BJH posted a comment on Friday 12th May 2006 5:49pm

French Veela Shows Her True Colors

In the most awaited Duel in the last century, Draco Malfoy, the handsome and well thought of heir to the Malfoy Danasty, was expected to handily prove his innocence of the scurulous charges that were leveled against him by known coquette and Veela, Gabrielle Delaceur. However, as anyone who was unfortunate enough to witness this dispicable event can tell you, that was not what happened.

Proving that the steps our beloved Ministry has taken to protect us and control the behavior of these predatory dark creatures were both needed and most welcome, Miss Delaceur showed all present, and the rest of the Wizarding World through this newspaper, that she is a monster wrapped in the guise of a girl. While mercilessly taunting the poor Hogwarts Professor, the half-breed beast showed a knowledge of spells and magic well beyond anything a normal human could be expected to be exposed to. Her use of spells of questionable origin and dubious intent were far beyond anything that should have been allowed. Professor Malfoy did everything humanly possible to counter these shadow arts and gallantly remained firmly within the bounds of established deuling ediquette.
Finally, driven past all levels of human endurance by the Veela's questionable and dishonorable tactics, the brave combatant was forced to flee for his very life as no one present, especially the supposed "hero" of the recent war, Mr. Harry Potter, saw fit to attampt to control the half-human's unsavory conduct.
We at the Daily Prophet extend our sympathies to Mr. Malfoy and our wishes that he remain safe from retribution from the foreigners currently occupying the grounds of our beloved Hogwarts. Perhaps when the French "ambassadors of learning" return to their own country, Mr. Malfoy can seek justice from the Wizengamut and be allowed to return to us without fear of attack.

Rita Skeeter reporting

P.S. The bit revealing Sybil as the force behind the curtain was a brilliant tease and ending for the chapter. I'm left wondering if Snape and Malfoy work for her knowingly or is she the one manipulating Dumbledore and the two Slytherins are merely clueless pawns with no real idea of the final goals.

BJH

Rachel1 posted a comment on Friday 12th May 2006 5:28pm

FINALLY you updated! It took you long enough, but it was well worth the wait. :)

v posted a comment on Friday 12th May 2006 5:14pm

worth the wait, thanks

riegert8 posted a comment on Friday 12th May 2006 4:21pm

I thought this was very good. I can't wait for Sybill trelawney, Dumbledore, snape & dcaco get what they deserve. I hope that Dumbledore don't have some lame excuse why he act so a asshole. I
for one don't mind waiting. You are one of the few author that you know the story going to be reall good. I started reading your story's at fanfiction, then move over here. My favorite story is Hope, This means war, chances, alone, these dreams. I hope that update this mean war some time in the future. I enjoy reading your story's and I plan to read more in the futureriegert8@netscape.net

Kyle Gassett posted a comment on Friday 12th May 2006 2:46pm

This was a great chapter in a great story. I can't wait to see the next.

wana10 posted a comment on Friday 12th May 2006 2:31pm

i liked the chapter, i liked it a lot in fact, but im seeing some evil foreshadowing.
1)harry recognized gabby was in danger through the bond and ran to help
2)hermione has found a way to mask the bond
thus im seeing a scene where the bond is masked and something happens to gabby..uhoh!
i surfed over to the site, saw a new chapter of hope, and new where my next hour was. thanks for the amazing stories

fierygenius posted a comment on Friday 12th May 2006 2:13pm

Wow! I've read all the chapters in this story, and this was awesome! You really know your stuff! I love how you're characterizing everyone in here - they're like they are in the books, but still different. I can't wait for your next update!

-Casey

Jack Sloper posted a comment on Friday 12th May 2006 2:10pm

Honestly, Tim... the only thing that I think people complain about in your fics is that they want to read more of them. Heh. And thats true, at least.

I just wanted to comment that I have severly enjoyed your writing style. Intelligent, but not overbearing, with a good mix of action, drama, suspense, and mush. And I can't get enough of how many different pranks/revenges you can think of for humor. So good. Thanks!

