By Jeconais
Reviews
Logan_MacLeod posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 12:56pm
I LOVE this story!!! PLease please get it updated soon. That was great seeing Lee again, I have always enjoyed his commentating.
Louis IX posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 12:16pm
Good! Great! Wonderful! Magnifique! Encore!
Nelly posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 12:02pm
Love the end,
great chapter.
Omagic posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 11:50am
Another really good chapter. I like that you used Minerva (I roll on a first name basis with the resident transfiguration prof) to help address the "squick" factor of Harry being older and a professor to Gabrielle. Excellent use of a character who seamlessly melds into that roll.
A very well written chapter, kept very tight for the most, and left me wanting more at the end.
Thanks for writing,
Omagic
Fiona O'Neill posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 11:23am
There are times when I think you are a very cruel man the way you leave us just itching for more. I'm always dying to read just a bit more when your chapters finish. I like the detail you go into regarding your understanding into the theory of magic so that we the readers have an understanding of where you are going with a plot line. I also liked the scene with Gabby and her team mates as they confronted her.
As always thanks for writing, it's always enjoyable to read what you've done
Fiona
Renzo7 posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 11:22am
well done, the story is progressing nicely. Only thing is, would you please try to keep updates more frequent?
Scott Sakraida posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 11:02am
excellent, just excellent. nothing else could be said.
hoss posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 10:31am
Bloody hell, late for work again you would think that by now I'd know better then to start reading one of your chapters in the morring, there to good too stop hoft way throuhgt. Oh well Thanks
Leisha posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 10:18am
What a fantastic picture to leave us with! I can imagine that the only reason Harry didn't tear Malfoy to shreds is because he was bleeding and unconscious already. I hope Harry doesn't get too angry with him and that he will find a way to help the Beauxbatons chasers be better in the next match. I also love Hermione's plan to help Harry and Gabby out. Can't wait for the next chapter. Fantastic as usual.
lap10 posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 10:06am
I like that Harry and Gabby's relationship was discovered by the other Beauxbaton students, I thought that some aspects of it must have been noticeable.
"We’ve had some fun conversations with the Durmstrang students, as we both speak bad English," Simone said cheerfully. "Some of the Hogwarts students are okay, but some seem a little arrogant."
It's not like the Hogwarts students have offered to learn French or German, either.
I'm really glad Harry still has an ally at Hogwarts in Minerva, and I can't wait to see the Hogwarts reaction to the B. professors team.
Overall, a wonderful chapter in a truly enjoyable story.
turnlach posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 9:48am
I have a feeling that Draco is going to try and stir up trouble for Gabrielle after that little run in. There's probably some sort of rule about how a Veela can't use their powers to make a man hurt themselves like that and you can bet that Malfoy will want revenge.
Are you going to have a Harry/Dumbledore confrontation? I would like to see one where Harry really lets the old bastard have it!
Crys posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 8:11am
Slightly new perspective of Gabby's post-Mating. We'd heard the story before, but not from her POV.
"It had been another reason for his frequent use of the Cruciatus curse; it had disguised the true reason why they had sometimes felt weak and tired."
Clever idea.
AD put that memory in his pensieve . . . *frown* I just hope something doesn't "click" the next time he stirs it.
*cheer* Go, Gabby! Great speech.
*blink* Min? Well, I know you like McG . . . Good relationship/friedship for Harry, here, methinks.
Hmm. Okay, a line from Harry that APPEARS to be a command may or may not be. Gabby knows when he means them and when he doesn't. Gives you wiggle room as needed.
"But it’s supposed to be something he doesn’t want to do."
"Oh," Gabrielle said innocently. "In that case, I want sex."
I love this girl. I really, really do.
*evil grin* Good reaction to the ferret, Gabby. Now just to determine if they should report him to Albus and covertly to DMLE . . .
Looking forward to more ferret, AD, Snape, and Trewlaney bashing. And the MoM if he pokes his head up.
Great story, boss.
Lyz posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 7:57am
Well, I was a bit to excited to say this previously, but anyway: thank you for a great read. Now perhaps I can also say something that makes at least a little sense.
I see that Gabrielle is still working hard on getting laid ;) I must admire her for her persistence and admit that in her situation I would have been a lot more frustrated about failing.
On your Viktor: rofl — I have always liked him. He is a very unexplored character, and I tend to imagine him as a bit more silent person that you do, but who cares? I love the way he is here.
'"See," Viktor laughed uproariously. "For a little man, he has a big heart. Now, I must go insult Flint!"'
You’ve chosen to do Minerva almost as you did in the Harry/Padma triology of yours — and she’s just the way I like her :) I truly came to appreciate her when I read the fifth book — the one and only time JKR has given us a glimpse beyond the stern professor image.
'"Oooh, punishment!" Gabrielle said excitedly. "I’ve heard of that. Harry, you must kiss me."
"I think you’re missing the point, somewhat, Gabrielle," Hermione sighed.
Gabrielle looked at Hermione. "The idea is to get him to do something I want, right?"
Hermione nodded.
"But I want kissing," she pointed out.
"But it’s supposed to be something he doesn’t want to do."
"Oh," Gabrielle said innocently. "In that case, I want sex."'
Again, roflmao.
You do Lee perfectly as well.
'His eyes found Gabrielle in the crowd with ease; she was an island of calm around the other students, and for a second she looked back.
"No," he whispered. "Not all of them."'
Hm. Am I the only one who just had this major flash-back to every romantic movie I’ve ever seen, where the eyes of the two lovers meet (the movie being in slow-motion, and the two characters islands of colour is a greyish mass), and you just know it’s going to be the two of them?
And by the way, I found myself being almost sorry for Malfoy — ALMOST being the KEY word, of course... he didn’t know that hitting on Gabrielle wasn’t going to wark at all.
Still, he deserved having to run into a tree. Totally.
Can he do it one more time?
:) go you.
Lon Huey posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 7:48am
AAAaauuuuggh!!!!! I was so enthralled in the story, I didn't notice I was coming to the end of the chapter. I was so enjoying the new form of ferret bouncing, and then the review box came into view. Much too early!
The two stories of Daphne and Gabrielle have been your best. What wonderful characters. You either know some interesting people or have an incredible imagination. I suspect a combination of the two. Very well crafted. The best compliment I can offer is that I hate the end of a chapter, but love the anticipation of a new one.
Carry on, Wordsmith. Your fans loyally await.
Cliff Bryner posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 7:35am
My dear friend. This was superb. May I speak for 1000 of your fans, and BEG you to put your other writings aside, and post the next installment ASAP??????? Please and pretty please. This was great. And, by the way, would you ask you dual friends at Bobmin to post their next one soon. You guys are beyond addiction. PPPPPPLLLLLEEEEAAASE.
Ann F posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 7:20am
Worth the wait!!!
Wolf550e posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 7:05am
I love the story, especially the characterization. Thank you so much for this update!
Noname posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 6:08am
Great Story!
to the last chapter i can only say: Poor Draco *g*
AK posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 5:53am
Hahahaha... run into that tree !!! AHahahahha!
Woah dam good story!
Brad Crawford posted a comment on Friday 10th February 2006 1:24pm