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Charles Newton posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 6:15am

And once again, The Great and All Wonderful God Author What Am Jeconais has Blessed His fans with His Magnificent Gift of Story.
Please may we have More?

Dragonmage182 posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 6:15am

Awesome so far. Any story that the twins play a part in kicking ass and taking names is good in my book. Also a new interesting way to go with the story. Not many people use the method of Harry hiring someone. As always you have yet to disappoint.

CaffeineAddict posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 6:11am

I like this so far. It's irreverent, funny, and otherwise lighthearted. At the same time it flows well and it doesn't seem stilted. If this is "shitty" I wish a lot of fanfic authors had that level of skill. It may not be anything deep or moving but I like having a laugh every now and then. I'll comment on your explanation here as well if you don't mind and just say this: what better reason do you have to write this stuff than for personal enjoyment? If you didn't enjoy it then what would be the point?

Cheers,

CA

Kal posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 6:05am

It has been far too long since I laughed so hard. THANK YOU!

94caddy posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 5:57am

Hilarious story. Cant wait for the next chapter.

Wolfric posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 5:56am

Good show. I am always pleased to hear from you and you certainly don't disappoint with this offering. Thanks for writing. W.

Akraa posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 5:51am

Absolutely hilarious. My only critiques fall into matters of technique, so I will leave them by the wayside. Nice work.

Zicou posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 5:50am

wow another of your story that looks awesome!!!
Continuuuuuuuuuue,
Z.

Chris1 posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 5:22am

Awesomeawesomeawesome :D Thanks for sharing this!

Chris

shebvixen posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 5:17am

Very Kick Ass! Great Job, very funny!

W Mayberry posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 5:07am

LOL Great Start! I can't wait to see the next chapter! Hope the Muses allow you the chance Soon!

noylj posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 5:02am

Very good. I like the few stories where Harry actually has a brain or is proactive or knows to get some help.
You write however you like and I will continue to enjoy. The only reasons to write fanfics are 1) for the fun of it or 2) to try to polish your writing style. The latter can be done with original fics and the joy of rejection letters.

PMON posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 5:01am

This is amazing work, and deserves to be listed as one of your best story beginnings to date. While you seem to believe that your new work is worse, I am of the opinion that your writing talents merely lean towards humour and possibly parody. Even in some of your more serious fanfiction, there was a strong sense of irony at points. I don't doubt that you could indeed be a professional writer, assuming you stuck to your strengths. I hope you will write more of this soon, as it seems like it will be good fun.

Edward Becerra posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 5:01am

Jesus Quack!

This is a MASTERPIECE!

It's hilarious, and its only lack is that it's not epic in length. I can only hope that you'll add to it now and agan whenever the muse strikes.

Sincerely,

Ed Becerra

lauren2 posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 4:59am

LOVE IT!!!

I never stopped laughing, can't wait for the next installment.

Lauren

lord_silver posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 4:49am

Hey great star to a story!

It was excellent. Also I read your explanation & agree with everyone that
we are looking forward to whatever you produce, however you may produce it.

You still are the most talented author in fandom & even though you say that you have given up on being a professional writer I really think that you have what it takes.

Thanks for a great new story.

wuoreb posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 4:41am

This is really fun. I love the idea of the twins fixing Harry's life. Can't wait to read more.

Lerris Smith posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 4:38am

Amusing and fun so far. It will be interesting to see where this all goes...

Ian Major posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 4:30am

Okay, I love it so far, (so what if there are cliches, it's FUN!)

joeBob posted a comment on Friday 30th April 2010 4:24am

Silly and typo-ridden, but oh what fun! Several LOL moments.


}} “This is a once in a life time opportunity,” George said, losing the
}} game-show personality. “You’ve come to us at just the right time.”

:)


}} “Every time you get Snape or Malfoy to that colour of red, you get a
}} twenty galleon bonus,” Harry offered. “One hundred for every accidental
}} broken bone that happens to any of them.”
:D


}} “Cold water is being bestest cure ever.”

:P