MrRobertsIII posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 11:38pm
Not bad, but I didn't laugh as much as the first.
JoFarries posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 11:34pm
Yea! Another chapter of this terrific story! I'm really liking the way that Harry is getting on with the students from the other schools. And I'm liking how you fit Gabrielle into this, making her a sort of "little sister" to the group. Dumbledore is being an ass, which is to be expected. Manipulative old sod. Loving the original characters, and how you're fitting them in with the Hogwarts students, especially bringing in lesser-known students like Lisa Turpin. Extra points for that, I think. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Lee Dickie posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 11:31pm
I'm really enjoying this story. It has interesting characterizations with fun interactions. Well done and thanks.
wuoreb posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 11:31pm
I am really enjoying this. Can't wait to read more.
Professor Complexity posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 11:27pm
I had tonnes of fun reading this, it reminds me of the time when I first read "This Means War", I couldn't stop reading it, and still heartily enjoy it.
Keep up for good work :)
Logan_MacLeod posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 11:20pm
THIS STORY IS AWESOME!!!!!!!! just thought you should know
millercommamatt posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 11:10pm
Thank you for the translations at the end of the chapter. You saved me from some quality time with google translate.
Icecube posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 11:04pm
Good work as always. I especially enjoyed the more sedated pace compared with the first. It's nice to see an Harry that is starting to use his supposed fortune and fame in his favour and not stay put and wait for the inevitable trouble. The only flaw that i could find is the characterization of Fleur; i can understand that in GOF her character is really similar to the spoiled and superficial one of this chap, but to me it seemed to be represented a little bit in a too extreme way. Perhaps I can be found at fault since she is one of my favourite character, but in my opinion this is falling a tad too much in the bashing's clichè.
Btw congratulation for another enjoyable work.
hedwig_edwiges posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 11:04pm
I still like this story and as I said before, if you have fun writing, we certainly have fun reading.
carolinakitty posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 11:02pm
ahh.. great as usual. I like Playful, confident, good with kids Harry.
mwinter posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 11:02pm
AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! Two great stories one that hasn't been posted in a long time or the new one. My mind is in a tizzy. Great job. Awaiting more at your posting discretion.
Frank Hacklander posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 10:57pm
I would have thought in the first French phrase it was rien est impossible but it has been a while. Nice development of the story although it strikes me that you've taken Gred and Forge from the Perfect Situations universe and brought them here in a new and fun way. Your OCs (eg Melissa, Christophe, et al) work well in the context of your tale, so kudos for that. I wish I could found something more critical to say but will have to content myself with the thought that I am happy to be along on your ride (although I do prefer Perfect Slytherins).
wolfey posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 10:53pm
So this will be a harry/fluer romance?
jdekke posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 10:49pm
I liked this chapter. It was more relaxed. The first one you added so much in from what I could gather 1 week. This was a little slower but better in my opinion. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for chapter 3 or Perfect Slytherins Year 3.
lilskippy posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 10:49pm
Hmm yeah ok I have to say that was a good chapter, I dunno what you were thinking Tim but this story is great even if it is only the second chapter. At this point these are the kind of stories I enjoy reading. Taake the characters and change it up. As usual great job.
jilumasam posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 10:45pm
Fantastic Chapter!!!! Great way to start my day with laughter!!!!
Silo posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 10:44pm
i hope to see more posting from u soon y dont u post 2 chapters at a time
Ken Warner posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 10:38pm
Just joyful - I have this smile plastered all over my face reading the conversation with Hermione, and the whole thing with 'rescuing' Gabrielle, teaching her magic and sharing with his friends tightens up my throat.
thanks for a masterful story.
John Conner posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 10:37pm
Another fun chapter. I know you said in your notes that you where surprised that this was so well recieved. Don't be, it's a great story and it's a lot of fun. Keep up the great work.
Dave Harris posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 10:36pm
Thanks for sharing yet more of this story. In many ways it reminds me of some of the cavalier Harry that you wrote in the last portions of This Means War, where he realises that he can have fun even if he does have to kick Voldie's ass.
Nevertheless, it still reads like a unique approach. Recently I don't think I've read this sort of light-comedy proactive!Harry for a long time, as many of the newly-written fics that go back as far as the TriWizard Tournament are heavier on the manipulative!Dumbledore or confrontational/betrayed Harry feelings or utilise rather a lot of sarcasm; from that perspective, this is very refreshing.
Looking forward to the next Chapter, though if you're starting Year 3 of Perfect Slytherins I certainly think it's a good use of the time instead! :)