Nanio posted a comment on Friday 4th May 2007 1:28pm

It was a beautiful chapter, but Harry has become a bit too single-minded/forgetful. I think that, based on the Harry earlier in the story, he would've known to get an alibi or some sort of doppleganger. He was always paranoid about the press, after all. The harry post-Gabrielle seems to have almost forgotten all about the press.

Anyway, it would be nice to know about the original character. Just a nice side-story or drabble would be enough for me, really.

Christopher Patton posted a comment on Friday 4th May 2007 1:25pm

Thanks for another great chapter to this wonderful story.

I loved the staff meeting when Harry took control of it and the Ball was handled so well. It's great to see all of his friends working like crazy behind the scene to make the night so great for the two of them.

I'm looking forward to the rest of this story so much.

azul posted a comment on Friday 4th May 2007 11:58am

Interesting poetry. Kinda describes the Bond, does it not?

dakinumas posted a comment on Friday 4th May 2007 11:37am

god , I hate Hermione in this story! why does shehave to get her way?

The bond , Gabby and Harry have is special, and they both went a long way and undergo a lot of paint before happiness and plus, Veela mating Bond , She should be a Veela to be able to duplicate that!

She's Simply able to block the bond and not got the nerve to research and copy it!

The bond feels not so special anymore, If everyone can do it.

argghhh bloody know it all, I h , well I don't like her!

can you tune down her annoyingness, no , that's not the right word! well, her annoying habit! PLEASE

dakinumas posted a comment on Friday 4th May 2007 11:26am

as being someone at Hogwarts,mystery woman?

why are you doing this?

he still has a lot of affection for....

.......it's not McGonagall, is it?

YOU are BAD......sniff corrupting my innocent mind like this!!!!!

jalva200 posted a comment on Friday 4th May 2007 11:12am

Hehehehe i really liked this chapter so when they going to find and beat the hell out of Draco... will he insprince a painful death followed by a enterndy in hell??

John Fitzgerald posted a comment on Friday 4th May 2007 11:09am

I hope that you will update again soon. Thanks.

Aquilara posted a comment on Friday 4th May 2007 10:42am

Hello!

This chapter is an amazing start in the weekend. Fabulous. I just loved.

Hope the next one comes soon.

jedifanatic posted a comment on Friday 4th May 2007 10:21am

There is a way that you could write the mystery woman into the Hope universe, simply write it as an independent story. It wouldn't probably take you all that long to do it since you seem to have the back story pretty much filled out already.

DizzyG posted a comment on Friday 4th May 2007 9:53am

The first time I read the sentence I thought it said "I note that Snape is here — standing in as the Hogwarts *roach*, I assume?"

Now I could just need some sleep but that seems strangely appropriate.

vivekgk posted a comment on Friday 4th May 2007 9:41am

Great chapter! I like how you've developed Gabrielle, and the connection to Harry. I also love Ron and Hermione in this story.

The only sour note I have is with the bit about Ginny screwing centaurs. Frankly, I thought that was a bit of bashing that could have been avoided.

Aimee951 posted a comment on Friday 4th May 2007 9:29am

This is another great chapter, although my imagination is not quite as good as yours so i would love to hear the story of Harry's mystery girl please!!!

Aimee

ursis001 posted a comment on Friday 4th May 2007 9:21am

Excellent chapter, as allways.
please write more.
Thanks, ursis001

Shayne Rich posted a comment on Friday 4th May 2007 9:10am

What a wonderful story and a wonderful chapter.

I have absolutely loved this story and while I can't wait for the final installment, I kind of hate to see it over. Thanks for sharing it.

Shayne

SerendipitousNightcrawler posted a comment on Friday 4th May 2007 8:35am

Brilliant chapter, albeit something of a misnomer. Personally, I would have thought naming it Camelot would have been perfect considering the Ball, but whatever.

Love the twins. I can't say enough about how well written the supporting cast is in this story. Just curious, but that mobile phone thing sounds eerily similar to Ron's "Voice Floos" from "Test of Time". Is that where you got the idea?

I especially feel for Katie, I mean she's going to have a hard time finding a partner when she's always comparing him to Harry. Makes me wonder if she doesn't decide to just try and enjoy casual trysts and eventually have a child on her own (maybe ask Gabrielle is Harry could donate?). Anyway, I was surprised that she slipped up like that to be honest. I mean considering how well they've done at keeping it a secret it seems odd that she blurted it out like that.

Anyway, thanks again. Can't wait until the next chapter.

Alcatras posted a comment on Friday 4th May 2007 8:07am

I realy love your extra long chapters.
You take your time and make them long and filled with good stuff while others just write much.

freshwater posted a comment on Friday 4th May 2007 7:31am

Loved the meeting and the ball. Harry's choices for their costumes and charming the great hall was big enough, but then the twins' insight and the switcheroos to protect their privacy: totally brilliant!

You MUST do a bit on the mystery woman at Hogwarts....just have her bump into Harry briefly, then take us into her wistful recollections....yes?

Another reviewer suggested an outtake on the shopping trip to Sydney, and I'd like to second that motion.

Thanks for a heartwarming and amusing read yet again.

morriganscrow posted a comment on Friday 4th May 2007 7:02am

Excellent!
Beautifully written, densely packed, chapter with much to think on.
Keep up the great job.

Todd Rodgers posted a comment on Friday 4th May 2007 7:02am

You realise, of course, that you ruin us for other writing.

I really enjoyed this chapter, I specifically liked the cutting off at the school meeting and how quickly he brought the meeting to a close -- I was sitting on a conference call while I briefly browsed that section. A Harry/Snape duel in this particular version of the HP world. Wouldn't that be just too amusing -- and sadly too short.

Now where was Draco?

noylj posted a comment on Friday 4th May 2007 6:43am

I'll say it again...I wish this story wasn't cumming to a conclusion. This Harry and this Gabrielle are too interesting to not follow their future taking over the WW and maybe, just maybe, washing away a considerable amount of evil from the world.