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Darkwoofe posted a comment on Friday 28th February 2014 2:51pm

Don't know what all of the fuss was about. The first chapter was pretty good, and this second is great IMO... Just saying! Nicely done.

dg Fry posted a comment on Friday 28th February 2014 12:10pm

Very interesting story. While I'd like to see some more of Harry's life as a memeber of the Enclave (all those sisters and nieces and cousins etc) I can see why you've stopped after two. Glad to see you back in the writing game

Gus posted a comment on Friday 28th February 2014 10:47am

You answered someone "...and I'll try again here, that I am not capable of writing like I used to. " And I got worried.

I believe that if your writing is different from two or three years ago it's because you are also a different person. You have lived and learnt (maybe not about how to write, but about life and yourself). Some people would like it more or less, it happens (personally I don't like russian writers like Dostoieski... and most people would say he is a good one).

I like your writing. It's good. Don't let others convince you otherwise.

Continue with the good job!

super12 posted a comment on Friday 28th February 2014 7:26am

Honestly this is a unique piece of work and as always written just as fantastic as all the other works that I have read by you. As fanfiction writers always say when RL is good you focus less on writing fiction and more on living. Glad you found time to write something for us less fortunate to enjoy!

nomad062 posted a comment on Friday 28th February 2014 3:33am

Not sure what critisisms you may have gotten but I thought it was an excellent story thanks for sharing.

greendagger9900 posted a comment on Friday 28th February 2014 3:01am

Fantastic story! I loved the idea and the more I have read the more I want to see what happens next! While I keep waiting for the next Hogwarts Dawn, this is rapidly moving up the list of my favorite fanfictions! Thanks so much for the hard work that goes into crafting the story.

mykakal posted a comment on Thursday 27th February 2014 9:42pm

A nice story.

It's darker than your former creation with less optimism.

The story's structure is quicker and the character (magic people) seems to have less personnality. They follow the flow without anyone saying no ou trying to help.

jamie fluke posted a comment on Thursday 27th February 2014 3:36pm

I feel this is a very balanced possible future based on the the time of the goblet of fire. I look forward to seeing where this goes.

Natalie posted a comment on Thursday 27th February 2014 9:50am

i can't see why people would think this fic was bad. i think it's great. harry getting pissed isn't cliche, it's damn well what he should have done. i hope you keep this going. this fic is a lot of fun.

frankocsic posted a comment on Thursday 27th February 2014 4:01am

Awesome. Enjoyed reading this follow up to the story. Great job.

Commando987 posted a comment on Thursday 27th February 2014 12:45am

Show I really like this story so far!

Hagrid posted a comment on Wednesday 26th February 2014 7:10pm

Can't seem ter figure out why yer sayin' that yer wrintin' ain't what it were, seems just fine from where I'm readin'. Been sayin' som'att about ol' Albus bein' a great man, looks like i were right afterall. I'll be waiting for the next chappie like its Saturday evenin' at the Broomsticks.

anf600@hotmail.com posted a comment on Wednesday 26th February 2014 6:32pm

I actually liked both chapters - I can see why Harry would be totally frustrated at the stupidity around him. Just nice to see a story where Albus actually wakes up and smells the coffee and DOES something about it. So what about the Potter lordship - if any. I can understand that the funds etc goes into the Enclave but what about seats on the Wiz...would a subsequent child be able to come out of there and inherit?

Stormwatcher posted a comment on Wednesday 26th February 2014 6:17pm

For someone who claims that he no longer chooses to spend the amount of time that it would take to write "like he used to" I find this story quite enjoyable. Thank you for a good read.

william1 posted a comment on Wednesday 26th February 2014 3:12pm

I for one enjoyed this greatly.

In fanfiction Sturgeon's Law plays out in a sea of garbage fics; plot rehasings. bad self inserts, bizarre love choices etc etc.

The remaining 10% is frankly running out of things to say or do.

To see someone able to eke more new and interesting things to say or explore out of HP is a rare treat.

Having someone of your quality still willing to give their time to it is worth any amount of wait and you won't be hearing any whining from me about how and when you choose to share your gifts.

Having said that I'll just go on and say thank you for all that you have written and shared so far in all your fandoms.

Have a great day,

William M.

Hytekrednek posted a comment on Wednesday 26th February 2014 8:40am

I don't care what others say I still enjoy what you write. As always I look forward to your next work. I'm glad that you are in a better place then you were before. Know that there are those of us that will always support your decisions.

James

grookill posted a comment on Wednesday 26th February 2014 4:56am

I liked it. I liked it better than the first part of "Enslavement". If you decided to continue this, I would like to see something a little less agnsty, perhaps Amelia Bone's point of view. If you are going to stay with angst, then try Neville Longbottom.

Chiyo posted a comment on Wednesday 26th February 2014 3:23am

I honestly enjoyed it. Is it on par with Hope? Pretty hard to beat your best work (bar none). But it is a fun story that shows just how stupid Albus (and others) could be. Now lets talk about Wild Horses if you're going to be writing again... ;)

LoggingInSucksAss posted a comment on Wednesday 26th February 2014 1:15am

Huh. Don't know why people would be hating on this story or plot. I find it interesting and actually unique. When you're working with characters in a universe, you're already playing by someone else's rules. Stray too far and you're a Mary Sue or OC writer. Stick to close and you're just rehashing. Ef them all, I'm enjoying the ride. :)

gara5289 posted a comment on Tuesday 25th February 2014 11:55pm

I didn't have a chance to review the first chapter yet since I read it on a train without internet but first welcome back! Secondly, I thought you took two rather cliche ideas (the enslavement and everyone-turns-on-harry) and am impressed with how original a story you came up with. I thought it was a really fun story and I like how open-ended you left it at the end, though i can imagine a rather fun omake of Voldemort attacking the enclave and get curb-stomped. Really looking forward to another chapter of Hogwarts Dawn - especially since you ended on such a cliffie. I do hope you finish Konoha's Legion as well since you stated it was only gonna go through the Chunin Exams, and we'll, they're already in the third round.