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Soresina posted a comment on Monday 22nd December 2014 2:02pm

This is getting more interesting now as it seems the UK police have discovered Harry's existence. Does this mean he is going to be taking over their law enforcement and single-handedly bringing downs the street gangs. I look forward to finding out.

IcySneasel posted a comment on Friday 12th December 2014 9:22pm

Great story Got my complete attention and thats a huge cliff hanger I hope you update soon.

Lumos posted a comment on Monday 8th December 2014 3:58am

I have been reading your stories, here and there, now and then, for two or three years now, and they are almost always wonderfully enjoyable. This one and Blue Steel have been the most recent, along with several rereads of White Knight Gray Queen, which has got to be one of my favorite fan fics of all time. Just wanted to take the time to thank you for the wonderful stories, and ask one question about the site ... is there any way within the site to get notifications of updates?

Again, some absolutely fabulous stories!

Tenchifew posted a comment on Sunday 7th December 2014 7:11pm

Glad to see a new chapter of this great story!

Very interesting developments.

Thank you for writing.

darklightuk posted a comment on Wednesday 3rd December 2014 9:08pm

Very nice story flow. Your characterisations are very appealling and I can't wait to read more.

Just need to figure out if this site has 'Story Alerts' :p

sq33kl337 posted a comment on Monday 1st December 2014 8:56pm

Absolutely loving it!!!! I always emjoy a new update :D:D:D:D:D

samsas posted a comment on Monday 1st December 2014 6:06pm

Wonderful story!

Patches posted a comment on Saturday 29th November 2014 10:13am

This is amazing. Of course Harry has aged himself studying ahead in the ROR. He is doing amazing things for a lot of people though. He has probably ruined Megan's father. She really needs to be reigned in. I love the way that Aurora just assumed the role of Harry's girlfriend. That worked really well except with Annie. She could tell the truth. I'm glad Harry is backing the show. Annie will do very well. Now he has tried to help someone that was attacked and he is getting arrested for "looking guilty". Thanks for writing. I look forward to more of this story. Write when you can. I will wait. I love your stories. p

The Seeker posted a comment on Friday 28th November 2014 7:44pm

Fantastic chapter until the ending. Random 1 name captured my feelings much better than I could convey, so I'll just point to his/her comments and say, 'me too.' As you stated in your comments, this story is now operating on the international level, as opposed to being Hogwarts-centric, with the introduction of the Mata Hari, Natalia. From the looks of it, she will replace Kate, which is disappointing. The end also takes us in an entirely new direction, one, I hope, which doesn't ruin the story for me. For what it's worth, this is the first time I've been disappointed in anything you've written, so I strongly hope the next chapter makes it more paleaable.

epsilon posted a comment on Friday 28th November 2014 7:28pm

I'm really happy to see this fic back. I really love it. But I think you may have forgotten some of the stuff you wrote earlier in this fic. For one, Harry was absolutely railing against the notion that the AK could be used in a positive manner; that it's anything but totally evil staining your soul forever magic. That he would use it now, when spells like the stunner would do the same, is incomprehensible. In addition I'm not sure why Harry would consider the boy beyond saving. He can apparate directly to Poppy - or even Dumbledore. A few spells to keep him alive and then apparate back and run into a hospital, and he wouldn't even need to know about magic. The death comes across as one of this computer game scenes where assassins kill the king and despite the fact that the main character has resurrection available, the king can't be saved. The Russians... rumors about Harry's reaction to betrayal will leave Hogwarts soon. I do wonder if they'll adjust the plan or are going to go down burning. On the other hand once Harry stops procrastinating I'm not sure he'll give her any time. Of course I wouldn't be surprised if Jonathan had contacts in Russia that warn him about the gamble because they realize just how badly it will backfire.

random1name posted a comment on Friday 28th November 2014 8:39am

That ending made no sense and was frankly terrible. Stasis spells have been used in this story, and the wounded boy was harmed without magic, so it would have either been easy to heal him or simple to stabilise him and take him to a healer.

Aside from that, you have vaunted Harry's people reading skills to a very high level, he would have picked up on certain things.

And on top of that, this scenario fits too well with the earlier hypothetical, the one where Harry flat out said the killing curse was wrong and damaged the caster. There are other ways to ease suffering, simple ways, that aren't Unforgiveable and aren't fuelled by hatred. Heck, a stunner would have worked! Instant unconsciousness. Or a sleeping charm, or any manner of magic you have already used in this story.

This is a wonderful, unique story and, personally, I feel it deserves better than that. It broke character, in-verse rules and possibilities, and added a pointless level of angst and stupidity to a situation that could have had nearly the same level of drama without the Killing Curse. That is, if it was crucial to the plot. And if that is the case I am afraid the plot probably needs reworking.

The situation at the end there felt contrived and painfully so, a stark contrast to the rest of the story which flowed far better and did not include such things. Have the spy able to pass his tests, ramp up the drama and betrayal there if you must, and torture us so wonderfully with his love life until it hurts, but please change that last situation so that it wasn't so forced.

Just my opinion, think nothing of it if you like. I love and adore this story and can't wait to see where you take it next. Your writing is wonderful and your characters compelling. I beg you though to please change that curse, if nothing else about that situation.

adafrog posted a comment on Friday 28th November 2014 4:26am

Uh oh.

Very good.

Morsamare posted a comment on Thursday 27th November 2014 8:14am

... He seriously used an unforgivable to put someone out of thier misery, someone that would have died in seconds/minutes anyways? I always wonder where the fanon notion that it was created for mercy killings came from since the purity of intent needed to use it normally eschews mercy killings, at least arguably. If the torture curse won't work unless you only want them to suffer for the simple sake of thier suffering not for revenge or any other diluted intent, the killing curse might not function unless you want death for death's sake, not for some release of pain or some nicer alternative, but simply because you want them to die because they are there. In this instance, the stunning curse would serve the exact same function, he passes away without pain, and no life sentence for you for casting it, WIN WIN!

niloc posted a comment on Thursday 27th November 2014 12:00am

It is a great story. I cannot wait to read more.

Dupapier posted a comment on Wednesday 26th November 2014 8:57pm

A great chapter as usual.

I can't wait for the next chapter but take your time.

Good rest :).

super12 posted a comment on Wednesday 26th November 2014 12:40pm

I don't post on this website just because there are so few stories I like to read but when ever you have a new one I read it. I'm totally pissed that you left it there lol. I want to see what you have Harry do to get out of this. I'm just so excited you post a chapter!

Children-of-Bodom posted a comment on Tuesday 25th November 2014 3:05pm

great chapter, as usual. Really looking forward to see what you intend to do with the russian agent, because considering the powers of all involved she should be exposed as soon as she meets Dawn, Gabby, Hermione or any other girl close to Harry.

thetaxzombie posted a comment on Monday 24th November 2014 11:18pm

That was one hell of a chapter. A truly grand chapter. Intense, compelling.

A gutwrencher of an end.

Well done!

Lisagrace posted a comment on Monday 24th November 2014 8:45pm

Great chapter. Very intense.

slayersfan01 posted a comment on Monday 24th November 2014 8:06pm

I'm really happy that you updated! I'm NOT happy that now it will be a very long time till the next chapter AND you left this at a cliffhanger! Gah! Anyway, great chapter. I really liked the Megan situation and hope that you follow that up somehow. I know its not important by it feels, err, incomplete not knowing what repercussions await her. And these "Mata Hari" OC's...WOW! I've completely forgotten about them! So interesting!