liquidfyre posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 2:11pm

Funny as heck chapter. Keep writing please. I know you do this for your entertainment, but I just want to let you know that I appreciate you sharing it with us. I have said it before and I will say it again. The stuff you consider poor quality is still 10 times better than the majority of fan fiction out there.

lucifael75 posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 2:11pm

A most excellent story that is continuing to be a fun read.

piad2691 posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 2:03pm

Forget "Perfect Slytherins" - you really must post the next chapter of "Hogwarts ´Dawn" forth with ?! It is bloddy funny (Can ´t spell hil...??)
It is good 2 se you are still doing fanfiction. You have been one of my favorite since I began reading ff 4 or 5 years ago. But as I wrote at the beginning of this review, next chappie PLEASE. Greetings from DK.

snezhok posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:54pm

I simply adore this chapter.Its drive made me dance at the computer.Especially little Gabrielle.
It is refreshing to see Fleur not being in the center of author`s attention, to see her as a spoilt unpleasant teenager, to meet people whose beauty far outshine her attractiveness.We all know that she is not a bad person, but you get what you sow.
And the names of Harry`s bodyguard`s! Squisher indeed.

KingDark posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:51pm

I liked it a lot. Very funny but then that is what you get for an over-the-top story like this eh?

Good work and keep it up!

alaine1910 posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:45pm

Wow this is great really enjoying this story more ASAP please

BJH posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:37pm

Hmm, if Hermione is the thing Victor misses most, Cho the thing for Cedric, you will have Fleur and Harry both vying for Gabrielle. I wonder who will win and what the other one will have to rescue?

I still love the light-hearted approach. An easily read and thuroughly enjoyed chapter.

BJH

Banner posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:36pm

I *like* a strong smart Harry. Especially one who makes his points without cruelty, and with such style!

Sarah5 posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:18pm

A story with shades of seriousness and humor it balances the tragedy and angst filled stories. How did Fred and George get the Goblins to reveal anything? Why doesn't Harry have Family Grimoire or perhaps portraits that could help or teach? Can Sirius get a mind healer he is surely bipolar and he needs to recover from prison. Your hang over cure is funny.

rune1806 posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:11pm

I am having a great time reading your tale. I love how Harry just forgets there are rules and F&G just keep spending his cash.

token posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 1:00pm

This, like all of your work, is beyond excellent. I egerly look forward ot another update of this fic in particular. It's caught my imagination and won't let go now. :)

mjbrown268 posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 12:50pm

Really liked this chapter. Love the story overall so far.

I can't wait to read about the ball coming up!

Question: Why haven't Fred and George tried investigating who entered Harry into the tournament? I would think that it would have been a priority.

axu posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 12:41pm

"I suspect some people will be disappointed with this chapter"

I think not. This is one of the funnest stories I've read in a while. No only is there a fair amount of originality, it also has a healthy dose of flair/pizazz/sass/je-ne-sais-quoi (whatever you call it). In other words, a great idea well-executed.

I personally can't wait for the next chapter. Please do keep going!

A.

miguel spain posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 12:40pm

Not bad and looks like things are getting better for Harry but who knows what is going to happen in the future anyway keep writing and please update soon see ya.

Dragen posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 12:37pm

great wor mate, I can't wait to see what you have planned next, keep up the great work and update soon, as I would like to see what you have planned next.

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 12:31pm

Harry is going to have Hoggy Warty thoroughly stood on its ear before his fourth year is up. He's embarrassing Snape, embarrassing Dumbles, being a very Ravenclaw Gryffindor, and out-braining those very same Claws.

felawred posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 12:16pm

I loved Harry's show. lol

Tumshie posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 12:07pm

Loving it, especially the interaction with Gabrielle.

Ian Quest posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 11:48am

Thoroughly enjoying this; it's a great deal of fun, without going completely overboard into Demigod!Harry land. Looking forward to more; keep up the great work! :)

jackson posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 11:13am

i'm dissapointed. i actually thought you were better than what i'm seeing in this story. namely the ron/ginny bashing. now i know you can say it's only a little bit, and doesn't really effect the story. but honestly? it's weak. i don't even like ginny, but i know that at this point she had nothing to do with harry, she never badmouthed him and was not a psycho stalker as the twins put it. she didn't even need to be mentioned in this story yet you felt the need to include her in this story and in a negative light as if to make sure there is no chance of her getting with harry. Jenconais, it's things like that that bring an otherwise fun story down, i don't want to read about Ginny and Ron, and i don't really want to read another biased fanon exaggerated depiction of the characters bashing on harry and acting like evil twats.

you can and have done so much better before, why sink to this now?