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Lise-ann posted a comment on Sunday 16th February 2014 5:38pm

Yeah!!!! I am so happy to see a new update from you. I love your work and sideways look at canon. I think I have probably read Dwn at least 6 times just to keep it fresh in my mind; not to mention your other works.

Lumos posted a comment on Sunday 16th February 2014 5:11pm

It's horrible! Not the writing or the storytelling ... that's up to your usual standards ... but the treatment Harry receives, and his reaction to it! And so very understandable. Humanity has the potential to be both the best and the worst creatures in the entire universe, and it is amazing how vastly we manage to fill both ends of the spectrum.

But may I just say I was so happy to see Harry -didn't- plan to so horribly abuse either Fleur or her sister ... it truly would have been too human.

honorharrington42 posted a comment on Sunday 16th February 2014 5:10pm

I just read this story with a sense of joyous wonder. Finally a story where Harry uses his brain to get what he wants and is not willing to allow himself to be manipulated. Harry has always been willing to do what needed to be done. He just never was willing to apply that to his own life. While this is a relatively short one shot, I dont think there is anything that needs expansion or trimming.

Bravo!

Thank you so much for sharing this.

Farce posted a comment on Sunday 16th February 2014 5:04pm

Wow, As I've coe to expect a brilliantly told story with a unusual outlook on the genre. To be honest, I absolutely loved it and can't wait till the next weekend as well as any other stories that might follow.

High regards,

Farce

wolfgang549 posted a comment on Sunday 16th February 2014 4:40pm

great story, great ideas. We are glad to have you back

Rivana posted a comment on Sunday 16th February 2014 4:23pm

I really enjoyed this story. It is fascinating to see this type of bond from the other side. I really hope the next chapter might also go into a bit about what Harry's future is like in the enclave, maybe introductions after he learns the language or what he finally does as a "job". It would also be nice to hear some about one or two of the many romances he might have before settling on a partner from among the neices, cousins, sisters, etc.

As always your story was very well written gramatically. I must compliment you and your beta for doing such a great job when many authors of fanfiction now tend to ignore or bend the rules of grammar.

I am looking forward to reading the next chapter. Thanks for posting.

Honebar posted a comment on Sunday 16th February 2014 4:09pm

This story was very intersting, I've nerver read one like this. I have to say I rather enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing this with your readers.

Starman800 posted a comment on Sunday 16th February 2014 4:00pm

Great story, looking forward to reading more.. :)

Yanagi posted a comment on Sunday 16th February 2014 3:20pm

Wow. Welcome back. With a bag. Excellent work. I'm so looking forward to the second part.

RedRyder posted a comment on Sunday 16th February 2014 3:16pm

Very interesting and definetly a new take on the wholetriwizard plotline

HarnGin posted a comment on Sunday 16th February 2014 2:51pm

Very entertaining and just what I needed to read on a cold Sunday morning. Thank you.

Ken Warner posted a comment on Sunday 16th February 2014 2:36pm

I am awed and the skillful way you presented the unhumanness. It feels correct and balanced and accurate, follows logically from the way Harry was treated in canon, and most of fanon.

I appreciated that he was in fact as noble as one wants to believe him to be, yet devious and patient in out manouvering the manipulators.

lovely to dispatch Snape in a pair of sentences, and good riddance.

thank you very much

dennisud posted a comment on Sunday 16th February 2014 2:15pm

Good story of Harry handling things himself and getting out of the Vice like Pro[hesy so well.

Love how Snape got his and how he has finally found a home. Dissapointed with Hermione and the other supposed friends, though I wished Ron would have done something stupid when they left. Would have loved seeing his head decorating the ground too.

Not much of Luna here as she could have been one to help but we'll see the 2nd chapter to find out why and what happened.

dennisud

speedy_86 posted a comment on Sunday 16th February 2014 2:06pm

This is amazing!

Don't know what to mention specifically as there's so much.

What I especially liked was how he used Fleur to get into the enclave and then releases her from her debt-bond. It would have dampened my enjoyment massively if he'd 'kept' her.

ibskib posted a comment on Sunday 16th February 2014 1:32pm

An entertaining reversal, regarding the tell and no show thing, it was mentioned a few times too many, when something was considered human or not, perhaps just showing it might work better having it be implicit, like the description of the Veela Enclave, having Harry once again decide something belonged to either group became fairly repetitive.

Corrections:

for comment - for a comment

He cast tempus - He cast the tempus charm

Bilypt95 posted a comment on Sunday 16th February 2014 1:30pm

Amazing,its a very original story,and I really liked it,congratulations

ESOTERIC posted a comment on Sunday 16th February 2014 12:33pm

Amazing story so far, deffinitly not an idea ive ever read before, looking forward to seeing how you finish it.

Ohh and welcome back to writing XD you've made me very happy to see another post by you.

ESO.

brennus posted a comment on Sunday 16th February 2014 12:12pm

~~Can I start by offering an apology? This is the first review I have ever left for you and that is inexcusable. To explain, you are one of the main reasons that I started to write fan fiction and have been a major inspiration to me, and I have not acknowledged that as I should. Like many, my first encounter with your work was 'This Means War!’ and it remains one of my all-time favourites. It had the mix of action, romance, humour and good story telling that I craved, and motivated me to have a go myself. I now have seven stories posted on SIYE and FF.net and I doubt I would have started any of them without you there to show me the way. I’m delighted, not only to see you posting again, but that your work is of the same incredibly high standard that it’s always been. I love 'Enslavement’ and can’t wait for part two. Can I also throw in a personal request for more 'Perfect Slytherins’, too. I’ll beg if I have to, I’m not proud. So, thank you for your wonderful stories and more power to your typing hand (or hands, depending on your word-speed).

makarva posted a comment on Sunday 16th February 2014 11:28am

interesting story, very nice

preier posted a comment on Sunday 16th February 2014 11:22am

very very much liked the originality. not only in the reversal of the bond (twice ^^) but that harry is rejected, cut off from human interactions ( the explanation for sirius, remus and hermione letting him incommunicado should be a doozy) and decides to go the way of indifference. his treatment of ron post first task is exemplary; no long winded explanation of ron's failings, no confrontation, just plain, harsh, BRUTAL dismissing, even when the agressor at last gets a punishment...

thank you for sharing your stories