Alysson posted a comment on Saturday 1st May 2010 2:11pm

I just re-read the chapter (again) and, yes, I still laughed aloud.

Someone made a comment about Lady as opposed to Ma'am or Miss. The four minders using 'lady' is so in character for a couple of Essex goons that it hurts.

Your comments about "quality of writing", however, are way off the mark - even without a beta the content and style are far, far better than many post-beta, gamma and delta works of fiction. Let's just face it, you have it (whatever it happens to be). So ... let's see another chappie cobbled together the same as this'un soon ... any time in the past 24 hrs will do.

Justin posted a comment on Saturday 1st May 2010 2:08pm

can't wait for next chapter.

Illusia posted a comment on Saturday 1st May 2010 1:00pm

OMg. This made me smile in so many places :)
Unfortunately, stories I've read recently all seem lacking in humour dept. So I'm thrilled you're writing this.
It's very plausible that the twin would be able to do this. And then when they do, Harry's luck just attached to everything and warps it so much more profitable, in every way.
I was sorta worried for Harry when the twins began to use that much money so I hope you'll show what goes on with the meeting Harry's supposed to have with his financial advisor.

twilighthost posted a comment on Saturday 1st May 2010 12:42pm

Loved it, really fun. Hopefully it won't be too long before the next segment.

TALM posted a comment on Saturday 1st May 2010 11:02am

LOVED THIS WHEN CAN I GET MORE

Dracolych69 posted a comment on Saturday 1st May 2010 10:38am

This is just beautiful. An honestly new idea. Very nice to see them. Eagerly awaiting the next one!

darthloki posted a comment on Saturday 1st May 2010 9:15am

HEE!

This is awesome. Very funny.

Queberjeque posted a comment on Saturday 1st May 2010 8:13am

I can't wait to see where this goes, it's great! I hope the twins get Tonks involved somewhere ;)

Adam posted a comment on Saturday 1st May 2010 8:10am

Now this is a lot of fun, and definately made me smile as i was reading it. Good work, and look forward to the next chapter.

osma posted a comment on Saturday 1st May 2010 7:50am

A bit fast and furious, but stated that it would be diffrent from begining, so no complaints. Funny as hell of course, anything with fred and george usually is. Best part of course is the last, as while some young men would be able to keep their composure (myself included), once the clothes came off, it all goes out the airlock. If it hadn't been for the previous two days where he started to get used to odd new things, he prob would have fainted straight out.

vasilis01 posted a comment on Saturday 1st May 2010 7:39am

Excellent story so far. Keep writing.

dougal74 posted a comment on Saturday 1st May 2010 7:32am

A great first chapter.

As always, superbly written, well thought out and funny to boot.

I look forward to reading further instalments.

Aote77 posted a comment on Saturday 1st May 2010 6:43am

An interesting take on GoF plot, it was a fun read. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Aote77

Richard6154 posted a comment on Saturday 1st May 2010 6:25am

Very funny and yet for an over the top fic has a reasonable premise.
Looking forward to more and thanks for sharing.

Zooxle posted a comment on Saturday 1st May 2010 5:38am

This was by far the best new story I'v read all month (well the last 4 months anyway). I love Kate, and wish I had my own Kate when I was younger ;-) I will be keeping a close eye on this as this promises to be a very very fun read. Good luck with the rest of the story, and please write it quickly but not so fast that it loses it's quility.

Once again, great work.

Zooxle
South Africa

TheHard posted a comment on Saturday 1st May 2010 5:11am

Hahahaha! Man, that was fun...

I just have one complain, was all that gay talk necesary? really, was kind of fun at first, but next was awkward, and unconfortable (IMHO, of course)... and, that chocolate reference? that's a no-no! a little more, and this is one of those slash fic, man! xD

Anyway, was really fun to read, thanks, and keep going!

Ah, congrats about the new feature, it's cool.

dougdoc posted a comment on Saturday 1st May 2010 4:47am

This is great! Please continue.

Mistress of Potions posted a comment on Saturday 1st May 2010 2:54am

Thank you for this new story. I have read almost everything you have posted on this site and enjoyed all of it. Please keep up with this if Real Life at all allows it.

Nat221 posted a comment on Saturday 1st May 2010 2:46am

Love this so far it's wonderfully over the top and I'm looking forward to reading more.

Logan_MacLeod posted a comment on Saturday 1st May 2010 2:29am

AWESOME!!!!