By Jeconais
Reviews
Ian Major posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 4:30am
Okay, I love it so far, (so what if there are cliches, it's FUN!)
joeBob posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 4:24am
Silly and typo-ridden, but oh what fun! Several LOL moments.
}} "This is a once in a life time opportunity," George said, losing the
}} game-show personality. "You’ve come to us at just the right time."
:)
}} "Every time you get Snape or Malfoy to that colour of red, you get a
}} twenty galleon bonus," Harry offered. "One hundred for every accidental
}} broken bone that happens to any of them."
:D
}} "Cold water is being bestest cure ever."
:P
Ash posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 4:23am
Now this is how I wish Harry had acted in the books instead of being a pushover.
Prince Charon posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 4:21am
I like it. I like it very much.
Frank Hacklander posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 4:18am
OK. Have to say this is wonderful. You've clearly taken Fred and George from Perfect Situations so there is only one answer to the pairings dilemma, namely Daphne Greengrass. Cannot wait to see that happen despite your protestations otherwise. Still looking forward to seeing Wednesday in her 3rd year (hint, hint). That being the case, we will overlook the typos for the moment....(as Forge and Gred would say, we are not worthy, at least not until Wednesday -- or Daphne -- makes her reappearance).
nothorse posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 4:15am
Please continue having fun with this, it's cute, fun and very enjoyable.
millercommamatt posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 4:14am
Your un-betaed/under-betaed stuff is still better than 99% of the other fan fiction out there. Anyway, thanks for sharing your writing. Sharing what you enjoy with others multiplies that enjoyment which has a magic all its own.
Stanley Chalk posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 4:13am
Well this is unusual and I have not laughed this hard in days. Just what I needed. Now all you have to do is keep it up because I can imagine where this is going. I am looking forward to finding out if I am right.
Stan
Alex00 posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 4:09am
awesome as always
steveo26 posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 4:05am
I love it. This is hilarious. Please continue the story
patrick1 posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 3:56am
i love it, I rather enjoy these types of fics.
DarQuing posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 3:44am
That was awesome! I love it when Dumbledore gets what's coming to him. >D
loot posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 3:34am
A single word is all I have to offer - Outstanding.
MrRobertsIII posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 3:32am
Viktor would treat Hermione correctly, and Harry would let Viktor keep his fingers.
-Had me laughing the most.
This is very very funny. Love GeneralContractor!Twins.
greywizard posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 3:24am
It's wonderful to see that you're writing again, and especially when it's fun stories like this one. ;-)
Best line in the story has got to be: "Cold water is being bestest cure ever." LOVED IT!!! ;-)
Are we ever going to find out exactly what happened to that poor puppy? If it traumatized the Twins, it has got to be bad. ;-)
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Great work and thanks for sharing this with us.
scribbler posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 3:22am
LOVE IT. Great Start!! Can't wait to read the rest of it. This is a totally smashing idea and a great send-up of some of the things we both love and hate about the HP world.
GOOD JOB!
Regards,
Edmond
JaCee2u posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 3:14am
I love this. A good tongue in cheek look at GOF is always fun. And the neat thing is that Riddle will get exhaustion replacing all those damned arms!
es posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 3:12am
Great work as always. Never let anyone tell you that you can't write.
wiredwizard posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 3:08am
"Hello, you're reached the offices of Crusher, Smasher, Nasher, Thrasher & Dobby. How may we be of assitance today?"
This is a great piece. Many thanks! =)
Lerris Smith posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 4:38am