marcelhm posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 10:27pm
enjoyed the interaction with Gabriele a lot. so I am curious as to what your thoughts behind it all are. Also nice to see a story where dumbles isn't just a manipulation jackass.
carlinonthebrain posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 10:19pm
I'm throughly enjoying this Harry. He reminds me somewhat of a cross between Tony Stark and Bruce Wayne with a bit of Deadpool's sense of humor thrown in. I appreciate your willingness to keep sharing your writing with us and I eagerly look forward to the next chapter of this and of Konoha's Legion
Gamegeek posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 10:04pm
Excellent chapter, eagerly awaiting more :).
Gardengirl posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 9:56pm
Ab fab, again! This is fun. Thanks for the update, Tim.
Ravenfur posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 9:52pm
Awww, I love your little Gabrielle! This is a story I'm definitely looking forward to reading more of. Thanks for this chapter and I can't wait to see what comes next!
andy redfearn posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 9:47pm
Amazing as always.... dont think ive ever read a piece of your harry potter fanfics i didnt like.. every one of them is a joy to read.. thanks!
Tanaxanth posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 9:45pm
Now see Tim, when cookies crumble it makes you want another one and then another and another.
I enjoyed this chapter as I did the last.
To quote Oliver, "Please sir may I have more?"
David3 posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 9:38pm
I'm really loving this fic. It's fun. It's enjoyable. I can't wait for more.
mrrlyn posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 9:36pm
This just keeps getting better and better! I love it! I know that we our worst critics. But dont put your stuf down. this is awesome. All of your work, even the stuff you think is crap is a million times better than 95% of the stuff that is out there. There is a reason why I have heard you referred to as the "god of fanfic" on several differnet forums. and like most when I introduce some to fanfic, I always point them at your works first.
elementalmoon posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 9:36pm
I liked this chapter! It wasn't disappointing in the slightest, at least to me :D I can't wait for more from this and your other fics. Especially Perfect Slytherins. Out of curiosity, will you be continuing the Matryoshka Vingettes? I know it says it's complete, but I always thought it had some loose ends. Either way, I love your writing and can't wait to see whatever you have in store for us!
red jacobson posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 9:24pm
All I can say is "Remind me to use squished more in everyday conversation"
"Yes Boss" LOL!!!!!!!!!!
Another enjoyable chapter, and if Harry isn't careful, he's going to have Gabrielle as his girlfriend instead of Fleur, and that's a bit EEWWW! *GRIN*
Thanks for the chapter
Clell65619 posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 9:21pm
This is great. Honestly I'd forgotten what happened in chapter one, so I got the pleasure of rereading the first part of this masterpiece. Harry's accumulation of employees and buddies is a wonder to behold.
- How long until the bulk of the crowd at the tasks are in the employ of House Potter?
- I do believe that having Harry toss the egg into a wine cask is the most original method of letting the egg tell it's tale I've ever seen.
- Very well done.
Chris1 posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 9:06pm
xD Awesome, although there's a certain lack of conflict.
cjonbloodletter posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 1:34am
flymolo42 posted a comment on Wednesday 12th May 2010 7:00pm
It's not studious literature, but I love it. It would be funny if Draco tries to hire advisors to copy Harry, but I can't think of who they should be.
Anxiously waiting for more.
DrT posted a comment on Wednesday 12th May 2010 1:58pm
You know, if this Ginny really is 'the psycho-stalker from hell', then she will notice that the twins are arranging Harry's 'romantic education' and will be really peeved about not being included. . . .
Geddon posted a comment on Wednesday 12th May 2010 11:17am
Nice to see some new fics from you, good work as always.
michaelsuave posted a comment on Tuesday 11th May 2010 6:27pm
Excelent story so far, can't wait to see where this goes!
Carolyn Jinn posted a comment on Monday 10th May 2010 7:20am
Good story. Great laugh in quite a number of places. The twins are always a great laugh and they really do think outside the box they live in.
Like 'Stoffe', I too am an avid H/G shipper, but this story has the beginnings of a great story (like TMW).
Can't wait for more. :)
Stoffe posted a comment on Sunday 9th May 2010 8:57pm
Okay, that was absolutely insanely awesome! Wonderful new take, and you still have the crisp sense of humor that made TMW awesome. I can't wait to see where this goes.
Alas, as a hard-core ultra-fluff H/G shipper, I must object. I usually don't even look at it if it's not. Consider that high praise. :) Well done, I'll be eagerly anticipating updates :)