the best Harry/Gabrielle stories ever, amuyingly another one of the top 5 is by you as well.

cheers
migi

LadyJade7210 posted a comment on Monday 6th December 2010 5:03am

i must say this truly explanes the bond of a veela and her mate if only a true veela could explane things this easyly......

Jack Butler posted a comment on Sunday 5th December 2010 5:03pm

Wherever you got your "fine dining" menus from, I have to say that as a professional chef most of the combinations wouldn't work when you consider such things as aftertaste, mouth feel, and flavor-combination.

Picky, I know, but there it is.

aznkickazz95 posted a comment on Saturday 4th December 2010 3:49am

easily best story of this pairing and one of the best in general

thaumologist posted a comment on Thursday 18th November 2010 10:38am

This is the second time I've read this, and I still find it beautiful. I do find it odd that Fleur talks about maybe bonding herself at the start, but that does make it easier to explain to harry.

This has quite possibly made harry/gabi one of my more favoured ships...

thanks for writing,
C

Simon13 posted a comment on Wednesday 20th October 2010 12:59pm

I'm not even sure you still read reviews, but I'll write one anyway.

"Hope" is a very important story to me, in a way, because it was the first HP fanfiction story I ever read. And I was stunned.

It has great plot, very good character development. In some ways it's better than the original JKR fiction that it's based on. It's such a beautiful romance. Scratch that, it's a fairy tale.

This is the 3rd time I read this story; I read it pretty much every year and it lifts my spirits up every time. The first time I read it, I had found some faults in it much more annoying than I do now.

I feel like you didn't have all the layout planned from the start. And it sort of shows in the first few chapters - Fleur talking about maybe Mating with Bill at the beginning is just unbelievable later, once we understand all the consequences of Mating. I feel like the idea of what Mating means sort of changed throughout the first few chapters until it settled on something much more powerful than suggested at first.

In general this story suffers a little from what all fanfiction suffers: serialization. You publish chapters as you go, as in TV series, instead of finishing your work of art as a one singe piece, like a movie. By doing it like that you took away the possibility of rewriting something early. I think if you ever came back, read and rewrote bits of this story, making it more harmonious, it would have been the best piece of fanfiction ever. But I _do_ understand why you won't do it. And it is very good as is. And the different pace of the chapters didn't bother me as much this time, as I already knew what to expect.

Another thing that bothered me when reading the story for the first time was the suddenness of the Death Eater attack. It just so out of the blue. But now I sort of get it, as I look at this story in a different fashion. It's a fairy tale, not a novel. It needs a villain for one thing only, and Draco does just that. This tale needs it's wicked witch to be defeated, and there's no need for darker aspects in it. It is, after all, a fairy tale.

Now I'm off to read Happily Ever After. One thing I do "hate" you for a little bit, is that you've made Harry/Gabrielle such a beautiful story in my mind. And nothing anyone has written comes even close to "Hope". And there's only 200k words of it... Fortunately I can reread it in a few months.

About the deletion of Epilogue: I understand why you did it. It contained three things I really loved:
- the depositing of Harry's diaries in the chamber where Merlin is resting;
- Harry and Gabby joining their heroes in the afterlife;
- Gabby asking Harry to bond with him.
And I wish this was somewhere, in a new epilogue, or something. But the epilogue that was here, did somehow not sit too well with the rest of the story, and I do remember being disappointed after reading it.

As last words from me: Thank you.

Trogo posted a comment on Tuesday 28th September 2010 3:12pm

Arrgghh! Where is my Potter Quidditch Team?

Superb story, kept me obsessed and away from school work (procrastination excuse).

I love your stories!