Jon posted a comment on Thursday 3rd May 2007 6:39pm

Wow, outstanding as always...
Will we get to know the real story behind Hogwarts decline the next time? And the reason behing Dumbledore's eccentric behavior?
Will news of Malfoy come up?
Will Snape be arrested for any crime?
Great story!

Jamie L Wilson posted a comment on Thursday 3rd May 2007 6:29pm

Great chapter and don't worry about losing your touch. You've set a bar that few can touch and kept it there. Can't wait to see what happens next.

John Lee Howard posted a comment on Thursday 3rd May 2007 6:27pm

Awesome as always. Not that there was ever any doubt that it would be.

DobbyElfLord posted a comment on Thursday 3rd May 2007 6:20pm

I loved the ball and the costumes. I think the Twins and Hermione may put Harry's Merlin fixation together.

My only complaint about the chapter is it was over too soon!

Thanks for a great chapter!
Rick

merik posted a comment on Thursday 3rd May 2007 6:06pm

Great chapter as always Tim and well worth the wait. Looking forward to seeing how you pull everything together in the last part. Please keep up the writing, Your talent is much appreciated mate

kimpie06 posted a comment on Thursday 3rd May 2007 10:19am

As a Belgian myself, I'd like to note that Antwerp is located in the country of Belgium, not in Germany.

Silo posted a comment on Thursday 3rd May 2007 7:40am

so when do u plan to update this one and post the uther Harry gabby fic

oompahloompah80 posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd May 2007 8:19pm

Hi,
Very nicely written story. Couldn't resist not reading it straight. Hell - got up at 10:30 am in the morning. Had to make an excuse and call in sick for work... Damn You!
That said, please update soon....

snuffles007 posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd May 2007 3:13pm

Great chapter! I can't wait for the finale.

dakinumas posted a comment on Tuesday 1st May 2007 8:19pm

I don't understand how Hermione can easily block the bond connection between them when she doesn't understand how Harry's magic work? then it would be so dangerous if someone like Molfoy figures it out and try it on them then?

or does that's not going to work now that Harry and Gabrille has made love to complete the bond fully?

KenF posted a comment on Sunday 29th April 2007 7:13pm

I've shied away from this story for a while now, and just read it straight through. This might be your best work from the mental/psychological angle. I look forward to the next two chapters.

kirt30 posted a comment on Sunday 29th April 2007 4:44am

I LOVED IT, thank you so much for updating this story this chapter was great please add more soon. THANK YOU

Maxtaf posted a comment on Saturday 28th April 2007 7:58am

Yeah!! This is one of my 3 favorite stories ever, and now I have Hope that it will be completed!

Terry Swain posted a comment on Saturday 28th April 2007 7:40am

Great chapter.

cherrypit8 posted a comment on Saturday 28th April 2007 7:32am

This story is wonderful! I've never read a Gabrielle/Harry fic before, but this story has got me hooked. I love all the characters and they way you have portrayed them so realistically despite the whole magic power stuff. Not to mention everyone is in character. I cannot wait for the next chapter to be posted, but until them I'm off to peruse your other fics. Happy writing!!

Rictor posted a comment on Saturday 28th April 2007 1:27am

Just so you know, as it bothered me when i read until i came up with the right word, even in restaurants in hotels, what you called a concierge is actually a maitre'd(i think the spelling is right but am not sure) not a big deal, but i thought it to be something you might want to know. Love the story, update soon please.

sejones posted a comment on Friday 27th April 2007 5:36pm

Thank you for the update. I was really hoping there would be another this week, but it just increases the anticipation for ch 11. I have one editorial comment. When you describe a pair of Gabrielle's sandals you call them "patent black leather." Perhaps in the UK the convention is different, but in the US it is called black patent leather because patent leather comes in many different colors.
I am very much looking forward to what happens in the last Quidittch match and what is wrong with Dumbledore. I have an image of Malfoy bursting in on Harry and Gabby's wedding to try to make trouble and being swatted like a fly. I look forward to the conclusion of the story.

Metheglyn posted a comment on Friday 27th April 2007 12:00pm

Hi. I rather enjoy this story and have read it multiple times, but just noticed an inconsistency. You start Gunther Stradivis off in this chapter as the Durmstrang keeper, but partway through he switches to seeker. I don't recall which you use later in the story, but here it is slightly distracting once you've noticed it. Other than that, however, this is a very entertaining tale. :-)

in-fanficauthors posted a comment on Thursday 26th April 2007 8:27am

I admire their athleticism if they are able to dance so well and so long immediately after eating. Perhaps their magic gives them that extra boost.

Great chapter. Please continue.

Patches posted a comment on Tuesday 24th April 2007 11:50pm

This is a great chapter. Gabrielle has to deal with the press after beaating Malfoy in the duel. That leaves Harry with an opeing to take Aimee with him to pick out an engagement ring for Gabrielle. That goes extremely well with the bonus of Harry and Aimee getting to know each other better. I am so glad Harry is open to Aimee. He needs an older woman in his life that he can bounce ideas off of. Aimee is going to be his mother-in-law. That will be a very special relationship in his life. The dinner with Ron and Hermione was good. I like the fact that this Ron is more adult and well rounded. It shows that he has indeed grown up as well. He would have to to be able to keep up with Hermione. I especially like the way he controls her excessive study habits. The bond insulation spell that Hermione worked out was a surprise. That and Harry and Gabrielle's reactions to the spell. I'm glad they didn't try to extend the experiment any longer. It was painful for Harry and Gabrielle. At least this way he knows that he loves her and she loves him. That is extremely important.
I love the scene with Rita Skeeter and Trelawney. I never would have imagined Rita coming to Harry and Gabrielle's recue from defamation of character. Her explanations were excellent however. Rita has learned self-preservation. That and as it says she will get the scoop of the year by getting Harry and Gabrielle's scoop interview and she has Percy owing her a debt. Not a bad place for a reporter to be. Garbrielle's reaction to the article in the Profit was unexpected and good. I'm glad Harry is letting Jean take care of the Profit. That was really stupid of them to print such a pack of lies when there was such a large crowd at the duel. I really like the way Harry proposed. First a night on the town. A really great time dancing. Then the bacony. What a romantic place to propose. The end result was perfect timing. Now they have the Bond taken care of. I really look forward to the last 2 chapters. This is such a great love story. Thak you so much for writing. pms
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