fountaam posted a comment on Tuesday 7th November 2006 5:21am

reread it all last night and hope you will be posting more soon.

ghostfilly05 posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 12:08pm

This is a wonderful story, please please please keep going with it!! I can't wait to see what you have planned for the next chapter!

Schoggi posted a comment on Saturday 4th November 2006 4:19pm

like it? are you kidding? love it!

Noah posted a comment on Friday 3rd November 2006 1:21pm

awsome story and the humor that you have incorporated into this has had me rolling with laughter.

Asher posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 1:10pm

I absolutly love it!!!

And i have to say Im very much looking forward to you updating,So please..Soon? :P

Valauthiel posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 8:10am

Omg, I love it! Been reading all chapters and i just love the story, can't wait for the next chapter!

Kathleen posted a comment on Saturday 28th October 2006 2:25pm

Just reread the whole story. It's so lovely.
I am dying to read the part where he finally accepts the bond, and the costume contest...but really, the story is mostly wrapped up after this chapter. The new Quidditch team is a fantastic idea...and I LOVE that Gabrielle is going to get her doctorate while she waits for Harry to retire. :) I was struck anew by all the wonderful things in this story...thanks again for sharing it.

Meghan posted a comment on Friday 27th October 2006 12:35pm

I beg you for an update!!!

Shayne Rich posted a comment on Wednesday 25th October 2006 4:55am

I just finished reading TMW last week and Hope last night. I just have to say these are my all time favorite stories, ever. I just can't tell you how much I appreciate your work and your stories. In my oppinion at least, you are THE best.

I subscribe to your list so I have been aware of some of your troubles. I hope things are going better.

Thanks again.

Shayne

KatelynEmma posted a comment on Wednesday 18th October 2006 9:19pm

I LOVED IT

Hermetic Alchemist posted a comment on Monday 9th October 2006 5:55pm

And I just realise I screwed up the quote. It should of course be

"Cry Havoc! And let slip the dogs of war" (Mark Anthony - Julius Caesar)

Hermetic Alchemist posted a comment on Monday 9th October 2006 5:37pm

I've thought it several times and finally am posting this.

Shurely it should be

"Cry God for Harry, England and St. George".

And while we're quoting Shakespeare how about using "Cry Havoc! And loose the dogs of war!"

RGH

RedPhoenix_2k3 posted a comment on Sunday 8th October 2006 2:46am

Just had to go back and reread this great fic. One of the things that caught my attention this time around it that you seemingly misplace your pronouns. For example, during the Beaux/Hog match you wrote "He didn’t doubt that they’d be finding pieces of the Hogwarts players in the stands if he let her have his way." Was this intentional? If not it was a mistake that leads to a whole different meaning that the intended sentence. :)

Any idea when the next part might be out?

MasterBralia posted a comment on Thursday 5th October 2006 7:48pm

I wonder what the Daily Prophet is going to do with those photo's, I'm also looking forward to the ball and the final quidditch match. It should be fun. Hope you'll update soon!! Keep up the fantastic work!!

ponderous stibbons posted a comment on Sunday 24th September 2006 7:18am

Some of your lines made me laugh out loud. I never knew Krum could be made to say anything hilarious.

CoyoteScion posted a comment on Wednesday 20th September 2006 2:19pm

please please please update soon
this is by far the absolute best Harry-Gabrielle pairing that I've read.... quite point of fact EVER.

xBizzle posted a comment on Tuesday 12th September 2006 5:16pm

This chapter screamed romance. They finally kissed. And hot damn was it good. Evil divination teachers. Are Malfoy and Snape gay with each other? HAHA. I love how you compared Harry to Merlin and there similiarities and differiences. Again, I loved the final bit with Gabrielle and Harry sleeping in the same bed. She is far maturer than a normal 16 year old. Great chapter. Runs off to next chapter.

xBizzle posted a comment on Sunday 10th September 2006 2:48pm

WOOHOO! Harry and Gabrielle take there relationship to another level. Love the nightclub scene. The way to described her was perfect. I like how Hermione got a talkin' to and how Harry handled it. Awesome chapter.

xBizzle posted a comment on Saturday 9th September 2006 8:19pm

In this chapter I like how Ron is portraided as Harry's right hand man because that is who he is. Hermoine bad. haha. I also like how Gabrielle is totally and utterly devoted to Harry. I loved it when Harry bet the crap outta Malfoy and ignored the manipulative old man and pissed off Snape. How Harry tested Gabrielle's loyalty and love to him. Her reaction just proves how devoted she is to him. His entrance to Beaubaxtons was perfect. The nickname "Gabby" is nice...basically a pet name. Damn sneaky Dumbledore. Go Gryffindor.

xBizzle posted a comment on Saturday 9th September 2006 5:39pm

I like how you displayed Ron and Hermoine in this chapter. The way they appear as a married couple is a lot like how I believed they would've turned out. I LOVE how you described Harry's reaction to learning out that he has been manipulated. How Gabrielle begged him not to break the connection, but all thought I think having her in a bikini would've proved more comical/sexier. I also believe his attitude towards learning about the bond is correct as well by having fought a war and having it affect Harry the way it did. I like how mature Gabrielle and how grown up she is. That is the kinda girl Harry needs. Bravo!