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WyrdSmith posted a comment on Sunday 25th November 2018 5:45am

I find it odd that you have negative reviews for this story based on your prior stories. Every author grows and changes. I love your earlier works: they have the veneer of fairy tales and legends. And I love your latest works, which are perhaps darker or maybe just more realistic, but still enjoyable and fulfilling.

In conclusion, people are stupid. Ignore them.

dragonjek posted a comment on Sunday 18th March 2018 4:29am

" One of the things I was trying to get across was that Veela were not human, and therefore, did not follow human rules on anything." Oh, I wouldn't say that . It was pretty clear that without the bond (enforced by their own magic), and almost even with it still there, the Enclave Veela would have killed him on the spot. Sure, they don't follow human laws... but there are some rules of behavior and ethics they certainly share.

A BEAUTIFUL twist at the end of the first chapter. I was genuinely starting to think that Harry had left his humanity behind in the worst way.

I'm also relieved about what happened with Hermione. Abandoning one's friend is, frankly, despicable... but threat of an entire house hanging over one's head reduces some of that blame. Not all, not even most of it, but an appreciable amount.

Kinsfire posted a comment on Monday 9th October 2017 5:41am

I don't know if I've ever written this to you before in a review, so if I have, I apologize.

I think that the reason that the first chapter was unsatisfying for so many (such as me) is that in almost all HP stories, Harry is the hero, and often the Hero. (This was, and is, one of your beloved tropes. (This is NOT a complaint - that trope is one of the reasons I love reading your stuff.)) In this story, however, he wasn't a hero. If anything, it's a story where you have a teenager who has a teenager reaction and has PERMANENTLY affected his life. I suspect that somewhere in his fifties, he might look back and realize just what he did - by which time, it's too late. It's a well-written story, but the Harry in this is in no way even remotely describable as a hero of any sort. And I suspect that THAT is why a lot of people complained.

noylj posted a comment on Thursday 13th April 2017 6:48am

Yes, if only Bumblemore was proactive and didn't love his games so much.

If one looks up hybris, there has to be a picture of Albus.

Toby860 posted a comment on Monday 20th February 2017 5:57am

I liked it better than the original

God of Vampires aka Alucard posted a comment on Saturday 5th November 2016 12:48pm

I enjoyed this more than the original because this one had more detail and showed more than just Harry's viewpoint. It also brings up a point that I am sad has not been really shown. The Wizarding World was lucky to get the Harry they did. The fact is with the way he was treated growing up he should have been another Tom Riddle or just a plain monster. I am still searching for a story that features that kind of Harry.

LeGenD_ReBorN posted a comment on Sunday 9th October 2016 11:25am

I really liked this story. Though the first part did seem a bit rushed in places, the story was still very enjoyable. As always, your flow was very good, your characters believable and real, the humorous bits were enjoyable, and overall the only thing I find myself disappointed with is the fact that there isn't more of it to read. I also read "Hope" and "Motivations" and all of the compliments noted in this review would absolutely be appropriate for those stories as well. Thank you for the gift of your writings. Please continue. In the mean time I will continue reading. Sincerely, JC

bruluna posted a comment on Saturday 17th September 2016 12:16am

I truly loved this story. I liked how Harry was just done with everything, and that he stayed that way and found happiness in other ways rather than just acceping what he was given by the adults in his life. Well done!! :)

Maddie86 posted a comment on Sunday 3rd July 2016 9:35pm

I don't know which one I like better, this version or the "original". Both are amazing! :)

Himanshu.99 posted a comment on Monday 7th March 2016 5:29pm

Wonderful. Absolutely wonderful

Feno3000 posted a comment on Tuesday 1st March 2016 4:20am

That acting on his guilt made it seem so easy and logical to punish these things and go after the rot deep inside their society is the worst part of it. And even that pales in front of the epiphany that albus' sins go further back up to his time with Grindelwald and the first snafu with a student in person of Tom Riddle.

I'm still disappointed in Hermione and especially her not even sending a note for Christmas. And ultimately it's depressing that even Albus going against his mistakes long ignored is not inspiring more cooperation and volunteered initiative amongst the british wizards and witches. You really know how to make even good things sound depressing ;)

Maddie86 posted a comment on Sunday 7th February 2016 11:42am

Great story! The start was quite confusing but I liked how Harry ended up happy. I'd be interested to see more of Harrys life with the Veela and him/them destroying Voldemort. :) Thanks! ^_^

TimothyB posted a comment on Saturday 2nd January 2016 9:31am

I thought this was brilliant. I love the idea of the Enclave and wish there was maybe more from Harry's POV but oh well. Keep it up

BAFan posted a comment on Friday 1st January 2016 8:34pm

As hard to read as the first part was, this was doubly so. Yes, people have realized their egregious mistakes, and things that were broken are getting fixed - but none of it matters to Harry.

Brilliant writing!!


KSpringer posted a comment on Sunday 20th December 2015 1:53am


I've always enjoyed your stories and I enjoyed this one as well. Well -- both of them, the original and this one.

I'd like to see a final resolution but it doesn't affect the story.

Thanks for your time and talent!

jswolf posted a comment on Friday 27th November 2015 7:58pm

I do find this a very entertaining story, however;it does feel to me to be not quite finished. Perhaps another chapter or story even about the time in the Enclave before and after the third task.

WyrdeDragon posted a comment on Friday 24th July 2015 8:38pm

A very interesting story. I like the twist on the veela bond cliché. But my favorite part was Harry deciding he was a freak, not a human. The bits with Hed were good too. The second part was... interesting. Mostly I agreed with Albus that it all should have been done years earlier.

Rover19923 posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd June 2015 6:51pm

Very good writing

moon_pup posted a comment on Saturday 23rd May 2015 2:31am

Oh tell me there is going to be more? I would love to read what Grable did and what she does to get in to her hero

Justin posted a comment on Sunday 17th May 2015 3:56pm

I loved this. I wish you would add a story about harry in the enclave for the rest of his life. Great job.