By Jeconais
Reviews
cmzanna posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:16am
So happy to see more of this story from you, and any work from you is a welcome break for me. Great description of Dobby's joy after Harry thanked him and of course the whole scene with the dragon had me laughing. You've got such a gift for making me believe what you're writing. Thanks.
DragoFlare posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:09am
This was another enjoyable chapter. Great work as Uasual.
DJ posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:08am
Thanks Tim.
Crys posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:07am
Oh, and Lisa's "handle" is Squisher? *grin*
Crys posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:05am
I think I know why you aren't all that kicked up on this story. This greatly resembles a crack-fic in pace and depth of the overall plot. There are a lot of sub-plots, but none of it really makes the reader think. It's all just fun candy.
Your other big stories are much slower paced and cover some heavy topics.
That's not bad. Just a different style, different kind of story.
I suspect that when you're done, you'll realize that doing a crack-fic comedy is actually good for you. Makes you work "muscles" that your other stories may not have tried to use. YMMV.
And as a side benefit, it's hugely entertaining for the rest of us.
Hmm. At this rate, Hermione will be Victor's hostage again. No tellin' who could be Harry's. Gabrielle? Melissa? Fred&George? Hell, Christophe? (incidentally, I rather like that name for the Beauxbaton's head boy :)
Fun chapter. Thanks.
Memory King posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:01am
Quite a lot of interesting and cool sequences here, especially the psychological victory in the First Task.
Was amusing that everyone solved the clue so promptly.
Gryffindors being antagonistic toward Harry is somewhat of a self-fulfilling prophecy though, considering that he's distancing himself even further from them.
Will be awaiting more of this, semi-patiently.
Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:00am
<snicker> This was a fun chapter that had me quite amused. I do love the way things are going as Harry steps up to the challenges, both of the tournament and of maturing to match those he's dealing with (I suspect the latter is severely annoying to Dumbledore). It's a fun read and quite enjoyable; thank you.
Pai posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 12:52am
Awesome fic is awesome.
This is a really enjoyable read.
Little Gabrielle could use something for all that hair, Some frilly hair band? Goth-loli stile velee?
Wolfric posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 12:44am
Fine chapter. I particullarly liked Harry's chat with Albus. I am curious to see who Harry will take to the ball. I will be gald to see more Perfect Slytherins, I like that story at least as much as this one. Thanks for writing. W.
tntornado posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 12:33am
ok, I don't know about anyone else, but I really enjoyed this chapter just as much as the other one, and as much as your previous works. The way Harry keeps learning, and keeping the others with him and adding to his entourage is extremely enjoyable, and just what I like to see/read in fics but isn't done much anymore.
Keep up the great work,
TnTornado
Snag posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 12:32am
Agreed, not as much rampant, outright hilarity, but a good solid plot groove got started in this chapter. And having Fred and George give showmanship lessons was quite fun. Good times!
protonius12 posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 12:28am
Another GREAT chapter. It's very fun to read !
Neil Glover posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 12:12am
Another great chapter, I love what you are doing with Harry, I look forward to what happens next.
Nicci posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 12:02am
I dont know hy you thought we would be disappointed another brilliant chapter and something i havent come across before. makes a change to have something to smile about as well as a cracking good story you manage to mix the humour with a decent plot and make me wish there was more when i get to the end of the chapter
Steven Anderson posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 12:02am
I like this one. It is fun without being too silly. I hope you have a blast writing it.
yerocfponk posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 11:58pm
I had somehow missed this story before, then got an alert, love it I was cracking up.
Dakaath@TTH posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 11:57pm
Once again a great chapter, just as awesome as the first.
I love the line about squish and have always felt people should use it more. I actually have replaced move over with squish over, always thought it sounded better for crowded bleacher seats and such.
I also like your approach to the first task. In so many stories Harry epically fights the dragon or uses some awesome mega-spell-o-doom or some such, but it always seems to be missing the flair. You managed to get that flair perfectly, better then a story with super Harry and his turn-the-dragon-into-a-sheep spell.
you also managed to get the whole rich and loving it vibe down perfectly. I saw the second Iron Man and the Harry you have reminds me of the way Tony just throws his money around and does things because he can. Its very cool.
One last thing, the dialouge is amazing. The conversations between the characters seem to have a life of their own, that random spontanutity that you get in real life but often times seems lacking in stories.
Jewelle posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 11:49pm
Good story. I am really enjoying Harry growing up, are the 2 youngest Weasleys going to get a clue? Hope to see your next update soon.
amulder posted a comment on Thursday 13th May 2010 11:48pm
fun and crazy and silly. Thanks!
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jesterod posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:17am