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LoBass posted a comment on Sunday 23rd February 2014 5:42am

Unusual perspective. Enjoyed it. Looking forward to part 2.

thankyou

Brian

Lisagrace posted a comment on Saturday 22nd February 2014 11:27pm

Wow, loved this. I could see this happening easily.

midevildle posted a comment on Saturday 22nd February 2014 5:54pm

Interesting idea. The human hate/idolatry for non humans felt incredibly forced. The Veela enclave and inhabitants were to accepting for my taste. But still, an interesting idea.

20cent posted a comment on Saturday 22nd February 2014 4:42pm

Nicely written, great angle !

Thanks for this beautiful strory !

T.Zukumori posted a comment on Saturday 22nd February 2014 2:23am

Unique premise -- I've never read anything like it. It was enjoyable, and makes me wonder how/if Voldemort will fight against the Conclave in his pursuit of Harry.

But all in all, it's good to see that you're still writing. Welcome back.

Hansi_Rahl posted a comment on Friday 21st February 2014 4:26pm

Great story!

Nigel Wood posted a comment on Friday 21st February 2014 4:22pm

Good to have you back.

As usual you develop a very good idea into a well thought plot and then execute it with outstanding writing.

I was told that anything worth reading was hard work to write. You must sweat blood over you pc to give us this great story.

Thank you

melann posted a comment on Thursday 20th February 2014 6:25pm

love the story

Michael10 posted a comment on Thursday 20th February 2014 12:37pm

Wasn't sure what to think when I saw the title. but yet again you have another great work here. glad to see the dust knocked off and your still kicking in 2014.

keep up the great work as always and I'll keep reading

frankocsic posted a comment on Thursday 20th February 2014 11:42am

Awesome. I enjoyed reading this. Kinda sad that Hermione got left behind/treated Harry like that, but happy that Harry's not the kind of freak that would rape someone, even a kid. Wasn't so sure for a moment there. Very nice ending for him. Great descriptions of the Enclave too. Good job with this. Write more!

A Winters posted a comment on Thursday 20th February 2014 10:01am

I love this very original idea! Harry's perspective did throw me a bit in the beginning, but you've done a wonderful job in bringing the 'canon' and 'non-canon' components together as if they have always been like that.

Hemotem posted a comment on Thursday 20th February 2014 3:16am

O M F G !!!!!!!!!! What a turn around just when I though this was going one way you thrust it around a bitch slap it in another direction!!!! I am so looking forward to see what more you have planned for this story and hope it isn't just the two chapters. I would love to see more of this and see how it plays out with Harry and the Vela training and how this pertains to the Prophecy is this the "Power He Knows Not"? I will end this here and say thank you, and hope to see lots and lots more of your wonderful works of fiction in the future. Hemotem

atriedies posted a comment on Thursday 20th February 2014 1:31am

Really enjoyed reading this.

adafrog posted a comment on Wednesday 19th February 2014 11:01pm

Very interesting. Thanks.

michaelsuave posted a comment on Wednesday 19th February 2014 3:05pm

Excellent turn of events. I can see how it took a dark turn and we will see the dichotomy between the veela/"creature" world and the human/"civilized" world. Good work, I hope to see more soon.

Rexnos posted a comment on Tuesday 18th February 2014 7:01pm

It's funny. I kept expecting the other shoe to drop. Humans aren't all terrible demons and non-humans aren't all perfect angels, right? Then I remembered, this is Jeconais fan fiction. That means that there really is only black and white. Shades of grey tend to be optional and reserved for the main character.

Then again, that's why I read it, right? Sometimes a story that reads more like a fairy tale is a nice change of pace from complicated dramas where no one is right and action stories where the hero is constantly strugging against forces he shouldn't be able to beat.

Later, Rex

irinamarenco posted a comment on Tuesday 18th February 2014 6:42pm

Fantastic. I'm looking forward to the other side of the problem. Thanks for sharing!

keichan2 posted a comment on Tuesday 18th February 2014 4:24pm

This is awesome!

The title and leading author’s notes got me thinking that it would be darker, and I must confess that Harry’s plan totally got me! :-)

I can’t wait to read the second part!

Thanks for sharing!

BJH posted a comment on Tuesday 18th February 2014 4:12pm

Really enjoyed this first half and look forward to the second. Loved the date with Harry and Hedwig dancing.

As for your hint about perspective and what was "really" happening while Harry was isolated, even if it was significantly self imposed, I've been thinking a lot about what you could be doing. Maybe after the first task Ron wanted to talk to Harry and maybe apologize but Harry's sidestepping him just pushed all his buttons (which was Harry's intention) and he took a swing. Maybe that spell Ron threw at Harry's back was a Petrificus just so Ron could talk to him? On the other hand we have no indication that Ron actually said anything like " Hey, Harry, can I talk to you for a minute, PLEASE?" Maybe Albus' comments in the corridor were meant that none of the elves will help Harry run away and not that they will act as his jailers. Maybe Albus was striving to get Harry to reach out to his friends so that they could mend things. But then why is it Harry that has to reach out? Isn't it incombent on those who caused the harm to take the action to repair the damage? And why couldn't someone, like Hermione, slip Harry a note in the library starting to apologize and asking to talk.

Maybe, when the Enclave troops showed up, the students were all looking for Crouch Jr. not Harry, maybe Ernie was shooting at him, sneaking out of the castle around the Veela, and not at Harry. Maybe it was all a big misunderstanding.

Then again, maybe it all doesn't matter. Maybe Harry finally has a home where he is wanted and welcome. Maybe Harry shouldn't care about what happens to England since they only seem to care about him with respect to what they need from him. Maybe Harry is better off at the Enclave. Then again, maybe it is the soldiers from the Enclave that will be the "power he knows not".

BJH

happyreader posted a comment on Tuesday 18th February 2014 4:05pm

Most enjoyable.