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potterfanchuck posted a comment on Monday 24th February 2014 9:00pm

Glad to see Albus recognize his mistakes and try to rectify them. The British Wizard and Muggle World's don't deserve Harry perhaps the Veela Enclave does. I like the way you took care of Fudgepucker although losing his head like Snivellus did would have been good also.

potterfanchuck posted a comment on Monday 24th February 2014 8:55pm

Go Harry!!!! I'm sure they'll come back to you begging for help.

Dupapier posted a comment on Monday 24th February 2014 8:52pm

Hi,

I really enjoyed that story.

An interesting plot, very well written and some nice ideas.

It's always a pleasure to read from you and your stories are some of the best I can find (in fact I usualy give some of your stories to my friend if I want to introduce them to the fanfiction universe).

Thanks a lot for the great reading time.

Dupapier

xavierp posted a comment on Monday 24th February 2014 8:37pm

I enjoyed this. It's a great take on the whole (fanon) Veela Life Debt/Bonding stories. Harry is actually using it to his advantage - Fleur doesn't suddenly stop being a snob, Gabrielle is nothing more than a delightful young child and Harry doesn't suddenly turn into Merlin just because a girl gets his penis erect.

To those who say that they prefer your earlier stuff: it's still there and you can do what I did while I was waiting for more stories: read the early stuff again. Though I am hoping for more Perfect Sytherins.....

lazylion posted a comment on Monday 24th February 2014 8:23pm

Please don't allow the naysayers to disuade you; this was a fantastic story! As good or better than any of your other classics! (Hope and Happily Ever After immediately spring to mind). Don't worry about the sequal to castles in the sky; while that'd be nice, this was wonderful.

Keep up the great works!

Monkeydenture posted a comment on Monday 24th February 2014 8:06pm

I was sorry to hear you've had such a mixed reaction. Even with your lack of obsessiveness, your content is still well above most of the stuff out there. Don't let them get you down; write for fun, and the mostly silent majority will still love it.

micky the hat posted a comment on Monday 24th February 2014 7:59pm

Thank you nice to see you back in the saddle again

HopelessFan posted a comment on Monday 24th February 2014 7:43pm

Much enjoyed (this chapter and the previous) - people will always have mixed feelings about your writings, especially since they HAVE changed. Personally, I feel that your writing has had constant improvement (I've been reading you religiously since your first fic) and I would encourage you to just enjoy writing the way you want.

vasilis01 posted a comment on Monday 24th February 2014 7:41pm

All i can say is that i like the second chapter even more than the first. I've never seen a story were Dumbldore decides to start using his power political or otherwise to solve the problems. As for your writing i believe is excellent as always. I hope to see more from this story.

familyman posted a comment on Monday 24th February 2014 7:38pm

Hi, after your Comment at the beginning I just had to leave a comment. Quite frankly you are one of the best (if not the best) FF writer in the net. I love reading your stories, just reread some of your stories because I love them. This one is fine and fun as well so don't stop writing - just keep it going.

corrigan posted a comment on Monday 24th February 2014 7:30pm

I love this story it's the best that i've read in a long time. I think it's fantastic and I hope theres more to it I'd love to read it.

The Seeker posted a comment on Monday 24th February 2014 6:53pm

The rumors of a decline in your writing skills are greatly exaggerated. First, the dual concept of Albus finally waking up to what he'd done and hadn't done combined with Harry using the combined brainpower of James Potter and Lily Evans is unique in my HP reading. You did a marvelous job setting up these two ideas, putting them into action, then showing the ultimate outcome. A declining writer could not have come up with either of those concepts, let alone combined them and written a very thought provoking and enjoyable story.

Lastly, of course your writing is different than it was earlier in your fan fic writing 'career.' We've all gotten older and hopefully matured a bit. Those factors and many others contribute to a writer expressing him or herself differently. Differently doesn't automatically equate to lesser quality. I'm sure we all look forward with great anticipation to you continuing writing fan fic stories.

serbobiv posted a comment on Monday 24th February 2014 6:50pm

Very nice!

Poor Padfoot, he got a bum rap

WhiteElfElder posted a comment on Monday 24th February 2014 6:45pm

Harry definitely took care of that stupid maze. I am glad to see that Albus picked up the reigns he should have never dropped and is using his positions for what they should be used. If Harry's abilities in magic have grown that much, then Veela will be lined up to be with him for that alone.

Pharfig posted a comment on Monday 24th February 2014 6:31pm

Frankly, I thought both chapters were absolutely brilliant. I liked how the chain of events went in one direction with Harry, then back the other direction with Dumbledoor figuring out just how badly he screwed up. The bit with Fleur describing Gabrielle's take on things was an amusing nod to some of those Gabrielle/Harry stories. At the end, I suspect Dumbledoor is going to actually change, while the Wizarding World will not be.

goofy posted a comment on Monday 24th February 2014 6:29pm

Hi, I am glad to see you are writing again, and if (as you say) it is not as good as before, I say I still enjoy your ideas and how you tell the tale.

just wanted to let you know I enjoyed this new story ( i was concerned at points during the first chapter, I mean 8 yr old enslaved. If i wasn't then you should have been concerned about me:) )

look forward to the next chapter.

cheers

Mike C. posted a comment on Monday 24th February 2014 6:27pm

I have this to say: I love the new way your are writing and if you get any nay sayers tell them all to Bugger Off. I love this story and I am holding my breathe with anticipatiion for the next chapter. I am curios on who you picked for Harry's love is going to be. Will Harry forgive anyone or at least hear them out.

Prathen posted a comment on Monday 24th February 2014 6:17pm

I am sorry to hear that some people claimed that they did not enjoy your new story. I personally thing that Enslavement was quite a enjoyable tale, and I was quite happy to see a new story from you.

I am looking foward to seeing more, and I hope things are going better for you now.

dadscooking posted a comment on Monday 24th February 2014 6:10pm

I didnt review the first part but I thoroughly enjoy each and every story you write. I have read published mass circulated books that I liked less than your writing. This is a great story and while it doesnt have a happy ending, it is thought provoking and balanced.

I will wait on your schedule to read anything you put out and want to say thanks for sharing what you do.

Starman800 posted a comment on Monday 24th February 2014 5:38pm

Great story. I hope it isn't the end though? What about Hermione? Will she get to apoligize to her friend?