By Jeconais
Reviews
Riegert8 posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 2:16am
Good chapter
ralob posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 2:03am
Another awesome chapter. I love where you are going with it. All of your stuff is great, and this is no exception. Wonderful.
M.J.L. 337 posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 2:02am
I can't speak for others but when I read this, I can picture all of it in perfect clarity in my mind. To be honest, everything of yours that I have read does that for me as well. Even if you don't believe me, you are a fantastic author.
ED PLATT posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:59am
I must say i really enjoyed this chapter as always it was well written and entertainig i loved the interaction between harry and Gabrielle very nicely done.Harry is certainly getting and interesting group of friends together please continue to show this part of the story. Again great job look forward to reading more.
VelvetMouse posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:56am
My abdomen is sore from giggling the WHOLE WAY THROUGH THIS.
And that, perhaps, is the best compliment I can give. :)
(As I've said before, I read things because they entertain me. And this is sure entertaining the heck outta me! Can't wait to see more!)
coronal posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:56am
wow. this is just flippin' cool. i got nothing else to add.
RobF posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:53am
Great chapter. I loved the way Harry handled the first task, and can't wait to see what he has planned for the second.
Lokilos posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:50am
Nope, you were wrong. I loved this part just as much as the first part. The dragon thing was great and the interactions with Gabrielle are fun to read. Can't wait for the next chapter.
ToriCat posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:44am
This is absolutely awesome, as all your other works are!!!
Love it and can't wait for more updates from you!!!
XanDutch posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:42am
Lovely chapter again. I enjoyed reading it.
smoss posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:32am
Dude, we need more
bertovia posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:30am
Another great chapter. I really like this Harry, he's funny, devil-may-care, and there's none of the angst we usually see in him. I like how he's adopted Gabrielle as his little sister, and made his "employees" his friends. I like this story a lot, and look forward to the next chapter.
Tira Misu posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:29am
You win at life.
Sonicdale posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:29am
Awesome work. I've noticed the theme of growing up - especially Harry - in your work. This time around is a bit more nutty than some of your other work, and that is a good thing.
I'm a bit curious as to a few characters that havent shown up yet ... but I can wait. Good work.
JaCee2u posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:27am
Awesome. I like that you got away from the obvious choice of Millicent as the female bodyguard, and went for speed as opposed to brute force. I wasn't expecting it, I must admit.
Adding in Gabrielle as an "affection interest" was an amusing way to go about bringing her into the story as well.
I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.
JaCee
Shadalarion2 posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:23am
Why has no one collected the bounty on Snape yet? He is wearing the dark mark. Also since harry can speak to snakes why could he not speak to a dragon after all unless mistaken both snakes and dragons are reptiles.
Love the story, looking forward to more.
Ruth Smith posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:19am
Brilliant! Certainly not disappointed!
Chris15 posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:19am
Nice chapter.
Really enjoy this more mature Harry who is dealing with his problems but also having a good time with his friends. Usually when Harry grows up stories have him isolated and training full time, but you have him effectively using his resources and delegating most of the day to day operations and only handling new things.
Like the character of Christophe, is Harry planning a brewery, Vineyard, or something similar. Might be nice if their was a magical wine to go along with Fire Whiskey and Butterbeer.
The Gabrielle interaction was cute, though I do wonder who will be Harry's chosen hostage since he and Ron haven't made up.
More soon please.
Tiberianfest posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:18am
such a good story, i cant wait for the next chapter.
Natalie posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 2:25am