Meteoricshipyards posted a comment on Saturday 22nd May 2010 8:26pm
Excellent. And so much fun even when it's serious.
Love Gabbi. I hope Harry's not just leading her on.....
Thanks for the story. Looking forward to more.
71_scorpio posted a comment on Saturday 22nd May 2010 7:45pm
*SMOOCH!* Love, love, love this story. You've taken the whole concept of Harry hiring out bodygaurds & tutors and made it wacky, fun, and super shiny!
I adore Crusher & Smasher and how they've turned Crabbe & Goyle into thier apprentices. *giggles* Usually when you see those two in a fic, they're very flat and 2D. These guys are funny & likeable, if a bit dim.
I got a laugh out of the DE bounty only being for the arm & not the whole person. *snort* I keep picturing a bunch of one armed wizards wandering around trying to make up believable stories about what happened without admitting that they were captured for the DE bounty.
I also like your take on Gabby & Fluer. I adore a bitchy Fluer and yours' is perfect. And Gabby, I could just eat her up she's so sweet. Thank you for posting, I can hardly wait for more.
Ryder654 posted a comment on Friday 21st May 2010 9:41pm
another hit keep up the good work.
Hagrid posted a comment on Friday 21st May 2010 5:01am
Yer know, its hard ter type with tears of laughter rolling down yer face, but I just had ter let yeh know that this story in'int over the top as yer put it, its Over The Moon it is. Never knew why 'Arry EVER forgave the red weasel for doubtin' him in them books by JKR. I were there, I saw how hurt young 'Arry looked, how hurt he was when his so called friends turned there ruddy backs on 'im. You keep spreadin' the truth.
Markus Gabler posted a comment on Thursday 20th May 2010 3:53pm
this story proofs once more for me why you're on the top ten of the list of my favorite FF authors (Hope still holds place 1 on my favourite story list). I'm quite curious where thoose relationsships are heading to.
I'm realy, realy looking forward to the next chapter....
Keep up your fascinating work, please!
h_p4eva posted a comment on Thursday 20th May 2010 12:09pm
Another great chapter I love your work. You might not think much of this story but personally I think you are a genius and this is the best story Ive read for a while keep up the good work.
Ranglar posted a comment on Wednesday 19th May 2010 8:35pm
Yes! I really like Perfect Slytherins (and everything else you write, including this story, of course). The first story of yours I read was TMW when I was a die-hard Harry/Ginny fan, but you've managed to make me like all kinds of other pairings as well.
Bashalinge posted a comment on Wednesday 19th May 2010 5:38am
loving the new Harry keep the story running I await the next chapter
adun007 posted a comment on Wednesday 19th May 2010 1:07am
This piece of literature is very well written. I read something about it being boring but actually I was having a fun and interesting read. although you might call it less than your average level of work, personally, the quality is up there with This Means War.
SirKaid posted a comment on Tuesday 18th May 2010 3:24pm
Gabrielle is absolutely adorable. I also like that you're including Harry's teaching abilities. Far too few authors recognize that Harry's an incredible tutor - after all, he took Neville from loser to sword-swinging hero in half a year. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Patrick Rice posted a comment on Tuesday 18th May 2010 12:14pm
Another great chapter. I really like the way you have written Harry's relationship with Gabby. I have always liked Gabrielle, and have loved the way you have written her in other stories. This is the best use of her child character that I have read.
Thanks again for sharing this story with us.
johncgardiner posted a comment on Tuesday 18th May 2010 2:43am
Very good read thank you
Anthony May posted a comment on Monday 17th May 2010 5:19pm
As always, a brilliant chapter! Great story, I can't wait for Fleur to let her guard down and let Harry in. Keep up the great work!
WorldOfLilyEvans posted a comment on Monday 17th May 2010 2:57pm
I really like what Harry's doing for Gabrielle! He's a really good big brother. He should teach more students.
He's also a really good boss, I think, haha! And a great chooser of friends...
Great story, anyway, and I'd like to read more of you soon!
Zicou posted a comment on Monday 17th May 2010 9:59am
I can't wait to read more so...
nothorse posted a comment on Monday 17th May 2010 8:06am
I really like what you're doing. It is kind of a wish fulfillment fantasy, but it is very well done.
I wonder how you want to turn Fleur around. If you want to do so. I don't really remember herfrom canon so I don't know whether the portrayal is accurate. If it is, making friends with the annoying litle sister is probably going to deepen the dislike for Harry.
Dracolych69 posted a comment on Monday 17th May 2010 7:50am
Another great chapter from you! Like how you worked Gabrielle in. Interesting idea with the wands, and enjoyed the demonstration with Squisher/Lisa.
tsmuckitelly posted a comment on Monday 17th May 2010 4:06am
Another great read. I like your writing a lot. Thanks.
Stenstyren posted a comment on Sunday 16th May 2010 10:45pm
I'm really enjoying this story so far, the light-hearted tone is really amazing. I like how you are making this into a sort-of crackfic but still have a solid plot and characterization.
Just a word of caution, I noticed some elements of the story that was serious on a level that didn't really fit in with the rest of the story. Harry immidietly telling Gabrielle that he was neglected as a child comes to mind but it was more reading between words in certain places.
Still, a great story! Eagerly awaiting an update:)
dest posted a comment on Sunday 16th May 2010 10:37pm
wow, i love this. just found your stories thanks to weixuan. liked a few that i read, but my favorite so far is definitely this one. looking forward to seeing a lot more of this story.