Silo posted a comment on Thursday 24th May 2007 6:22am

so is there goign to be an update today

Mal posted a comment on Wednesday 23rd May 2007 10:43am

sinsitra? That is who i think it is anyways. This story is great, the best part is that i have never read a harry and gabrielle paring before, cause it's always been harry and ginny but thanks to you i love this paring and am going to try and find more stories on them. Great job with this chapter and i can wait till you next update

Decumo9 posted a comment on Tuesday 22nd May 2007 6:46pm

amazing story. Very original and kudos on taking a pairing almost unheard of and making a fic that is tremendously amazing.

Lady_Hope posted a comment on Saturday 19th May 2007 6:35am

So, i finished TMW and read some of your other stories but i fianlly am out of things to read and then it occured to me "HOPE"! So, now i'm reading this! YIPPE for me. I like it so far. i was wondering, though, ni the majority of your stories that i've read, dumbledore is portrayed almost as evil. is there a reason for that?

Silo posted a comment on Friday 18th May 2007 7:10am

so u ant going to update this fic angen

Silo posted a comment on Thursday 17th May 2007 8:13pm

r u going to update today or not

Silo posted a comment on Thursday 17th May 2007 3:24am

koool so are u going to update today so we get number 12

GuardianOfLight posted a comment on Wednesday 16th May 2007 12:08pm

Brilliant as always, two chapters at once, fantastic, I always re-read fics like this when new chapters come out and this one is always immensley satisfying to read, especially the staff quidditch match.

I believe I can now say beyond a shadow of a dought that you are my all time favorite author and that this is one of my all time favorite stories.

Keep up the outstanding work and please please please please please update soon.

GuardianOfLight

MonkeyAxman1302 posted a comment on Wednesday 16th May 2007 11:29am

Great chapter! Loved Harrys cunning plans. Great the Gabrielle used the potter turn to win the match.
This has to be the greatest line in this story, had me laughing so hard:
Harry raised his hands and looked amused. "What? I create a hole in wards that have been worked on for thousands of years and everyone is blasé. I just happen to not be noticed at the back of a room, and everyone is surprised?"
Harry hugging Minerva was great, especially the "sophisti-ma-cated" line!
Thanks for writing, I really enjoy this story, thanks for writing!
Monkey

MonkeyAxman1302 posted a comment on Tuesday 15th May 2007 2:06pm

Great chapter. Love your description of the beuxbatons move.
Thanks for writing.
Monkey

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2007 9:31pm

Cool, cool. This is just as amazing as always and I'm looking forward to the next update (also as always). It's so amazing I just don't know what to say except the sooner you update the sooner you get more rave reviews, and how much fun is that? Yay for this story. It rocks my socks off.

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2007 2:56pm

YAY!!! I am so happy for them, this is amazing. man, I love it!!!!

MonkeyAxman1302 posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2007 2:26pm

Good chapter. I really like the progression of Gabrielle and Harry's relationship as it seems so very natural.
Only comment would be the sudden plot twist of Snape, Draco, Trelawney and the Beuxbatons divination professor plotting against Harry seems quite forced and only there to give Harry some adversity.
Thanks for writing.
Monkey

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Sunday 13th May 2007 10:32pm

Yay for the amazing-ness that is this, the greatest of stories. I don't know why I only just got your alerts, but it has happened to me before with you site. Not that it bothers me all that much, your stuff is worth the coming to check. I love it, it's even better than I remembered, and that's really saying something.

Oh, by the way, I can almost garuntee that it's "another thing coming." I've never heard it any other way. Not that I distrust the skills of your betas, but as far as I know you're right...

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Sunday 13th May 2007 1:05am

Wow, Draco's a creep. Gah. Yay that you updated, I'm so excited. I went back a couple of chapters to remember what's happening. This is possibly my favorite story of all time and I'm so glad there's new stuff to read.

we9ge posted a comment on Friday 11th May 2007 12:59pm

I have to leave a quick review- my first for this story. I've been reading fanfiction almost daily since HBP came out and have many hundreds of stories- all ships except slash and other genres besides romance. This is definitely in my top five favorite stories. Tremendously addictive. I believe you created this history and background on the veela, which I know has been copied by others and it enriches the story and makes it more than just a typical romance. Originality in spades!!! I like your portrayal of Gabby and Harry as well. I know the end is near but I hate to see it so even though it has been a long road. Congrats on such a beautiful and fun story. Look forward to more. I'm still trying to steel myself to read about the bunny though.

pyrodaemon posted a comment on Thursday 10th May 2007 12:31am

I don't think that either this or the last chapter 'wasn't up to snuff'. The tone change, yes, but the quality didn't change at all. You entire story is beautiful. It's, as I tell everyone I recommend it to, is a believable, unbelievable fairy-tale (it makes sense to me and my friends anyways). You make Harry unbelievably powerful but with such taste that no one (us readers) even looks twice at the fact that he can do all these things that we'd usually sneer at in any other story.

I'm a romance junky, I believe angst is a necessary evil to make a good story but I also believe that no story should be completely based on it, including romances like so many people do (where the hero and heroine don't get together until the last page). I'm so glad that you've created a beautiful story that I can believe and, as cony as it sounds, dream about.

The entire tone of your story is what makes it so wonderful. Even the action parts are based around the fact that Harry and Gabrielle love each other so deeply that their willing to do anything for each other, bond or no bond.

As for the 'kiss and tell bitch' perhaps you can have Ron, you know 'here is foot, here is mouth Ron', tell us about her. He's bound to know despite that fact that Harry *doesn't* kiss and tell.

You and your beta(s?) do a wonderful job and should be extremely proud of yourselves. I can't wait for the next installment.

Stygius posted a comment on Wednesday 9th May 2007 7:33am

Katie walked up to Charlie and slowly circled him. She closed her eyes and took several deep breaths. "He’s not Harry," she announced, "but it should fool everyone who hasn’t slept with him. And of the other three, two aren’t here tonight, and I’ll talk with the last one."

thats one of the things Katie says. the last line is what i am interested in, "two aren't here tonight, and I'll talk with the last one", who was the last one.... or did you mean that she herself was teh last one... as far as i can remember was it 3or4 people that harry had slept with... i can't remember.... i know gabby felt them... but i can't recall it at this point...

look forward to finding out what happens at the match and also what happens with Katie. i would love to see more harry/katie fics, but alas... anyway, congrtats and update soon.

margaret1 posted a comment on Wednesday 9th May 2007 3:59am

I've finally got a chance to read this and *woo hoo* they're engaged - as usual this was a brlliant chapter - I really do think this is the best fic you have written.

*applauds*

light fan posted a comment on Tuesday 8th May 2007 10:20pm

Thanks for starting up this story again. I really enjoyed Harry having a love interest a little out of the norm. It'll be interesting what magical ideas of Merlin's you come up with for Harry to follow through on. Thanks again for writing.