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FalseAngel posted a comment on Tuesday 27th February 2018 2:08am

This was a great read. One of the best Harry/Gabrielle fics i have read.

Hmm, would like to see a sequal to this as it seems there is still alot it can do going by what we have heard of Harry's plans.

Anyways, thanks for the entertainment and i really hope you do decide to do a continuation of it or at least another Harry/Gabrielle fic (not that many of them and what there is are usually 2nd rate at best).

Jason9 posted a comment on Monday 19th February 2018 1:08am

Still one of the best HP fanfics ever. Absolutely the best canon compliant (close enough - and honestly, who cares about canon at this point?) post-Hogwarts fiction, and probably story with the absolute best characterizations of Harry, Ron, and Hermione. Just loads of fun, strikes a perfect balance, and absolutely re-readable.

The boy who slept posted a comment on Sunday 11th February 2018 6:05pm

This was amazing thank you!!

nounours4 posted a comment on Friday 26th January 2018 9:03pm

À review, just some word for your congratulation, nothing about a very long text, an story born from your imagination. I'd like. Succès.

ichaos posted a comment on Tuesday 18th July 2017 12:09am

I really liked this story. I think that Gabrielle & Harry make a great couple. It's too bad that there aren't more stories based on this pairing around.

Tetron posted a comment on Sunday 1st January 2017 1:35am

Great story

Rlpj4 posted a comment on Monday 19th December 2016 1:33pm

I have to say that re-reading this story is always entertaining. Somehow, I find myself coming back to this story when I get tired of the usual stuff that tends to come out of FF dot net and other sites nowadays. Granted, my HP stories are about the same, which is why I've got dozens of unfinished stories.

Anyway, I just thought I'd let you know how much I enjoyed re-reading this story. It will, along with several of your stories, remain on my re-read list when I get the time and hankering for something good to do to pass time.

bkronks posted a comment on Tuesday 13th December 2016 2:14am

This is quite possibly one of the best stories I have ever read

atacama posted a comment on Sunday 4th December 2016 9:38pm

I like this story.

There are some small issues, but I noticed no major problems.

Ok, it is a Super!Harry story.

Regards

Velial13 posted a comment on Friday 24th June 2016 8:06am

This story has only one huge problem - reasonable Ron, it's so out of the realm of possibility, I can't take it seriously.

Jimbocous posted a comment on Saturday 4th June 2016 8:06am

Thanks for a great (re)read!

JackPotr posted a comment on Sunday 8th May 2016 12:43am

This has to be one of the best fics I have ever read. In fact, I think this was at least my fourth time through it. Well done! It also happens to be one of my favorite pairings and I really like how you portrayed the connection between Harry and Gabby. I also liked your portrayal of Ron. I think you showed him as the man we all hoped he would become.

nimistar posted a comment on Friday 29th April 2016 5:05pm

you know, i keep comming back to this website thinking i've seen all the good stories only to be surprised. this was an amazing story and i thank you for writing it.

Shadowdog posted a comment on Friday 19th February 2016 1:26am

This'll be my 4th or 5th time reading this. Probably my favorite Harry/gabby fic. Actually it just may be my favorite period. The emotions are human, the interactions are fairly realistic, and there's the betrayal/shove-it-up-their-ass combo that makes me happy inside.

Shadowdog posted a comment on Thursday 18th February 2016 4:09am

Great story. I've read this several times and it's still awesome.

sudoapt posted a comment on Friday 8th January 2016 7:59am

Hope is a well-written story. The characters, backstory, tensions blend well together, nicely done!

The biggest problem...and its quite a big elephant in the room, is that you made Ron Bilius Weasley a goddamn Gary-Stu in this story. He is essentially the PERFECT friend, the PERFECT husband, basically the PERFECT everything which is incredibly unrealistic. Too perfect!

Canon Ron was a terrible friend, vindictive, jealous and very insecure with very few redeeming qualities. He is what you call a high-maintenence friend and the only reason Harry clung to Ron in the books like a life-line was because Ron was Harry's first and only friend after a decade of loneliness and depressing life of abuse, so its only expected that Harry would be afraid to make new friends at Hogwarts aside from Hermione. If it had been anyone else, they would have cut Ron loose and made new friends who would understand, that for Harry to have fame, wealth and political power, Harry had to loose his family to a mad man. Instead, Ron is constantly jealous of Harry's fame and wealth....epitome of an awful friend who is one-dimensional.

I can understand you wanted to make Ron grow up and be mature in this story but he is just too perfect and has absolutely no flaws whatsoever!

It doesn't help that both JK Rowling and many fanfic writers such as yourselves have fallen into the trap of glossing over the fact that....Hermione would date and marry the very first boy who essentially bullied her when she entered the Magic world! It wasn't Draco Malfoy....no it was Ronald Bilius Weasley who first mercessly teased Hermione on "know-it-all bookworm, oh that girl has serious issues" that should have by rights left a lasting impression of: "This boy is definetely not boyfriend material".

Think about it for a moment, a young 11yr young girl hears about a new world of magic where unicorns, dragons and magical people exist which must seem like a fairy tale ...a place to make friends. Bear in mind that Hermione would have been bullied in muggle school for being a know-it-all bookworm before she went to Hogwarts, so its only expected that she hopes to make friends with her own 'kind', with people who can understand her.

First thing upon entering it....is a bigoted Ron with a blackhole of a stomach, atrocious table manners with "the emotional range of a teaspoon" who bullies and teases her. Worse even, he never actually apologized to Hermione at all in the novel after the troll incident. Anouther thing that bothers me is that Ron literally brought Hermione to tears almost on a daily bases every year and I have never seen Ron make her laugh once in the books.

Yep...by rights that should have PERMANTENLY imbued an aversion to all things ginger for Hermione, so for the life of me I don't understand why JK Rowling shipped them together.

But I digress, this story is great except for Ron being nothing like cannon Ron...even if he does grow up and acts more maturely, he should still have some character flaws present that allows readers to connect more with the character.

Katsuhito posted a comment on Thursday 17th December 2015 12:41am

Just rereading this story for the umpteenth time. I'm actually kindof sad that the epilogue is gone. While it may not have lived up to your own standards, it definitely did to many of your readers - it still engendered an emotional response from me, at any rate.

It is, of course, your perrogative as the author to do whatever you like with your stories, but I remind you that an artist's worst critic is usually themselves. <G>

-Kat Ps. I don't suppose you'd be willing to send me the old epi? ;)

Wanderer posted a comment on Friday 16th October 2015 7:09am

Simply stunning, one of the best stories I've read, fic or ff, amatuer or pro.

You had me laughing, frustrated and choked up. You used excellent puns and obscure references, yet had a clear and solid plot. Your characters had depth and developed naturally. I'm hooked on your writing and am quite happy to see you've finished several other works, I can't wait!

Blessings, Majerus

wildbeast1498 posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd September 2015 6:51am

awesome first chapter really got me into it! Excited to see how Harry handles his injury, does he feel contempt with his temporary job? or does he try to heal it with some kind of spell so as to get back to what he loves doing? can't wait to see what you did with this story!

xxaugustasxx posted a comment on Tuesday 30th June 2015 5:42am

Bloody amazing story!