Oh, and yeah... The more contemporary version is "...another thing coming." While historically, it's "think", so you ane your betas are all correct, technically. Ironic that I got into a heated discussion on this topic before you posted the chapter.

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Friday 12th May 2006 1:54pm

Very good story. I love the family stuff and the way you are doing Harry's friends. Really good stuff.

gunny

ulkser posted a comment on Friday 12th May 2006 1:23pm

too long!!!!! you should have splited this into two pieces. i expected some adult scenes but none came.

not a splendid chapter as i expected and waited for weeks but it is good none the less.

Bob Joyce posted a comment on Friday 12th May 2006 1:17pm

Love it, hate getting into uncompleted fics
but you got me. Great AU

Joe Ritter posted a comment on Friday 12th May 2006 1:00pm

This is so much like the old serials at the movies but without the evil cliffies. Each episode(chapter) is better than the one before. I am enjoying every installment. Please continue writing your vision(s) and ignore all us whiners!

DAUFahnder posted a comment on Friday 12th May 2006 11:50am

I have just reread it. What exactly does this mean:

"Nevertheless, the precedent has been set," Dumbledore responded thoughtfully, after a pointed look from Snape.

I understand the words, but where was this precedent? Was Snape at one point in time under the Imperious and could then lie under Veritaserum? This "after a pointed look from Snape" is a little ... , no, is a big bit unclear

Rick Gale posted a comment on Friday 12th May 2006 11:48am

I love this story! Finally, Harry gets some peace, comfort, and love! I love the way Gabrielle is growing and becoming the perfect companion for Harry.

I am concerened that Ron and Hermione are acting. I am afraid that they will do something to sever the Bond with asking Harry's permission - because it's for the best for Harry to be 'free'. Do I hear death defying - last minutes heroics from everyones hero - or does he fail to save the day and watch Gabrielle die - killing a part of him with her - and making Ron and Hermione hate the day they ever knew Harry Potter? - Which won't be long since Harry would go insane and probable end up killing them and destroying the entire world.

Needless to say, I look forward to the next chapter.

rdgale2000

Sam3 posted a comment on Friday 12th May 2006 11:07am

Yes!!! an update, you are one of my favourite authors and the fact that we hadn't heard from you in a while is slightly sad. Very good chapter, and definetely worth the wait, it was long, well structured and intersting. You actually feel part of the story!!!
Very well done

Asad posted a comment on Friday 12th May 2006 10:51am

An excellent update to Hope.

I thank you for sharing this wonderful fic with your readers. The betas have done an excellent job.

YOu covered quite a bit in this update and I eagerly await the next part which would close this masterpiece.

Liane posted a comment on Friday 12th May 2006 10:41am

Well, you know you are very frustrating, don't you? I can't think of anything to say about this, other than I love it (like all the chapters, it isn't very original). The professors match was wonderful, and seeing Malfoy get his due was very good. I'm now eagerly awaiting to see what will happen to Snape (there are some fics where I like him, like TMW, but here, he deserves anything he gets!). Please, keep going on like this.

Liane

hyper_swain posted a comment on Friday 12th May 2006 10:39am

it is crabbe not krabbe other than that it was another excellent chapter!

mjc posted a comment on Friday 12th May 2006 10:37am

Actually, Tim, since it was part of spoken dialog, the think/thing is really a non-issue. You are 100% correct, people do SAY it that way, so writing it as someone's dialog is perfectly valid.

Now...

WOW! WOW! WOW! WOW!

There was so much in this chapter...

Where to start...

The heck with it, great chapter!

Only one slightly disappointing item...she didn't do "The Amazing Bouncing Ferret" Act 2, but the "Transvestite for Hire" sign was a good substitute.

The use of Fidelius during the duel was truly inspired.

And I eagerly await what is coming for The Bat...

carlinonthebrain posted a comment on Friday 12th May 2006 9:58am

fabulous work, as usual. I espcially enjoyed the ferret bashing. your harry is as devious as they come, and that is the best kind IMHO. I hope the next one is not so far off, but i understand that real life gets in the way of updating. congratualtions on another stellar chapter