kyoshi posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd August 2011 7:10am

fantastic story.

Tyanne posted a comment on Monday 22nd August 2011 4:16am

*snert* Awesome chapter. I love your characterizations...especially the twins. I find them to be a riot. And your note at the end...hilarity abound.

Mac452 posted a comment on Sunday 21st August 2011 4:05pm

Love the story, i mean sincerely. Also The allegic to fir trees line was fantastic.

Addlcove posted a comment on Wednesday 17th August 2011 11:05pm

just re-read this, awesome story I love the character interaction you create.

Hobbs1985 posted a comment on Tuesday 16th August 2011 9:18am

Great Story! Keep up the good work.

kittua posted a comment on Sunday 14th August 2011 6:02am

excellent story. Once again hope for an update soon. I do believe you have an excellent imagination and could make a living off of your writing. Update soon please!

jafo2008 posted a comment on Thursday 11th August 2011 8:24am

great chapter

vhemacha posted a comment on Tuesday 9th August 2011 8:56pm

This is a great story, and I'm really enjoying it. It's exciting, fun, and makes you smile. Looking forward to the next update!

Tenchifew posted a comment on Monday 8th August 2011 9:29pm

Glad to see new chapters of this very unusual and well written story! The plot develops nicely and some I am sure that the second task won't o too well, considering the hostage situation.
Thank you for writing.

Phoenix Lord posted a comment on Saturday 6th August 2011 3:31pm

Brilliant story!!!! Need more......Please???!!!

DannyBoy2k posted a comment on Saturday 6th August 2011 3:22pm

I LIKE it. But then, I've liked pretty much everything you've written. I do have a problem, though. See, you put up chapter 4 and chapter 5 within 14 days of each other...and now I fear I'll have to wait MUCH longer for chapter 6. And that makes me sad. :-P Please write more, and soon, is all.

Children-of-Bodom posted a comment on Wednesday 3rd August 2011 10:37pm

You know you are one of my favorite authors in the whole FanDom (and have been for more than 6 years now) but still I hesistated for a long time before reading this for a reason I can no longer recall.

So today I was looking forward to a 5 hour train-ride and was browsing fanficauthors.net to look for a good story to re-read. I found this one decided to give it a try and not re-read something else. I ended up reading it in one go without taking any notice of anything happening around me. The time went by in a rush.

Now I am back at home and have to say, that you AGAIN outdid yourself with this fic. I absolutely loved it and I see me browsing ffa.net next year looking for stories to re-read on a long train-ride and chosing this one :)

You rule! Keep up the good work and thank you for sharing your incredible talent.

Ringo666 posted a comment on Wednesday 3rd August 2011 6:59pm

Every time I think your stories can't get any better, you keep surprising me. From the very first one I read (This Means War), your stories have made me laugh and brought me to tears. Whenever I'm having a really bad day, I come home and pull up one of your stories and relax in a place where there are real heroes and good does ultimately win over evil. Thank you for keeping us amazed and delighted.

mystara123 posted a comment on Tuesday 2nd August 2011 12:23am

Another great chapter sorry i havent reviewed in so long been busy helpin my stepfather build onto my parents place if the question in your tweet was for me about the 3 story updates they are Hogwarts Dawn REALLY great story and Konoha Legion another great and Perfect Slytherins i look forwar eagerly to your updayes i just wanted a day to look forward to instead of looking 2 or 3 times a day thanks for the great chapters

Andrius posted a comment on Saturday 30th July 2011 5:01am

The only thing that bothers me about this story is how Harry treats Gabrielle. It's hard to believe any 14-year-old would act around kids like that.

reader1writer1 posted a comment on Thursday 28th July 2011 10:39pm

I'm truly enjoying this Harry, even though he's so much older than 14. I can't wait to learn what he does next--Dumbledore's going to be SO surprised *g*

winoniel posted a comment on Wednesday 27th July 2011 10:57pm

Great chapter! I really like how both Harry and the twins have re-evaluated so much of the personalities, thinking, and events of the books in new and interesting ways.

Keep up the good work!

dezzal posted a comment on Sunday 24th July 2011 8:53pm

awesome chapter, i look forward to more updates

kyzhart posted a comment on Sunday 24th July 2011 8:34am

That scene where he describes things with his family was really powerful! I cried sad yet sweet tears. Very well written. This fic is shaping up to be one of my all time favorites.

Tammin posted a comment on Saturday 23rd July 2011 5:03pm

I just read Ch. 4 and 5. Outstanding work; I enjoyed how you brought up the twins identity dilemma and worked it out. I can't wait to see how the rest of the year turns out. Harry's performance at the Tri-wizard Christmas Ball was hilarious, and the dancing was good too. I love a good over powered Harry story as long as the power-ups are internally consistent as this one appears to be. Keep up the good work.