By Jeconais
Reviews
NeoBahamutZero posted a comment on Thursday 10th February 2011 1:33am
I'm really enjoying the story so far. Rarely in a story do I see Harry actually hire bodyguards and the ones in this story actually help bring more humor to the story when they interact with Harry. Harry's attitude is something that I would actually enjoy reading instead of the angsty vibe we get in most stories. A clear headed confident Harry is vastly more entertaining than a depressed selfless Harry. He actually stands up for himself and doesn't really let anyone push him around. It was a refreshing read from all the normal fics I come across and I am eagerly looking forward to reading more.
FrankyJ posted a comment on Monday 7th February 2011 4:33am
This is a good story I look forward to any updates you write.
-FrankyJ
Neverwill posted a comment on Sunday 30th January 2011 10:22pm
I found this through a rec someone posted at Imaginings and found it very enjoyable. I'm looking forward to your next update.
krushii posted a comment on Tuesday 25th January 2011 2:32am
so far i love this story, please keep it comming!
coolboy55 posted a comment on Saturday 22nd January 2011 5:08am
A very good fic so far. I liked the accelerated time dilation learning towards the end. Annie sounds nice and I hope she gets her break with Harry's help. It would be great if Fleur could get over herself and hook up with Harry. Thanks for sharing.
sabitha posted a comment on Tuesday 18th January 2011 11:30pm
You have a really good story so far with lots of potential. I like the idea of a more mature Harry and I think it offers a lot more opportunities. The only thing I can say is please update soon!
kyoshi posted a comment on Tuesday 18th January 2011 9:30pm
This is an absolutely wonderful story. I love seeing Harry being sophisticated and debenoir. I enjoy seeing Harry playing the field and I hope you don't match him up to soon with Fleur. I'd like to see her jealous and not getting her own way and I would like to see the mature Harry going out with lots of women.
dave gerecke posted a comment on Tuesday 18th January 2011 6:20am
My apologies for not reviewing earlier, but here in Australia we have been a bit busy, - anyone want some water?
Thank you for the Christmas present, I really enjoyed the new chapter and look forward to more.
I am very interested in the 2nd trial and the Ball where the reaction to Kate should be something to see.
dave
Evyominiue posted a comment on Sunday 16th January 2011 5:02pm
I love it. Keep up the good work
Nogoalielikeme posted a comment on Sunday 16th January 2011 1:47am
I love this story and can't wait to read the next chapter.
lowesrl@gmail.com posted a comment on Saturday 15th January 2011 6:52pm
Very good and humorus story. I enjoyed that I caught no spelling or grammar mistakes that I remmember. Keep up the good work.
kcgx23 posted a comment on Wednesday 12th January 2011 3:28am
Great chapter, I love Harry's interaction with Gabrielle. And how he ignores Fleur. I also can't wait to read everyone's reaction to Kate.
xHawke posted a comment on Tuesday 11th January 2011 4:32pm
Love the story... One thing....the professors should be noticing Harry's new physique more that they are. I think it kinda got glossed over there. Harry is really progressing fast, and the extra time in the RoR was a really nice touch.
coronal posted a comment on Monday 10th January 2011 7:07pm
I feel the need to reiterate that this story is just full of awesome, no ifs ands or buts.
maddog2 posted a comment on Monday 10th January 2011 5:47pm
This chapter was a enjoyable read and a good solid effort. Looking forward to more in the future.
Machelle posted a comment on Sunday 9th January 2011 1:58am
Wonderful update. I adore the relationship between Harry and Gabrielle and love that you haven't forgotten Hermione's relationship with him along the way. Lisa is the perfect foil for the male bodyguards and, though we saw her only a little this chapter, it was clear that she will be a leader in Harry's security force. I didn't notice the "showing" until I read it in your author's notes. The story continues to move forward without hiccups or unwieldy time changes. I wonder though if Hogwarts will willingly allow Harry go since it is obvious she has a soft spot for him. Eagerly looking forward to the next installment.
Patches posted a comment on Thursday 6th January 2011 7:31pm
This is a really good chapter. I know you messed with time, etc. to grow Harry up quickly. I like the changes in him. Kate is especially skilled in what she has done with him. I like a naughty Harry! I like the way he works with Gabrielle. It shows his loving big brother side. I'm glad Michael is so open with Harry. The way Harry dealt with Fleur's attitude at the dinner Harry didn't eat was excellent. She needs a few lessons in how to treat people she feels are her inferiors. Thanks for writing and I look forward to more. pms
Memory King posted a comment on Tuesday 4th January 2011 9:03pm
Quite enjoyable chapter, especially the second half of it. It's always nice to read a self-assured Harry, and I've high hopes for interesting material later in this story.
Thanks for the update, and have a happy new year!
gregstar posted a comment on Monday 3rd January 2011 1:03am
Superb. I am so glad that you updated this story once again as, just as with 'this means war', 'hope' and 'White knight, grey queen', I find myself thoroughly enthralled with the story and i love how you are portraying Harry. I think I'll need to re read this from the start.
I found this update at 12.30am and, despite being knackered, I just had to stay up and give it a proper read. Thanks very much.
midevildle posted a comment on Saturday 12th February 2011 8:44am