uncle_rand posted a comment on Sunday 2nd May 2010 5:28pm

Good story so far. Can't wait to see what the boys do when they find out Moody casts the imperio spell on Harry, or will you have Crabbe and Goyle do something about it during class?

About the explanation, why are you giving one? After the stories you wrote, you don't have to explain anything to anyone. That is one of the things I hate most, authors write a great story, ask for helpful reviews and then spend more time answering the bad reviews than they do the helpful ones. Except for the ideas reviewers offer to help with the storyline, what we write matters not at all. The only thing that matters is are you still happy to be writing the story. Sorry, bit of a rant there, but it's a bit of a peeve.

Eagerly awaiting more
Uncle Rand

VickiiMadd posted a comment on Sunday 2nd May 2010 2:41pm

Hahahaha
I freakin LOVE this story!
It has me cracking up.
I can't wait to read more of it!

dogbertcarroll posted a comment on Sunday 2nd May 2010 2:27pm

Great story, made me laugh. Looking forward to the next bit.

alicat1010 posted a comment on Sunday 2nd May 2010 2:21pm

OMG

That was SOOOOO funny. Can't wait to read more.

Mesterio posted a comment on Sunday 2nd May 2010 1:19pm

loved this new story, would definitely want to see more on this as its such a great plot. Hope to see another chapter soon!

marcelhm posted a comment on Sunday 2nd May 2010 11:32am

Hey a quick note from an insignificant fan :P.

on the story I can only say I actually spit out my coffee at some point so thank you for that.... much enjoyed cleaning my desk.

about the explanation you gave I can only say, hope you get over the habit of dragging yourself down, I can only agree with the last part, it's free entertainment and I should hope you only write for your own enjoyment. But don't sell yourself short just because you don't go 200 miles more than every other fanfiction author out there.

GZ Marcelhm

Markus Gabler posted a comment on Sunday 2nd May 2010 10:17am

Aloah,

I realy loved this first of hopefully many more very chapters of this story.

Kind Regards

Kaaz posted a comment on Sunday 2nd May 2010 7:52am

You know, this is the most enjoyable and original TWT story, to my knowledge (and I have read thousands of stories so far)! I'm looking forward to your future installments, and thanks for your stories.

Nosferatum posted a comment on Sunday 2nd May 2010 6:48am

Well, it's fun and good to read, and in the end it's all that matters. Don't know why you think it's of insufficient quality, though you should know better... Anyhow, if you're going to continue this fic, I personally will gladly read more.

E5150 posted a comment on Sunday 2nd May 2010 5:25am

Hahaha, that's awesome. Lookin forward to more.

Tlcatlady posted a comment on Sunday 2nd May 2010 3:17am

Oh I do hope that you keep going with this! It's absolutely hilarious! TLC

jimby posted a comment on Sunday 2nd May 2010 2:50am

Awesome start, loving it :)

snapeangel posted a comment on Sunday 2nd May 2010 2:44am

reallyt great hope a chapter 2 happens soon!

Pyrgus posted a comment on Sunday 2nd May 2010 12:17am

Love it, hope you continue it ^^

brad posted a comment on Saturday 1st May 2010 11:27pm

Good fun! Regardless of how you feel about your writing as it stands at the moment this sort of thing still fills a niche; it's entertaining, it's fun, it brings enjoyment. Thank you for continuing to write!

The humour was the biggest attraction to the chapter, of course. I guffawed-out-loud, I admit it, when Dobby zapped the twins into the lake. I thought I'd adjusted nicely to the 'Jeconais pacing' of the jokes and everything-happening-to-Harry, but that one was just too sudden for me, too quick. Laugh-out-loud material!

On a more serious note I'm glad you kept Hermione as a loyal friend. But you had me concerned every time - twice, at least - when she'd start a conversation taking Harry to task about one of his decisions (before coming around to his point of view). I could see you doing that as a continuing comedic sub-thread in this story; Hermione continually being ... challenged ... by Harry's activities. Okay, it might keep me, as a loyal Hermione fan and reader, continually a bit on my toes as well, worried that my girl and her friendship with Harry might crack, but hey, every little bit helps to keep the reader engaged I suppose. Even evil teasing by the author.

Exposing a fourteen-year-old boy to a grown woman in the nude is a bit silly; I didn't like that bit. And usually your Harry romances are quite 'innocent' in that regard (which I've always liked). That took me aback somewhat. He's only fourteen years old, for crying out loud! Okay, disabuse him of all the puerile teenage nonsense that we had to slog through in Rowling's sixth book (did you ever get around to reading HBP or DH? Lucky you if not!) but then going to the other extreme and piling on a nude mature woman? Hmmmph.

Still, that was only a tiny part of the chapter, no bid deal, I'm not going to go to town over it. Maybe you could have Sirius come across Kate and 'steal' her from Harry, making the twins realise that they need to have teenage Harry acquaint a teenage girl first? :-)

Thank you sincerely for the chapter; I saved it for my Sunday brunch read. Just like old times! :-)

Angharad posted a comment on Saturday 1st May 2010 10:35pm

This is such a huge idea! Having Fred and George in this capacity is mind - boggling and yet so obvious. They would be desperate for money at this time and Harry would be equally desperate for some sort of help! It's a great match-up and I look forward to seeing more of this.

Tracy0652 posted a comment on Saturday 1st May 2010 10:34pm

Hahaha - this is AWESOME! What a riot! Thanks ;)

Chickenhawk posted a comment on Saturday 1st May 2010 10:34pm

Brilliant. Gred & Forge as advisors to the future Lord Potter. A couple of cliches served and a spin on the GOF plot I haven't seen before. I'm looking forward to the next few "teachers" F&G have lined up. A goblin or swiss gnome for monetary/investment advice perhaps?

Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Saturday 1st May 2010 7:45pm

Well, this was a fun fic to read imo, and really loved Harry and his torpedoes that are working for him, as well as the junior versions also, and will be fun to see what happens as the first task comes around, how Harry's "lessons" will progress, and what all will go down as each side of Light and Dark start to realize that this wasn't what was supposed to happen.

gadriam posted a comment on Saturday 1st May 2010 7:15pm

WOOHOO! Feel the love, admiration and a years supply of sunshine rain over you! May 48 forgotten goddesses with great endowments bless your keyboard! A worthier cause for overuse of exclamation marks has rarely been seen!

To sum it up in a more prozac fashion: Great job. Keep it up. I'll be here for all of it. No rush, but please....

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