Knight_Hax0r posted a comment on Friday 24th February 2006 9:40am

Ooooh.... The plot thickens!
Nice punishment for Draco... so far anyway! International INCIDENT is the only thing that will come of this, or Fred and George constant barrage of bludgers (assuming that i read you correctly, which i think i did). Draco should get a lot of punishment for trying to seduce a minor and possible sabatoge of an opposing Quidittch team!

I can't help but wonder what's so wrong with Dumbledore. It could be said that he himself is a dark Wizard, but then why would he want Harry so close to him (can't be to kill him or convert him, because Harry would just finish him earliar than he is planning... the final confrontation will no doubt be interesting!)

Patiently waiting for your next update!

Steven posted a comment on Thursday 23rd February 2006 11:58am

Very Good.
This is the ship that I prefer and there do not seem to be enough.
As it is this is my favorite story.

noylj posted a comment on Tuesday 21st February 2006 11:18pm

What is going on? I hope that you are not letting your personal life interfere with this story? As a 56 year-old male that hates romance stories, I must say that I really enjoy this one.

ridmania posted a comment on Monday 20th February 2006 10:15pm

man i love it!!!! please update again really soon!!! hope thre is some serious malfoy, snape and dumbledore bashing!!!!

spurio23 posted a comment on Monday 20th February 2006 6:56pm

I had been avoiding this fic due to the pairing but finally read it today. One of these days I will learn to just read whatever you write as it is usually at least good. This is in between good and the greatness of This Means War. Nice twist on how Gabrielle had to become strong and independent to meet Harry's needs. Love Harry's deviousness and Draco and the tree. Nice balance in Harry's power and dis-inclination to over use or be dependent upon it. Thanks for the story.

Michael9 posted a comment on Sunday 19th February 2006 6:38pm

I normally don't like to leave reviews, but I felt that I just had to say how much I love this story, and also how well you make seemingly impossible pairings (such as this) work. Thanks for all the great stories!

Riven posted a comment on Saturday 18th February 2006 6:19pm

awsome story and i seriously would love to see an update. the chapters are wonderfully long and i really like the HP/GD pairing.

noylj posted a comment on Saturday 18th February 2006 7:52am

We need updates. I really want to find out what happens at Hogwarts (feel free to kill DD). Need updates NOW!

Ash posted a comment on Saturday 18th February 2006 5:30am

:( SORRY TAHLIA!!!!!!
I meant to sign you off before i went on. Damn uni computers. SOOOOOOORRRRRRYYYYYY!!!

:)Ash

Tahlia posted a comment on Saturday 18th February 2006 5:22am

I think this is seriously one of the best fanfics I have ever read. The calibre of the writing anf the story is phenomenal. Like one someone else said not many authors use this pairing (except that chick who totally ripped yours off on another site), which is a shame. I cant wait till they get together because you could practically jackhammer the sexual tension between Harry and Gabby. It will be interesting to see what you will do. Love this story to bits. Please update soon.....

:) Ash

Tahlia posted a comment on Saturday 18th February 2006 5:12am

Hey Tim,
Another fantastic chapter that literally blew my mind. I especially love this bit,

""Will you do me a favour?" she asked.

He nodded again, eagerly this time.

"Run as fast as you can into that tree."

"Anything," Draco exhaled, as he turned and started to run in the direction she had pointed."

So funny, I could literally picture in my mind Draco rebounding off the tree trunk. I know now want you meant when you said you could almost feel sorry for Draco in this fic, even though I dont and are eagerly anticipating what Harry is now going to do to him. hehehehehehehehe (*rubs hands in glee*). One question, are Katie, Angelina and Oliver on Beauxbatons payroll? and how many matches do the schools have to play in the tournament?

Cant wait till you update next. (please be sooner than a month, it kinda takes some hype and enjoyment away). Love what you are doing.

Tahlia

katelyn posted a comment on Wednesday 15th February 2006 3:31pm

hey Gabrielle! if you are there maybe you can email me. and the story is great.

Tumshie posted a comment on Wednesday 15th February 2006 2:23pm

Aengus is still ripping off your story, he has it posted as Harry Potter and Gabrielle Delacour on Fanfiction.net. It's not word for word (well some of it is very close) but it is your basic plot line

freakyfinger posted a comment on Wednesday 15th February 2006 4:57am

I love this story! Well, as much as I hate Snape, I can't wait for him to try something . . .

stu posted a comment on Tuesday 14th February 2006 11:30pm

i was starting to get worried we havent heard from you since christmas! loved the ending poetic justice although a parting gift from harry was warranted i think but hopefully you will get to that in the next installment. didnt quite see the reason for hermione to be in the same room but i am sure your rhyme has a reason sort of a olive branch to show that he is trying to if not forgive at least put out of the front of his mind her betrayel. and so i leave you with the best of luck and hope you will not leave us hanging.... to long!

GuardianOfLight posted a comment on Tuesday 14th February 2006 9:47am

Thsi is a truly excellent story, I had never even consider a Gabrielle/Harry pairing a truly unique idea, kepp writing

ichtys posted a comment on Tuesday 14th February 2006 8:41am

Hi Tim.
I'm totally speechless. This is an amacing chapter, but I can't point out exactly what make i brilliant. If you have seen the movie "The Incredibles", my comment to this chapter is the same as the little boy: "That was totally WICKED!". Thank you for sharing, and please extend my thanks to your exellent beta-team as well. I couldn't find any mistakes.
~Ichtys

Jon posted a comment on Monday 13th February 2006 11:00pm

I just noticed that the keeper for Durmstrang is introduced as Stradivus, yet during Lee's commentary, he and Gabrielle were Seekers....?
2 Stradivus on the team, maybe?

Ravenway posted a comment on Monday 13th February 2006 12:54pm

I realize that it probably made you very angry that Aengus put your story up as his own on Fanfiction's site but I for one am glad because I found your story through his mistake, intentional or not. I loved your story and when I went back to his story and found out who had actually written the story I followed it to here. He did something that was absolutely unforgiveable in my opinion but for once I'm glad he did. Your story is excellent, your characters are excellent, and most important of all, it is believable. It's taken me a while to catch up to this, including quite a bit of time I should have been studying for a test this morning but it was well worth it. I can't wait for your next chapter. I'm sorry for not having reviewed all of your chapters but I wanted to thank you for taking the time to write something this enjoyable and to the beta team for helping out.

Joe Ritter posted a comment on Monday 13th February 2006 9:25am

Wonderful, absolutely wonderful!

I really need to find a better way to say it but, please keep writing your vision!