coo_eee_mate posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 5:20am

Forget about Fleur... go Gabrielle, let them wait a few years until she is older like your other story. Quick and light hearted is awesome for this story.

oneone posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 5:18am

nice work in this chapter, specially the dragon scene, i liked the psychological (?) view, . good to see this in a fic. I hope you continue writting this fic and if I have to wait a couple months for chapters as good as these first two, then i'll be patient.

good luck!

94caddy posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 5:14am

Great chapter. Loved Gabrielle. Cant wait for more.

Orion posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 5:10am

Great! Lots of fun to read. Thanks for the update.

Silly_Billy posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 5:08am

Once again - a lot of fun!

I had to read this, even though I had to go to work early.
Who needs money anyway?

LifeScientist posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 5:02am

Great job on this! Though the end of ch1 was awesome and I certainly hope that there will be more visits to that whether with kate's help or not, you did a great job with Harry in this chapter. Most definitely looking forward to more.
Thanks as always for your excellent efforts.
Matt

Oldwolf posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 4:55am

Another superb chapter.

Dumbledore getting a PR lesson? Unusual, but nice to see the old boy getting a reminder of the basics.

I wonder how poor Draco is feeling now that his former protection is likely considering the possibility of him being another paycheck?

All in all, as good a chapter as I've seen in a long time from anyone.

Kathleen posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 4:52am

Very interesting! Showmanship -- what a great idea! The Gabrielle connection is intriguing -- loved your Gabby bond story. Are you hinting at the possibility of that in the future?
Ps slytherins story update next? Hurray!

MadMax666 posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 4:47am

What's not to like about this chapter? I thought it was great! Especially how Harry 'defeated' the Dragon...it's not magic, it's all smoke and mirrors...oh, and ignore that barmy old man behind the curtain. He only thinks he's pulling the strings.

Great to see you writing again. Keep up the good work.

Ian Major posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 4:47am

Wow, for a chapter you think people would be disappointed in, this was great! If this is what you think will disappoint, please go ahead and keep disappointing me ;)

Anniejay posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 4:45am

Brilliant funny and I look forward to the next chapter

zac posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 4:35am

This is probably the best new story that I've read in a long time. Thank you so much for taking the time to enrich our lives with your incredible storytelling. I am always excited when I see that you have updated one of your stories.

Michael Foerster posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 4:19am

I bow to your genius! wow, if this is Hogwarts' Dawn, what's afterwards?
-- Beauxbatons High-noon, then Drumstrangs Dusk? --
Just kidding. You do your thing as the muse frolics for you, and I'll read, amazed by your extraordinary work.
Thanks for sharing.

zoroz posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 4:19am

awesome chapter, thanx for the update. please keep going this is one of the most original fic's ive read in a long while :)

nxfavre0965 posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 4:17am

ROTFLMAO!!!
Can I say that I really love your premise?
Hangover cure Dobby-wise apart, I really like your story with all its contrasts. Sometimes, the way Harry acts looks like a mobster, a Don, and then in the phrase or paragraph, you have him squeaking in a new situation waaaayyyy out of his comfort zone :D
Now I'm off to chapter 2!
Hey, when's the next one coming out?

Nathalie

patrick1 posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 4:16am

I rather enjoy this style of story, its a lot of fun to read. keep up the good work.

Celevon posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 4:00am

Another excellent chapter! Thanks!

noylj posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 3:55am

What good is Kate if she isn't going to be "hands on?"
I mean, Harry might as well read a book and skip all the tension and frustration.
Thanks for keeping MoRon out of things, at least so far. A fic without MoRon or Mollywobbles is a story with a leg up on the others...

Aote77 posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 3:50am

Nice, another great chapter. I look forward to future ones.

Aote77

millie johanson posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 3:44am

Hello,
I am a real H&G fan and just finished your This is in the "Drabbles and Ideas" Second Time Around I hope some day you will add to it.
but back to this story just wanted you to know I am a fan of your stories.
I like the was the detailes that the twins have put into helping Harry and the people who wanted to help and for different reasons.
Good luck with it and all you write.