Dicknorn posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 10:38pm
This sounds like a very interesting and original twist to the tri-wizard tournament. I would quite enjoy reading a few more chapters to this story. I hope you do continue this one as it appears that the plot and time line would have some very funny Fred and George inspired madness.
rowin posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 10:37pm
Great so far hope you continue this story and your naruto one.
Primy148 posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 10:33pm
Another great fc. I like the touch of Godfather.
Anand posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 10:25pm
This was awesome! In your explanation, you beat yourself up a bit about quality and cliches, and obviously, you know yourself, but this story was just plain FUN! I do hope you enjoy writing it, because I love reading it.
Ken Warner posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 10:25pm
This has got to be the most fun that Harry has ever had while remaining in the Tri-Wizard.
IT is inescapable that you, my dear Jeconais, are a true genius and will one day be greeted at the Pearly Gates by tears of joy by all your fans finally meeting you face to face.
thanks so much for yet another excellent story.
I particularly love the subcontractors
Phntm-Phnx posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 10:21pm
this story kicks ass...it's completely over the top and so unlike JK's Harry Potter. please keep the chapters coming!!!!
Shawn Pickett posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 10:19pm
I'm kind of hoping there will be more of this, this is brilliant!
Tanaxanth posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 10:14pm
I loved it! personally I'm just glad you are writing and sharing.
One possible Typo
Hermione looked up and smiled at him. “Go to bed, Harry. You look tired. You’re going to have to work hard over the next few months to survive.”
“I’ve already taken some steps to help with that,” he confessed.
“Good,” Hermione agreed. “Now [u]shoot[/u], I want to finish this book before I go to bed.”
Harry walked up to his room, feeling even better. Not only did Fred and George believe in him, Hermione had proved to herself that he couldn’t have got in to the tournament on his own. And things were back to being fine between them!
Should that have been shoo?
Memory King posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 10:07pm
This is over the top and doesn't pretend to be otherwise.
That's exactly why it's so awesome!
The timeline is a bit odd in places, but the general feeling of the story more than made up for it.
Looking forward to more!
sparrowphoenix posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 10:03pm
I can't wait for more. This is absolutely wonderful and what I wished would have happened. Dump Ron by the wayside as he is and always will be such a jealous idiot.
mrrlyn posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 10:03pm
I just got done reading your lastest, and if that is a bad story... I am the king of england. That was better then 90% of the stuff i have read lately and had me laughing the entire time. All i can say is keep them coming. despite what you think of this story. to me this is easily on par with your previous work. this is fanfic and ment to entertain, not be some kind of professional work. BTW, this story is easily 100 times better than the last 20 books i have read and they were professional authors. Sd i have always said to my friends about you, the work you think is crap, is 100times better then 99% of the fanfic out there. And I hope you never stop writing. just seeing an update from you makes my day better.
GremlinXTJ posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 10:01pm
This is a very original and very entertaining story. I LOVE IT.
Crabb and Goyle switching did strike me as a bit too much but its all good. :)
Revan posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 9:54pm
oh this is great, if this the 'low-quality un-betaed work' then you have put several authors/beta's i know to shame, please, keep this up i'm really looking forward to more of this. There is little humor of this quality about and i love it
Professor Complexity posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 9:50pm
I must say that I really enjoyed reading this, and as normal, I've found it incredibly humorous.
I'm looking forward to reading more.
Dreadnaught posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 9:49pm
If you hadn't told me it wasn't beta-ed I wouldn't have known. Very good story and I can't wait for the rest of it. This looks like it's shaping up to be a delightfully good crack-fic.
red jacobson posted a comment on Thursday 29th April 2010 9:41pm
Tim; I really hope you are going to continue this story, because it's way too much fun to leave hanging this way!