HopelessFan posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 7:34am

*happy grin* i see the plan.. set us up for disappointment and have us crazy happy when its still at the same level as before.
I'm on to you.. :-p

Dude, face it. you are a good writer. I mean, I'm sure you COULD write crap if you really tried, but so far I've never read a story by you that I didn't like.

*bounces happily on his chair* MORE! MORE!

katrina posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 7:30am

I like this story. I would like to hear from Ron and Ginny a bit mouthing off and being slapped down. Trouble is I am now trying to think of names that rhyme with Smasher and Nasher etc.

Alex Mcpherson posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 7:27am

And leave us high and dry for ages?

Awe...
This is the first HP non-crossover fic I've began to read in a long while, where I've gotten past and continue to read beyond the first 2,000 words.

firetown posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 7:17am

another brilliant piece of work, looking forward tomore of your stories

msgupy posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 7:08am

Cool. Thanks kindly. Look forward to the next chapter. Thanks also for the recommendations, but I've read them all.

sacr posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 6:58am

Thanks! I haven't read such an amusing story for a long time. Great writing.

Davideg posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 6:53am

i love this thank you for sharing please continue to update a.s.a.l.a.

Innortal posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 6:51am

I must say, great work, great detail, and great defining the world to fit it.

Darkon posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 6:48am

Hmm the only thing I'm disappointed about is that it ended other than that great chapter. Can't wait for the next one. Harry Potter wit Tony Stark's personality and resources what a great idea you had. Got to wonder if you'll have someone who is like Pepper Potts the worlds highest paid personal assistant Don't call her a secretary or she'll tear your spleen out through your nose or is that who Hermione is?

timt020 posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 6:44am

One of the best storys I have read in a long time, Please update soon.

TheHard posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 6:31am

Nice chap! I've never read a story where Harry treatens with going to Beauxbatons, and actually doing it! that will be something new, for me at least :)

Manuel Urrecha posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 6:28am

Some authors have good ideas but when it comes to put them down into words, the story suffers and comes up childish or rushed, your style is just right, I'm enjoying this story greatly and I'm looking forward to the next chapter, keep the good work!

bgoldnyxnet posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 6:28am

Hah! Another good chapter. As I said about chapter 1: it's just a fanfic, everything gets out of Harry's way -- but it's sure a lot of fun.

lord_silver posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 6:07am

Hey great chapter!


Don't worry I enjoyed it. Fleur did act like a real brat in the books & its good that you have show her like that. Most others try to show her a misunderstood & unapproachable because of her part veela hritage.


Really liked little Gabrielle. Would have loved a scene with Kate!

Loved the showmanship of the first task & looking forward to what you have planned for the second task as well as the who arry takes to the yule ball.

Thanks for the chapter & I hope you post this story next.

Shanami posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 5:45am

I like it. It's completely over the top, completely ridiculous and greatly funny. I always like a story where Harry gets a backbone, but very few of them are quite this amusing.

Looking forward to more.

But, as I dabble in writing myself, I realize that mindless praise is well... mindless. So, a tiny bit of criticism based on the only thing I think could use a bit of improvement (in other words, I think this story is well written and in general with someone as prolific as you are, there isn't going to be much obviously wrong... but I digress). I like the pace, I really do. It is fast and engaging. And, for someone like me, who is very well aware of the Harry Potter timeline *and* has a lot of experience reading fanfiction, it's great. However, I get the feeling that you're passing great bits of time without making the reader cognizant of that fact. Again, for someone that is used to this sort of thing, it isn't that big of a deal. But, you might consider dropping just a few more hints about the amount of time that things are taking. It might make things just that much more clear.

Netap posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 5:31am

Like it? absolutely not?... I love it!!!!
Smashing chapter (or should it be squishing?) I'm really entranced with the plot and characterization in this fic, very well done!

Killedbykarma posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 5:30am

See I thought this was just as good as the first chapter, almost entirely due to the Gabrielle interactions. xD

W Mayberry posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 5:24am

Have to say I am enjoying this tale. It has quite a few moments of laughter. Much needed after a long day. Hope life let's you continue it and your other tales soon.

joeBob posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 5:21am

Excellent chapter; thanks!

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Several good laughs, like:
"Use the word squished more often in general conversation."
LOL!

"repeating himself redundantly"
Boo! Hiss!

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'Course, you had to go and ruin a perfect thing by using *$&#@! French. I ran Google Translate on all the phrases and the result came back: "Pretentious". ;-)

Wolf470 posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 5:20am

I LIKE this story. With Harry being more pro-active, he's doing much better. Please continue as able. No I don't think that this chapter was boring so please don't put yourself down.