blackdog posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 3:34am

Yes this was absolutely terrible... so much so that I cannot wait for the next installment... patiently ;)

tony s posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 3:29am

LOL. I rather liked this chapter. I honestly don't think you've lost your touch...just changed it a bit. Write because you enjoy it. Leave the critiquing to us. Cuz thats what we enjoy. Good work, and i look forward to the next part of Perfect Slytherins.

Lordamnesia posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 3:26am

Great new chapter, I love the interaction between Gabrielle and Harry the best. It's very much like a family starved person like Harry to help a little adopted sister like that, and Gabrielle's response to what she see's as most likely her Knight in Shining Armor is perfect.

Can't see what your so down on about this story. Yes, it's not serious, yes it's a bit different then what you normally have written, but what I don't think you realize is that your quality of writing sure as hell hasn't gone down, and your dry humor works exceedingly well. Keep up the incredible work, cause I sure as hell look forward to the next chapter!

Zooxle posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 3:23am

Wow, it was only about 2 weeks (if that many) since HD chapter1 was released. I love this story. Gabrielle is so cute in there.
I see you are going to update Perfect Slytherins as well, so you get...... BONUS POINTS.......

Anyway just wanted to say, you work is great, update more frequently than many other authors and write fantastic stories. I for one can't wait to see what you produce next.

Zooxle

Professor_Chris posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 3:16am

Another great chapter... Wow is Dumbledore stupid or what??? Looking forward to seeing what happens.

ching965 posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 3:13am

You've proven once again why you're still royalty in the Harry Potter fandom. Great chapter. I loved the humor that's present in even the smallest things, such as the list of words to use more often. It's great to see Harry Potter growing up, but in a way very much different from any other story I've read so far, and I've read a lot. Thank you for a great deal of joy reading this. I'm looking forward to your next.

Wish you the best.

Ken Norton posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 3:12am

Very enjoyable. Loved the fax fight with the dragon.

James Barber posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 3:12am

Hey man I dont know why you thought this wouldnt be any good....I thought it was brilliant as the brits say....I like gabby and the way you did her and the reaction to her with his new friends was awesome....as well as hermione character and of course lisa squisher turpin.... but hey he hasnt lost his virginity yet now has he....! and as for the next installment will be the perfect slytherin chapter 3 definitely looking forward to that!!!

Hemotem posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 3:11am

Once again a great chapter. I look forward to seeing more of this in the future.



Hemotem

merlinger posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 3:01am

great update, I'm looking forward to chapter 3. Keep up the great work

Rob Clark posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 2:58am

Great part. Loved the interaction with both Gabby and Hermione. Also good to see him not forgive the backstabbing hypocrites.

Rob

ficbob posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 2:57am

Awesome. Fast pace and a very fun read. And Gabrielle is utterly adorable. And Fleur needs to add 'like' and 'totally' to be a Valley princess.
Hoping for more of your fics.
Thanks

darthloki posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 2:50am

Awesome!

And Gabrielle is so cute. I lvoe the way Harry interacts with her.

Rick D Gale posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 2:45am

This story is just too cute! Gabrielle really adds a great deal to the story and Harry's growing up. Let's hope some of it rubs off on Fleur before to long.

Harry is getting quite a group of faithful of students around him. This could be the beginning of not only getting the Hogwarts Houses together, but also the different schools.

I look forward to your next chapter.

rdgale

PS
I've already read all the stories you listed below. Each one worth while. But for my money, I'd probable go with 'Hope' again just to see more of Gabrielle - in a little different setting.

rdg

Jim_xinu posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 2:45am

This is loads of fun. I loved the bit about 'Use the word squished more often.' :-)

Thanks for sharing this with us.

amysds posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 2:45am

This was great. Love the name Squisher! Dobby cure is classic too. The way Harry dealt with the dragon was hilarious, haven't read a version like that before. Fred and George seem to be having fun but can you go over just how much money Harry has? Cause it seems like they are all just throwing it away in large amounts on a whim. Course most of the reasons DO seem logical but can you just say like he makes more in interest than he's spent or some such?

I'm real happy you didn't have Ron try and make up with Harry after the first task like usual. Fleur is staying her bitch self as well instead of the usual rapid turn around when she sees the error of her ways when one boy can fight the allure.

scribbler posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 2:44am

DAMN! THIS IS WHY YOU'VE BEEN MISSED SO MUCH. You are a fabulous writer who thoroughly entertains. I love your writing and was really happy to see this new chapter. I've savored it all night and can't wait for the next one. I'm kind of hoping for a Harry/Hermione/Gabrielle trio...but that's just me :)

Anyway, great, great job.

Regards,

Edmond

CootiePatootie posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 2:42am

OKAY, I don't know what *you* think is bad, but this is anything but bad. I like that you are showing us the negative of the putzes in Gryff house without belaboring the point. I like that you are ever expanding his circle of friends. I like that you've brought in Gabby (one of my favorite characterizations to see done well) but NOT made Fleur fall all over him. Anyway, I really am enjoying this.
Thanks a bunch for the great entertainment.

Cassie

motherjenjen posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 2:28am

Omg I love it love love love it!!!!!!!! Please update soon

Mistress of Potions posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 2:26am

Keep it coming. I don't see a lack of quality in this story. I think it might be even better because of your more relaxed attitude.